AsYa FF ~ Bol Na Halke Halke *Complete* - Page 113

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Posted: 11 years ago

ZGH - Pak Drama 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-


LOL Yeah! 😆

Mere mood pe depend karta hai ke dessert khana hai ya nahi khana! 😉


Arrehh...aap mat khao...bas humein khilao! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update
oh asad ur desires wake up by ur wife's kiss
he got his clothes for her she would be so cute in them
told his ammi about the move sh is happy
so he comfort her again and left to buy her clothes
najma and dilshad is fun feeding zoya
oh she hides behind asad when he returns
and he wants to show her what he bought
she knocks at his door he tells he she dont have to
and he dont want her to change for anyone she is perfect
oh she confessed to him and he says he knows
she fake anger and say she will never say again and he says
he can hear it all the time
oh they kiseed their first intimacy after marriage
continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
I am planning to start undeserving on this today itself... lets see how many chapters I cover... I'll post the comments here too as there are loads of chapters
Chapter 3 was where I had last left
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am finally undeserving chapter 4... its been a while since I read BNHH... I have missed this story a lot... 😊


He saw Zoya walk out of the door with her bag. He stood there still unable to register what was happening. A minute later he got out of his trance and he ran to the door to find the taxi drive away.

This scene was so heart touching... Zoya didn't want to leave and Asad couldn't understand how suddenly his world had turned upside down 😭


Asad shut his eyes and remembered the conversation he had with his Zoya a while ago, just before she left his house.

Asad is felling guilty... I am sure he'll fix everything... It's not too late yet... I hate to see the heart broken Asad 😔



Asad drove to the airport... I am sure he jumped many signals on the way... Lets hope he reaches on time 🤔

"Please officer, mujhe jaane dijiye.. Meri biwi pregnant hai aur wo ghar chhod kar chali gayi hai! Let me just go till the counter. I really need to stop her. Agar aap chahe to mere saath chal sakte hain!", he requested.

Asad said that Zoya is his wife came as a pure shock to me but his desperation won my heart 😳

Zoya didn't check-in... wow... that's surprising but great too... Asad still has a chance 😊



Asad praying in the dargah... one of the best scenes ever... his pray made me fall in love with him again ❤️

He looked up again and saw in the further corner of the prayer hall, a blurred image due to his tear-filled eyes, a girl sitting along with her bag who was getting up.

Lets hope that the girl Asad saw was Zoya only



I love you so much... yes raised to infinity 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update!!
i loved it 😳
so finally zoya in asad's room
adorable update 😊
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Umm... so I have 2 reserves here... well you know me so well... I needed 2 only...

ok... pointers first of course

1) case due to business stuff... this is perfect... at least there won't be so much drama

2) relief... waise bhi gudiya factory and uska raaz is so confusing

3) thank god... this means that Asad did not slap Zoya... yay

4) I like this a lot... no baggage on Zoya... and I love Zeenat and Zoya bond

5) no billi... this is the best thing

6) does she have to like be there?

7) personal benefits... I still can't hate Rashid though

8) Dilshad is an epitome of love and the perfect mother ever

9) Asad and Ayaan bond is one of the favourite things in the show

10) well some readers need pointers so you had no choice obviously... though I knew most of the things


comment on chapter 5 on the next post
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chp 5 was a really sad one... so many tears... Even I had tears while reading it... so beautifully written it was... heart touching truly



"Allah ka shukar hai aap nahi gayi!", said the person who sat beside her.

Zoya opened her eyes in shock and looked up at Asad who sat there next to her with blood red eyes and a tear stricken face.


I loved this scene a lot... the park scene was so beautifully written... Zoya worrying about her child and agreeing to Asad's request was so perfect... I totally loved this one...




"Ammi! Main Zoya se nikaah karna chahta hoon!", announced Asad. All the three ladies looked at him in shock.

"WHAT?", shrieked Zoya.

"Sach mein?", squealed Dilshad in delight.

"I'm sooo happy bhaijaan!", squealed a super excited Najma.

"Aap pagal ho gaye hain Mr Khan?", asked Zoya in shock and confusion.


Everyone's reaction was so different... this part was a delight to read... I am glad that Zoya refused to marry Asad... Asad is really feeling guilty


"Par Mr. Khan mujhse mohabbat nahi karte hain phupi. Wo sirf meri pregnancy ki wajah se mujhse nikaah kar rahe hain, aur ye main nahi chahti!", replied Zoya.


Zoya and Dilshad scene was epic... I loved the whole conversation... Dilshad surely is one of the best characters in Qubool Hai




Asad closed his eyes in guilt as tears trickled down his cheek.

I loved the way Asad is repenting and is worried about Zoya. Also the way Dilshad spoke sternly to Asad was just amazing... best part is that the nikah is tomorrow



Well this surely will be interesting to read with you writing and Dilshad playing Cupid... I am in love with BOL NA HALKE HALKE
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Posted: 11 years ago

Qubool Hai

Qubool Hai

Qubool Hai


This episode starts at such a beautiful note... the nikah 😊




The honey dew voice echoed in his ears as he sat on the opposite side of the parda looking at his bride decked in a red lehenga choli looking ever so breathe taking. But something was amiss! Her smile. The dimpled smile on her beautiful face was missing!

Asad missed her smile... of course her dimpled smile... it was something he was in love with... he surely will do anything to bring it back


"Kya baat hai bhaijaan? Aapne iss musibat se itni jaldi mein kyun shaadi karli?", asked Ayaan with a glint of mischief in his eyes.

"Ayaan!", glared Asad.


I loved the way Ayaan teased Asad... I loved the way he still called Zoya as Mona... that scene was so cute... I totally loved it... awesome work by you...


He sighed and walked over to the small window of her room.

"How I wish she was locked in my room. Atleast I could have got in from the window. This window is so small!", he complained to himself.


Ek toh bachara confused hai... why Zoya is not in his room... next Zoya locked the door,,, then she gave him attitude when he entered... but she smiled internally and he was oblivious to it


"Zoya! This baby is equally mine so I have all the rights to take care of my baby and my wife!", he said in a tone of authority.


I loved this authority tone of Asad... it suits him a lot... of course Zoya is not ready to listen to him but then Asad hasn't released his feelings too



"Ya allah! Main Zoya ko aise nahi dekh sakta! Allah mujhe meri Zoya waapas kar do. Main janaab Rashid Ahmed Khan ki tarah nahi banna chahta. Main achha shauhar aur ek achha baap banna chahta hoon. Main apni biwi aur bacche ko duniya ki saari khushiyaan dena chahta hoon! Itni mohabbat dena chahta hoon ki kuch hafte pehle ki baatein Zoya humesha ke liye bhool jaaye!", he prayed.


Such a heart touching prayer by Asad followed by a beautiful flashback... this part of the story was so picture perfect... my heart went out for Asad... ❤️


"Main Zoya se mohabbat karta hoon! Aur main unhe ye bata kar rahunga!", he promised himself.


Finally Asad has realised that he is in love... yipee




Finally the 'BOL NA HALKE HALKE' night is taking its effect...

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