The Mark of Innocence: Chapter 9 Pg 108

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

great concept...😊 waiting eagerly for this one too...😛

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vinita459

@vinita459

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Hi Saima

New ff looks really promising. Sad we will have to wait long time for another update.

Always looking forward to your updates. :)

Love,

Vinita

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KReyAS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

sad for asya and nazma

nice updt

cont soon

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Anitha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Wow its a promising start di.. Interesting start...👏
Its sound like very innocence...
Excited to read ur new fabulous work di..
Thanks for the pm di 🤗

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Saima Beautiful concept that you have here...

This story already has my attention n I will wait eagery for you to write further here. I know we have to wait till UL or TCL end. Will wait...

Please pm me when you update here.

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Applef

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

that was really good...

poor kids..

all alone at that age..

love zoya-najma bonding...❤️

zoya taking care of najma..

asad taking care of both the girls...

update soon..

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anopama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

cant wait to read
big fan of ur ff

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jazsidhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Hey tis is interesting...
Its superb...
Totally eagerly waiting for the next part...
Thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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fanraya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Wow awesome start,love it.it is so painful to read kids loosing their parents at such a you age
Beautiful start, excited for next chapter.

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sarbrathan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#80

This is beautiful but I'm confused... would you mind adding a character sketch?

PM for updates if you can. This is an AsYa story right? Like they won't become sibling-like? Because that would be incestous if they get together after that like Zoya OUAT called Asad "bhai" or any other variation of brother.