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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

loved the update
oh asad ur desires wake up by ur wife's kiss
he got his clothes for her she would be so cute in them
told his ammi about the move sh is happy
so he comfort her again and left to buy her clothes
najma and dilshad is fun feeding zoya
oh she hides behind asad when he returns
and he wants to show her what he bought
she knocks at his door he tells he she dont have to
and he dont want her to change for anyone she is perfect
oh she confessed to him and he says he knows
she fake anger and say she will never say again and he says
he can hear it all the time
oh they kiseed their first intimacy after marriage
continue soon


Thank you so much Anopama! 😳
Will continue soon! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
New thread is finally here!!
I am enjoying the story a lot

This story is surely worth a read thousand times over


Mina di... you and everything about you is perfect

I love you loads

I love you 1...2...3... raised to infinity

I totally love you big sista 🤗

I so wanted to consolidate all my comments but next time I surely will

P.S. scroll down for chp 7 comments

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Posted: 11 years ago

Tell me something I don't know! 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

I am planning to start undeserving on this today itself... lets see how many chapters I cover... I'll post the comments here too as there are loads of chapters

Chapter 3 was where I had last left


I shall reply to all once you have posted them all.

That's Chapter 1 to Chapter 9.. All out here! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

This is the last one that I am doing tonight... and this chapter is my favourite so far... in fact one of the best chapters you have ever written in the history of any couple... I am out of words to describe it... I am gonna have AsYalicious dreams tonight for sure... This chapter has made me blush like anything that I feel like falling in love... Every part and word of it was just the best... You have done a miracle with the 26 alphabets of the english language...



Asad taking care of Zoya so lovingly made my heart beat rise

It brought a 1000 watt smile on my face

Speaking to the baby... pulling the chair... walking with her as she went... just so sweet, cute and adorable it was



The kiss in front of Dilshad and Najma came as a surprise to me and then Asad huskily speaking into her ear... omg... omg... omg...

I am glad that nobody saw me when I read that part cause I was behaving like a love struck teenager as I read it



I am out of words for this chapter... You know na how much I love your OS 'THE BLUE UMBRELLA'... well this chapter beats that too

Need I say more?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-


I shall reply to all once you have posted them all.

That's Chapter 1 to Chapter 9.. All out here! 😳


I am done till 7

You did reply to some initial comments earlier though but I would surely love to get replies again

8 and 9 I'll do tom most probably if I get time else after exams then but I doubt I'll be able to wait after reading 4 to 7 today
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mahima--


I am done till 7

You did reply to some initial comments earlier though but I would surely love to get replies again

8 and 9 I'll do tom most probably if I get time else after exams then but I doubt I'll be able to wait after reading 4 to 7 today


I will repost the replies to Chapter 1 to 3 and then reply to 4 to 9 in a go once you're done with it! 😳

So you have only 2 chapters on BNHH + Zehnaseeb and 1 KaSh OS! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Anyone for an update here?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

update soon Marina😳


Tonight! 😳

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