AsYa FF: Destiny Comes Calling (suspended) #2 *Note* 3/12/13 Pg 26 - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
very nice can't wait to read it thanx for the PM and update soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
azam is it
great update continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow, this was really nice. okay what I can make out from Najma's description, it's definitely Azam, isn't it? well I guess the discussion will have to wait as Dilshaad's there. well but I'm glad Najma is clear about her feelings, just his sudden departure & now return has boggled her mind.
The flashback was surprise, because I didn't expect Asad to be so humble & concerned about her. Well do I need to say I was more then impressed seeing Asad's office, this man is really nothing short of perfection.
Well you know I loved your idea of the earring being Zoe's moondekhai. now that's too far, isn't it?
well waiting for the next part,
Love..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: me2you

Miracle do happen Rivs...


Chapter 22
when a sudden downpour took them by surprise (And there it was...the inevitable rain)
My best friend😉

No wonder this man spent so much of his time in here (Is it like an outhouse or something? I like it though!)
No it is an extension to the home. He designed it equipped with the latest gadgets and all...perks of being an architect, u know the latest stuff out there...I want to call it a man cave.😆

a half smile in return and a nod (Uhuh..that half smile... 😳)
of course...lol

Something about it had made his shiver (Uss smile se kuch kuch hota hai) 😉
yes...lol

Najma finally gave up and decided to tackle the bull by the horns (Smart girl)
Exactly snoopy will be able to solve her problems.

Zoya watched with satisfactions as realization dawned upon Najma and her eyes went wide like saucers (Zoya bhi kuch kaam nahin hain)
Nope she is very useful...see what happens next.

"Unfortunately yes. He is the only guy I ever loved." (Yeh kambakht dil bhi nah...)
I know...kabhi kabhi...but I do have a sweet back story for her...bachpan ka pyaar types...lol

"Hmm...complicated." -
"Yes...very...welcome to my life." (Yup, that is something some of us can relate to...)
I knew u would get this one. I totally expected a comment from u on this. When do u leave?

I loved the second part of the flashback scene. Very cute of Mr. Khan to ask if he could join her. Is he changing? Or was it just pure sympathy?So he has a 'secret room' where he can hang out...good to know, might be useful 😛
Sympathy and a little bit of something else...I think. Yes...its not a secret...its just a no entry zone...for the ladies...
What a cliffhanger!!! I really liked the Zoya-Najma convo. They share a great bond and hopefully Najma will tell her who that guy is, because I want to know as well!!!
I am glad u liked it. I wanted Zoya to be direct but not too direct.
Ab jaldi se update karo, so I can give my comments...
No idea when I will update next...u know why,right?



What did I say today? Indeed... thank you

Aww...meri jaan...




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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice part.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
Asad missing zoya... so use jaan as a excuse
she can see... some sadness in asad face...

Najma... with a guy...

interesting how zoya break najma... and she confess
about the guy... and secret

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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks for the pm...



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Posted: 11 years ago
aww..dat was such a wonderful update..n srry 4 d late comment..update soon n pm me

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