The Mark of Innocence: Chapter 9 Pg 108

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manognasai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

A very promising,interesting start...I loved it!Update soon...😃

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: manognasai
A very promising,interesting start...I loved it!Update soon...😃

Thank you so much.

Soon...no time line to how soon it will be 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

interesting

update soon😊

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Aashka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

OMG...! Beautiful... really really really awesome...!! i mean it sounds so innocent...! And quiet emotional...! cant really wait for it to start...!! it truly sounds amazing...!

you had mentioned 5 children in starting and then said that the 2 were taken by their extended families... are they going to be somehow related...? i dont why but just popped up in my mind...!

i juz cant wait for it to start...! It sounds so interesting...

update soon...!

aashka

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: asyafreva
OMG...! Beautiful... really really really awesome...!! i mean it sounds so innocent...! And quiet emotional...! cant really wait for it to start...!! it truly sounds amazing...!

you had mentioned 5 children in starting and then said that the 2 were taken by their extended families... are they going to be somehow related...? i dont why but just popped up in my mind...!

i juz cant wait for it to start...! It sounds so interesting...

update soon...!

aashka

Thank you so much

No they have no relation, it was just to make it sound a little realistic, that five children were orphaned compared to just Zoya, Asad and Najma

Lots of love

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jasminerose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Where do you get such amazing ideas from? It is such a promising story. Poor kids, I feel sad for them but it ll be great to see them always there for each other. I can actually imagine them as little ones and how cute they would be.

Now plz finish ur other ff asap and continue this. In both ways ur greedy readers will be satisfied.😊😃

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sasir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

really interesting n heart-touching too.

loved it. plzzz pm me

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: jasminerose
Where do you get such amazing ideas from? It is such a promising story. Poor kids, I feel sad for them but it ll be great to see them always there for each other. I can actually imagine them as little ones and how cute they would be.
Now plz finish ur other ff asap and continue this. In both ways ur greedy readers will be satisfied.😊😃

Lol

Thank you Jasmine

I will tell you why I came up with this idea..but not just yet as it will give it away before I have even begun

😊

Edited by Saima-Syed - 11 years ago