AsYa FF ~ Bol Na Halke Halke *Complete* - Page 137

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

Last... ummm... not a shock because it was supposed to be a 10 chapter story

This chapter was really romantic... a bit too romantic for me to comment on properly

you know na that I love romance but sometimes I go all 'red' at some parts

Finding gifs for this chapter is really difficult so I dropped the idea

Just quoting my fav lines here

"Mr. Khan! I can walk.", she said trying to get out of his hold.

"But I want to hold you!", he replied and walked her. She smiled.


Asad moved her hair aside and nuzzled her ear. Zoya took in a sharp breath, which Asad had indeed heard. He rubbed his nose from her hair to her neck, and Zoya turned away, giving Asad more access to her milky neck. Asad nuzzled her neck and Zoya felt butterflies in her tummy.


"Can we sleep for a while?", she asked.

"Of course you can jaan!", he replied.

"Not me.. We! I want to sleep with you in your arms!", she confessed.


"Zoya! We have all our lives to fulfil every desire of each other. Be it physical, emotional and every other material and immaterial desire, we have our entire lives to each other.", he replied.

"And a baby's responsibility.", she replied with a pout.

"Our baby's responsibility!", he replied.




I know you can't comment longish so ummm... Thank you! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
So sad 😭U said 3 more chapters
But that's ok what more can u ask for they r happy and already confessed
Just waiting on the arrival of the little one
It was a very romantic updates
His note was beautiful
Him taking her to their room just wanting to hold her
His snuggling up to her and telling her every chance he got how much he loved her
Oh the make out section hawwt him pulling a full stop
Her wanting to sleep in his arms
And apologizing that she can't satisfy his desire and him assuring her they have their entire life
Him being naughty and telling will leave baby with dilshad and Najma and they will take care of each other
Over all a beautiful ending waiting for epi
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the PM. Loved the update. Awesome story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it read it all at once thanx for the pm and waiting for the epilogue 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice story
glad asad got zoya back into his life
he made her realise his love for her
he surely was so patient with her
he had to give her time after what all had happened

dilshad and najma were so supporting
so happy that they are again
a happy and full family

nice story
must say
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you so much all you lovely people! Epilogue coming soon! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

😳
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Posted: 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
The epilogue was just so beautiful

I'll miss this story a lot

I loved the way Asad cared so much for Zoya

They shared such a strong bond

Wat love it was

Just picture perfect

"Asad.. we loved each other even before we could realize it. That night was not a mistake. It was our love that we showered on each other when we were not in our senses.", she replied.

This line was the best... It blew my heart away ❤️



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Edited by --Mahima-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago





You made me relive one of the most amazing sequence in the show through this story

I feel in love with the pink colour cause of this story

I'll miss this story like anything

It was just superb

I totally enjoyed reading it

p.s. below post for more comments


Edited by --Mahima-- - 11 years ago

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