AsYa FF ~ Bol Na Halke Halke *Complete* - Page 134

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

tis is very lovely...

amazing n fabulous...
luv it...
beautifully written...
thx fr the pm...


Thanks so much! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: teju_KaBhi


umm its very simple , u know we want to read about baby and there cute lil family moments.😃


Some people want mature stuff! 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-


Some people want mature stuff! 😕


then write them in colors so that i can skip that part , abhi 16 ki nahi hu cant read stuff like this 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mahima--









Mina Di ❤️

Another story from you!

Another something on AsYa from you!

Another continuation track!

Another dedication to me!

Another piece of brilliance by you!

Another beautiful banner for me to drool on!

Another work for me to spam!

But the thing that is new is the pink and grey colour!

The thing that is new is that your way of writing is better than ever!

The thing that is new is that I have feeling that this will be your best piece of work!

More new stuff I am sure I'll discover as I read it!

p.s. below post for more comments




You always surprise me with you comments and I love it! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mahima--







You have made me relive one of the most amazing sequence in the show

You have made me fall in love with the song all over again

I have become an AsYa fan again

This sequence was one of the most beautiful and important in the show

I am so looking forward to the twist that you have added

Love you heaps

I know that this will be a roller coaster ride and I am ready to throw my hands up in the air and shout in joy







I love the siggies you have used in the comments! Thank you so much love for all the appreciation! ❤️
I love you so much kid sista! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

Mina Di! 🤗




Finally I get an update 🥳

An update after ages!

God knows how much I missed your works!

I am so addicted to them that this seemed shorter than a drabble for me 😳

But I am not going to complain at all 😃

Cause something is better than nothing 😉



Coming to the update... 😊

It was perfect 👍🏼

The words and reactions suited their persona completely ⭐️

Asad admiring Zoya when he woke up as he remembered nothing

Zoya crying as reality struck her

Asad not putting the entire blame on Zoya and acknowledging his fault

Zoya being ashamed of what she had done

Asad asking Zoya to forget all this

Zoya wondering how she can ever let it go

Asad and Zoya ignoring each other

And finally the *crash*

A cliff hanger for many but not for me and few of the readers who know you well

Please continue as soon as you get time

And keep writing something or the other



Loads of love ❤️

your baby sis

Mahi


Hahaha.. shorter than a drabble? 😆

I love you baby! ❤️ Thank you! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

The HP siggie in the end was the best

Dhoni scene... Asad and his OCD... Zoya missing dinner... Asad worried about Zoya going to US... this update was superb

Very well explained... brilliant... clapping


I love all your characters in your story... you make me even love characters that I hate in the serial

and that makes you a fantastic writer


You have made me fall in love with QH again

love you loads

hugs and kisses

and tell me that you'll update soon




I know! 🤣 I really don't care! 🤣

Thank you thank you thank you! 😳

Fall in love with QH? Nah! 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

Read it and was delighted



I was planning of selecting my fav dialogues but that didn't turn out as planned cause almost every scene was superb

When I had heard this concept... I had not anticipated this

It is so amazing

So unique

So different


This story is different from the usual

The way Asad found out that Zoya is pregnant was something which no reader would have expected

Zoya's reaction about Asad knowing was so calm but inside she was dying

The way Zoya brushed everything aside was superb



dieing for the next update now

page 70+... as if that is a challenge for me


but 70 likes... its 66 already

Yay


luv u Mina Di





Awww.. Thanks bacha! 🤗
Really means alot! 😳
I'm glad you liked this chapter.. coz it was a tough one to write! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

I am finally undeserving chapter 4... its been a while since I read BNHH... I have missed this story a lot... 😊



He saw Zoya walk out of the door with her bag. He stood there still unable to register what was happening. A minute later he got out of his trance and he ran to the door to find the taxi drive away.

This scene was so heart touching... Zoya didn't want to leave and Asad couldn't understand how suddenly his world had turned upside down 😭


Asad shut his eyes and remembered the conversation he had with his Zoya a while ago, just before she left his house.

Asad is felling guilty... I am sure he'll fix everything... It's not too late yet... I hate to see the heart broken Asad 😔



Asad drove to the airport... I am sure he jumped many signals on the way... Lets hope he reaches on time 🤔

"Please officer, mujhe jaane dijiye.. Meri biwi pregnant hai aur wo ghar chhod kar chali gayi hai! Let me just go till the counter. I really need to stop her. Agar aap chahe to mere saath chal sakte hain!", he requested.

Asad said that Zoya is his wife came as a pure shock to me but his desperation won my heart 😳

Zoya didn't check-in... wow... that's surprising but great too... Asad still has a chance 😊



Asad praying in the dargah... one of the best scenes ever... his pray made me fall in love with him again ❤️

He looked up again and saw in the further corner of the prayer hall, a blurred image due to his tear-filled eyes, a girl sitting along with her bag who was getting up.

Lets hope that the girl Asad saw was Zoya only



I love you so much... yes raised to infinity 🤗


I loved those scenes that you quoted. The dargah scene was my favourite too! ❤️

I love you too... raised to infinity to the power 'n' ❤️ ❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
Please don't comment here anymore! 😳

Please go to the Next Thread: Thread #2
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago

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