AsYa FF: Destiny Comes Calling (suspended) #2 *Note* 3/12/13 Pg 26

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Anjinie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Poor Zoya, she should open n talk about da real reason she wans 2 find her father

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
AsYa scene. 🤗

this gets better each update 🤗

Another one upcoming in the next update

Thanks🤗

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: skavya
Congrats for the new Thread...
Awesome update...
feel so bad for Zoya...like to Asad with her...to support her...
continue soon...
Thanks for pm

Things will get better from here on...just a few hiccups...

Thanks

Edited by QueenOfMyCastle - 11 years ago

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Anjinie
Poor Zoya, she should open n talk about da real reason she wans 2 find her father

Hmm... I am confused what you mean?

Thanks

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@metoyou

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Chapter 21

Control yourself Asad. Focus (Getting distracted Mr. Khan?)

if he was jealous (Perhaps not now, lekin woh feeling bhi aa jayega)

She felt a hand on her hand while a comforting arm went around her shoulder, squeezing them lightly lending her some emotional support (A very sweet gesture. Exactly what she needs at that moment)

Their eyes met and it was a moment of reconnect for them - The discomfort from the morning was long gone and it was replaced with something much more meaningful and deep rooted (Very nice) 👏

Just giving birth did not make anyone a parent (True!!!)

Very good update. Bas kaafi hain na? Told you it will be a straight to the point comment. Well, here you have it.

Chalo, after giving it a second thought, I made up my mind. I just can't give my comment like that. I guess its your lucky day ki mein ache mood mein hoon.

Rivs, I really liked this update. Why? Because it had very deep emotions and feelings. The flashback part was very well written. Zoya's turmoil was emotional. You have used the right words to describe what she is going through.

Okay so now we know that Asad and Azad used to be good friends but their relation has changed, for no good reasons. Lekin aisa kya hua tha???

Waiting for the next update, because I want to read more the flashback. Again, a very well written part! 👏

Ab khush?

WHAT THE?! 😲 I forgot to do say this: Congrats for the second thread!!! You made it! 😃

Edited by me2you - 11 years ago

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Surish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

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Gulaabo

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

poor zoe...she's so gloomy...thank god asad is with her...
want to know azam more!!!
continue soon

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Anitha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Congrats for the new thread di 🥳
Awesome update as usual👏
Feels really bad for zoya..
But nice to see asad support.
Cute asya eyelock moment broken by the horn sound😡
Hope soon we get the cute asya moments in future
I loved ur writing skill ur update..