AsYa FF ~ Bol Na Halke Halke *Complete* - Page 135

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

Umm... so I have 2 reserves here... well you know me so well... I needed 2 only...

ok... pointers first of course

1) case due to business stuff... this is perfect... at least there won't be so much drama

Ans) Yes! 😆

2) relief... waise bhi gudiya factory and uska raaz is so confusing

Ans) I know right!

3) thank god... this means that Asad did not slap Zoya... yay

Ans) Yes! He didn't! 😃

4) I like this a lot... no baggage on Zoya... and I love Zeenat and Zoya bond

Ans) Yes! No baggage at all! 😳

5) no billi... this is the best thing

Ans) TRUE! 🥳

6) does she have to like be there?

Ans) She never really existed.. God knows why I put this pointer! 🤣

7) personal benefits... I still can't hate Rashid though

Ans) I can't hate him either! 😛

8) Dilshad is an epitome of love and the perfect mother ever

Ans) Yes.. She is a loving mother! 🤗

9) Asad and Ayaan bond is one of the favourite things in the show

Ans) Me too! 😉

10) well some readers need pointers so you had no choice obviously... though I knew most of the things

Ans) Coz it's you! ❤️

comment on chapter 5 on the next post

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

Chp 5 was a really sad one... so many tears... Even I had tears while reading it... so beautifully written it was... heart touching truly

"Allah ka shukar hai aap nahi gayi!", said the person who sat beside her.

Zoya opened her eyes in shock and looked up at Asad who sat there next to her with blood red eyes and a tear stricken face.

I loved this scene a lot... the park scene was so beautifully written... Zoya worrying about her child and agreeing to Asad's request was so perfect... I totally loved this one...

"Ammi! Main Zoya se nikaah karna chahta hoon!", announced Asad. All the three ladies looked at him in shock.

"WHAT?", shrieked Zoya.

"Sach mein?", squealed Dilshad in delight.

"I'm sooo happy bhaijaan!", squealed a super excited Najma.

"Aap pagal ho gaye hain Mr Khan?", asked Zoya in shock and confusion.

Everyone's reaction was so different... this part was a delight to read... I am glad that Zoya refused to marry Asad... Asad is really feeling guilty

"Par Mr. Khan mujhse mohabbat nahi karte hain phupi. Wo sirf meri pregnancy ki wajah se mujhse nikaah kar rahe hain, aur ye main nahi chahti!", replied Zoya.

Zoya and Dilshad scene was epic... I loved the whole conversation... Dilshad surely is one of the best characters in Qubool Hai

Asad closed his eyes in guilt as tears trickled down his cheek.

I loved the way Asad is repenting and is worried about Zoya. Also the way Dilshad spoke sternly to Asad was just amazing... best part is that the nikah is tomorrow

Well this surely will be interesting to read with you writing and Dilshad playing Cupid... I am in love with BOL NA HALKE HALKE

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

Qubool Hai

Qubool Hai

Qubool Hai

This episode starts at such a beautiful note... the nikah 😊

The honey dew voice echoed in his ears as he sat on the opposite side of the parda looking at his bride decked in a red lehenga choli looking ever so breathe taking. But something was amiss! Her smile. The dimpled smile on her beautiful face was missing!

Asad missed her smile... of course her dimpled smile... it was something he was in love with... he surely will do anything to bring it back

"Kya baat hai bhaijaan? Aapne iss musibat se itni jaldi mein kyun shaadi karli?", asked Ayaan with a glint of mischief in his eyes.

"Ayaan!", glared Asad.

I loved the way Ayaan teased Asad... I loved the way he still called Zoya as Mona... that scene was so cute... I totally loved it... awesome work by you...

He sighed and walked over to the small window of her room.

"How I wish she was locked in my room. Atleast I could have got in from the window. This window is so small!", he complained to himself.

Ek toh bachara confused hai... why Zoya is not in his room... next Zoya locked the door,,, then she gave him attitude when he entered... but she smiled internally and he was oblivious to it

"Zoya! This baby is equally mine so I have all the rights to take care of my baby and my wife!", he said in a tone of authority.

