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Posted: 11 years ago

#401

I have loved so much Asad's growth like crazy

Asad had started out from a ruthless, emotionless, arrogant person in the beginning he was a lifeless soul without Zoya, Ayaat, and Ahsaan

I cant put it in words how much I have loved seeing him grow since the beginning of this story

I loved how much he has grown I was sooo happy to see him actually talk to Zain and when he hugged him during the shootout scene part of Tanveer (me: )

And then he let Ayaat go with him to NYU like OMG OMG OMG He trusts Zain

U could tell how heartbroken he was when he found out Zain wasn't Tanveers son and he was guilty for being mean to him

I was so happy he forgave Ahsaan so quickly after all he is his father and the way he patted his head was so sweet

Asad was so worried for Ayaat when he thought she was kidnapped by Tanveer he would do anything for Ayaat loved it so much yaar

and how could I forget Zoya I loved the way he hugged her on the sofa and how he protected her from Tanveer

I love Asad so much in this story like its insane 😃

U have portrayed Asad so good That I was like OMG I can feel the emotions

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princess101

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Posted: 11 years ago

#402

I felt so bad for Zoya throughout the whole story

First she lost Asad then Ahsaan and she almost lost Ayaat

I was so happy that finally she got a happy ending with all her family together with the addition to Zain

Zoya could not even think bad for Ahsaan that it showed how much her motherly feelings were for Ahsaan

The way they both broke down (ahsaan and Zoya) when Ahsaan came back into the home was so sweet and I am sure I had tears in my own eyes reading that and I was yelling OMG OMG OMG out loud

I loved how Asad and Zoya started to fight over Ahsaan and Ahsaan called her Ammi I was like AWWW (SNIFFS AND WIPES TEARS)

She was so protective and the way she yelled at Tanveer was the best hahhaha in your face Tanveer

The way she said Zain was her son I was legit crying at that part that had to be one of my favorite parts well the whole update was but u know what I mean :D

She was so worried for Ayaat and she was crying and all it was written so well and I'm really speechless yaar

Im so happy that Zoya has her family back with her

U have written Zoya so beautifully that its amazing 😃

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princess101

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Posted: 11 years ago

#403

Im sooo happy Ayaat was ok :D

She finally got her transplant and will be ok :D YIPPEEE

I think overall Ayaat had one of the most growths in the story just like her father 😃

I loved how much Ayaat trusts Ahsaan and even after finding out about his truth she still accepted him fully her and Ahsaan have such a beautiful bond :D

The way she was jealous was sooo cute I loved that so much :D

OMG Zayaat were to cute yaar

She cares so much for Zain and how sad she was when she thought he was going to NYU without her

I was feeling so bad for her like her love going away from her right when everything was about to be ok

Then when Chaat came and she finally exposed how Zain wasn't Tanveers child I was like FINALLY THE TRUTH IS OUT :D

Thankfully she will be going to NYU with Zain I really hope I get to read stuff about them in NYU :D

Ayaat defiantly was one of my favorite characters throughout the whole chapter

U portrayed her so amazingly that I could feel her pain throughout the story like it was just amazing :D

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Posted: 11 years ago

#404

YEAAA ZAINNN

I was so happy finally he got his happy ending I felt the most bad for him throughout all the characters in this story

It was heartbreaking hearing about his parents and his family but thankfully he has a new family now :D

I loved how much Zain respects Asad even after everything and couldn't bear to see him bow down to Tanveer

one of my favorite relationships of zain was with Zoya how much he loves Zoya as his mother always warms my heart all the time :D

And how much he loves Ayaat like from the beginning he was all arrogant with her and then he fell in love with her so much and how they will be going to NYU together YIPEEE

Im so happy finally the truth is out that he isn't Tanveers son :D

The way her ran into Ayaats room in the hospital was one of the sweetest scenes I have ever read like I was really saying awww while reading that

I loved Zain from the beginning he went so much on Asad even though he isn't his son but his and Ayaats story reminded me so much of Asya's story

Zain had the most heartbreak in my opinion in the story and finally now he will have a happy ending YEAAA 😃

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princess101

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Posted: 11 years ago

#405

Finally Ahsaan's truth is out in the open :D

I felt bad for Ahsaan like in the other chapters I never really felt to bad for him dont know why but in this chapter my heart actually went out to him

his so called mother used him and he found out, he hurt his father unintentionally, and hurt ayaat and zoya and sophia as well

I'm just glad he knows the truth now and hopefully he can fix his relation with Sophia soon :D

Im really glad to see that everyone had forgiven and accept Ahsaan :D

The way he ran to save Asad was so sweet I was like FINALLY YIPEEE

I loved the bonding between him and his parents and Ayaat

He called Asya Ammi and Abbu (me: AWWW)

And when he told Zoya " u are separating me from my twin" I was like this is sooo cute like I want to go and pull his checks weirdly

Im so happy he got his happy ending with his parents but I hope he will get his love back soon because Sophia loves him and he loves her just hope he can prove it to her now and win her back :D

I disliked Ahsaan so much in the beginning but now I actually like him the way u wrote his character was phenomenal 😃

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princess101

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Posted: 11 years ago

#406

How could I forget the evil pysco lady Tanveer

im so happy finally her butt is in jail finally

she blurted everything out and hahahhaha bad luck Tanveer have a fun time in jail

Loved seeing her shocked as the property was in Ayaat's name and she was like yeaaa I win and I was like ummm sorry nooo hahahahha

The way Tanveer was like u all are lined up and I have kidnapped Ayaat I was like U MEANIE PYSCO IDIOT (BAD WORDS ) U LEAVE MY ASYA ZAYAAT AND AHSAAN ALONE U IDIOT

I cant explain how happy I was to see Tanveer going to jail How I wish I could have seen her face but thankfully u wrote it so well so didnt need to :D

HAHAHAHA BYE BYE TANVEER SEE U NEVER AGAIN :D

U wrote Tanveer so well that I dont think I ever hated her this much in any other story like I really hated her so much that evil person getting in the way of not only Asya but Zayaat to that (bad word)

Good riddance though she is finally gone

P.S she better not make a appearance in the sequel ( gives evil look) NO TANVEER AT ALL ONLY ASYA ZAYAAT AHSHIA ( Ahsaan and Sophia Just thought to give them a couple name ) :D

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princess101

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Posted: 11 years ago

#407

Back to my crying now again... WAHHH THIS ENDED WHY ME WHYYY ( Dramatic) 😭

Im so happy that at least we get a sequel (wipes tears and gets up and jumps around screaming YIPEEE) 🥳

Yaar I have to wait that long 😕 Thats so far away like almost a month away 😭

But its ok I can reread Abbu again for the 26x I think now I think I lost count now 😆

This is defiantly one of my favorite Stories ever be it book, story, magazine, anything

I hated reading and didnt read to much but this story has defiantly made a place in my heart like it has its own place " ABBU BEST STORY EVER" in my hear :D

Cant wait for ur update and on Aug.13 if I dont get the prologue just remember u will be getting loads of PM's, comments here, emails from me saying this

"WHERE IS THE PROLOGUE I HAVE BEEN TO FAR FROM ZAYAAT ASYA AND AHSHIA FOR TO LONG I WANT THE UPDATE LIKE NOW NOW NOW"

I will throw many tantrums until the update then pinky promise :D

Well Im off to read Abbu again cant wait for the new story 😃 😃 😃😃

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