I loved this authority tone of Asad... it suits him a lot... of course Zoya is not ready to listen to him but then Asad hasn't released his feelings too

"Ya allah! Main Zoya ko aise nahi dekh sakta! Allah mujhe meri Zoya waapas kar do. Main janaab Rashid Ahmed Khan ki tarah nahi banna chahta. Main achha shauhar aur ek achha baap banna chahta hoon. Main apni biwi aur bacche ko duniya ki saari khushiyaan dena chahta hoon! Itni mohabbat dena chahta hoon ki kuch hafte pehle ki baatein Zoya humesha ke liye bhool jaaye!", he prayed.

Such a heart touching prayer by Asad followed by a beautiful flashback... this part of the story was so picture perfect... my heart went out for Asad... ❤️

"Main Zoya se mohabbat karta hoon! Aur main unhe ye bata kar rahunga!", he promised himself.

Finally Asad has realised that he is in love... yipee

Finally the 'BOL NA HALKE HALKE' night is taking its effect...

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

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Originally posted by: --Mahima--

New thread is finally here!!

I am enjoying the story a lot

This story is surely worth a read thousand times over

Mina di... you and everything about you is perfect

I love you loads

I love you 1...2...3... raised to infinity

I totally love you big sista 🤗

I so wanted to consolidate all my comments but next time I surely will

P.S. scroll down for chp 7 comments

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

This is the last one that I am doing tonight... and this chapter is my favourite so far... in fact one of the best chapters you have ever written in the history of any couple... I am out of words to describe it... I am gonna have AsYalicious dreams tonight for sure... This chapter has made me blush like anything that I feel like falling in love... Every part and word of it was just the best... You have done a miracle with the 26 alphabets of the english language...

Asad taking care of Zoya so lovingly made my heart beat rise

It brought a 1000 watt smile on my face

Speaking to the baby... pulling the chair... walking with her as she went... just so sweet, cute and adorable it was

The kiss in front of Dilshad and Najma came as a surprise to me and then Asad huskily speaking into her ear... omg... omg... omg...

I am glad that nobody saw me when I read that part cause I was behaving like a love struck teenager as I read it

I am out of words for this chapter... You know na how much I love your OS 'THE BLUE UMBRELLA'... well this chapter beats that too

Need I say more?

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

chapter 8 was just so cute and romantic

"I love you Zoya! I've loved you from the very first day I laid my eyes on you at the mazaar. I fought with my feelings because I believed that love makes a man weak. Also because my own father could never love my mother the way she deserved. I was scared of commitment!", he said.

the confession was so beautiful... so simple yet to die for... Asad's words were so honest... too bad Zoya didn't forgive him

"Mr. Khan!", she whined.

Asad walked in. She flung her arms around his neck and buried her face into his chest and sobbed.

"Zoya! Aap ro kyun rahi hain? Kya hua?", he asked lovingly caressing her wet hair.

this scene was a surprise to me... Zoya was so comfortable with Asad... Asad so concerned about Zoya

"AAP HAS RAHE HAIN MUJHPAR? GO TO HELL MR. KHAN! I DON'T WANT TO SPEAK TO YOU!", she yelled as she picked her scattered clothes one by one and threw it at him.

He chuckled and caught her clothes one by one and kept them back on the bed. He quickly got hold of her and hugged her. She struggled in his grip as he held her in a firm grip.

Zoya in Asad's clothes... just wow... a must see sight for sure... this scene was just something which is common i.e. Zoya gaining weight but it was so uniquely portrayed... hats off to you

She dropped a kiss on his adam's apple and snuggled back in. On the other hand, Asad stood still, in shock as he felt her lips against his adam's apple but smiled in satisfaction.

Zoya deciding to shift the rooms... that was the best... I can see the progress for sure...

Originally posted by: teju_KaBhi

then write them in colors so that i can skip that part , abhi 16 ki nahi hu cant read stuff like this 😳

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA

Superb...
Phenomenal...
And awesome update 👏
Beautifully written ...
Loved every bit of it... 😊
Zoya completed 7 months of her pregnancy and asad handle all her mood swings..such a caring and adorable husband she has..
Love the way he said "I want to hold u" indeed asad is the best husband 😳
Zoya caressing her baby bump and asad hugged her from back 😳 😳
Asya are so hot and passionate 😳
Jahapanah six packs 😆
They slept cuddling with eachother 😳
Finally they got the love they deserve...
Wonderful story... 👏
Its a treat to read ur ss Mrinalini... 👏
Waiting for epilogue which has lots of moments b/w asya and their kid..