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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Great update. Liked Julia who finally helped in disclosing the truth.

Asad's reactions were pretty much as expected. I expected him to be more violent but I guess it is his Ammi and no matter what , You always love your ammi.
Loved the make out session before the party. Zoya getting bolder as before.
Fantastic update.
Thanks for the early one.😃
Love
Juliet.



HEYA..THANKS FOR A WONDERFUL COMMENT..N M HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY TO KNOW U ENJOYED THE UPDATE..N ASAD'S REACTION SAT WELL WITH U..N THE MAKEOUT SESSION..AHEM AHEM😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Finally he came to know the truth! *fist pump*


I was waiting for this part and I very well knew his reaction would be something like that! (do i need to say again how intelligent i am) 🤣

now i am waiting for the other intelligent thing i had said to come true as well (remember? 😉)

Yaar AsYa ko saath rakhti ho AyRa ko bhi rakha karo 🤣


HELL YA..THE TRUTH IS FINALLY OUT...WOHOOO😆
N MISS SADIE..PERCEPTIVE AS ALWAYS...👏 KYA BAAT HAI..KYA BAAT HAI...😃

N AS FOR UR OTHER INTELLIGENT STUFF..O YA😉...I KNW WAT U TRYIN TO TELL..N GAL UR BANG ON..😉...N AS FOR THE OTHER PAIR...WELL THEY R MORE SANE THAN THESE 2...😆


Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Haha i cant quote the entire comment i asked about the banner because almost every FF has a banner so i asked!


YA THAT WOULD MAKE THIS WAY LOOONG😃..N AS FOR THE BANNER...I GUESS NEVER THOUGHT BOUT IT..N SO LETS C..😃


Originally posted by: --starstruck--

chalo I downloaded so many gifs and I'll spma your thread with them :P




FUN FUN FUN...😃



😲




WHISTLES...😉


Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Time stood still as his eyes connected with his brain. Slowly Asad removed his shades and his gaze locked with those deep brown eyes.


For some reason unknown i really liked this line



AWWW😳...WELL U CAN LIKE ALL THE LINES U WANT FROM MY STORY...😃



O I ALREADY DID..DID U NOT NOTICE😉😆

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Arz kiya hai,


Intehaan ho gayi intezaar ki,
Bohot time ho gaya ab toh update karo jee

Shukriya shukriya shukriya 😆



WAH WAH WAH WAH...SADIEJI...AAP KO YEH SHAYRANA ANDAAZ KAAFI SUIT KARTA HAI😉

Originally posted by: --starstruck--


haha juliet it ain't my stuff, i took it all either from ankie or tumblr 😆😆

Its not only aashna who gets the best of my stuff, it's Fari (SmileyStar) as well

if you want it too, you gotta go read my comment on your FF (the latest one), act on it and then I'll definitely share my best of stuff with you too 😆😆



WELL ON THIS...I M OUT..U 2 DEAL WITH IT😆😉



Originally posted by: --starstruck--

You are one of my favorite writer in this forum



O IS THAT SO...HAAAI...MEIN TO MAR JAAVA...😳...DIL GARDEN GARDEN HO GAYA...😆...YIEE...HAPPY DANCE...😆



Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Your writing is so good!



😳


Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Actually your story is too good!



AGAIN..😳



FINALLY...HO GAYA...NOW I NEED A BREAK...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

Wow this is a very beautiful story !

I loved the whole concept 😳
Read it all in one go and didn't get bored for a single minute !!!
I don't know how I ignored this story
but seriously I loved it !!
You are an amazing writer 👏
Lovely story !!
Thanks for the pm !!


AWW..THANK U SO VERY MUCH...I JUST ENJOYED READIN UR COMMENT..N M GALD THAT U GAVE MY STORY A READ..N ENDED UP LIKING IT...YIEEE...😃N HEY THANKS FOR ALL UR WONDERFUL COMPLIMENTS...😃

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

Hey Brilliant update. It was nice to see that both Asad n Zoya were themselves after so many years n the love between them was still the so strong.

Liked it when Zoya was able to calm Asad down after he got to know that his mother was the reason for their seperation.

Loved this update to bits. please update soon n please pm me for the next part too.



THANK U SO VERY MUCH..FOR A LOVELY COMMENT...M HAPPY TO READ THAT U ENJOYED THE UPDATE...N SHARED THE PARTS THAT U ENJOYED...MAKES ME REALLY HAPPY...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

THANK U😊

Originally posted by: mariam1368

Love Asya romance i m glad that Asad found out
the truth
and thank u for an amazing
update


THANK U SO VERY MUCH FOR COMMENTIN😃


Originally posted by: anopama

so so loved it update
it was awesome
happy he learn the truth
and zoya was there for him
it will be hard for him to look
at his mother knowing the truth
they love they have for each other
is mind blowing.
continue soon👏


THANK U SO SO MUCH..FOR A LOVELY COMMENT...M GLAD U LIKED THE UPDATE😊
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Posted: 11 years ago


THANKS 😊

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

finally truth is out

lovely part


THANK U SO MUCH😊

Originally posted by: Gudduluvs

Awesum..luvd it...thnks


THANK U😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Applef

that was so beautiful..


asya romance were so lovely..😳

loved the birthday party..

it was really in party blast mood..🥳

so finally the truth is out..

I really loved every part of that scene..❤️

from asad got to know about that to zoya cooling asad down..

everything was so perfect..👏

he loves zoya so much that he can't forgive his mom..

it was so asad type.. and I love it so much..

update soon..



WOW..SUCH AN AWESOME COMMENT...TRULY BROUGHT A SMILE ON MY FACE..THANK..U N M SO HAPPY THAT U ENJOYED THE UPDATE..😃

Originally posted by: Yellowdiamond

Amazing! Such passion and love! I loved it! You're really talented writer! Thumbs up!


THANK U SO VERY MUCH😃..M GLAD U ENJOYED IT..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi !!
I'm super sorry for not having replied in all this time it's just that I have been out of town and got back a few days back . Since then all has been catching up on work :(

I've read the chapters but in a rush in between all my brakes 😭
all I want to tell you is they are beautifully written. I loved every bit of it 👏

As soon as I read them properly I will be back with a detailed comment

:)
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Posted: 11 years ago



THANKS

Originally posted by: pari_jyothika

This Is beautiful...

like as if i am seeing it in front of my eyes

Lovely...
no words to describe it



AWWW..THANK U FOR UR LOVLEY COMMENT..M HAPPY THAT U LIKED THE UPDATE..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey Aashna,

Well a BIG wala THANK YOU for your replies. I am super glad & thankful that you've considered writing a SS on how AsYa came together. So looking Forward to it. Well it'll be great to read a mystery filled romance. Lets see when you put that up too.
Coming to the part. It was ABSOLUTELY AWESOME. From the arrangements Riley made, to the dance, the talks, truth being exposed to the convo between AsYa, it was all Excellent.
The day that began so beautifully with Zoe getting back in her old charming self & teasing Asad was so good to see. Asad can really not resist her. the party was really cool. I mean it's good to see your friends after years & if they are happy & celebrating with you, all the more better.
I had never thought the truth would come out like this. But of course how long could it be held back, it had to come out. This was the best time. As they are stepping into a new day of the new year, Zoe's B'day I mean, together. This was one thing that was left to deal from the past. Although they had decided against talking about the past but somewhere I believe a curiosity would be left in Asad as to what caused all this mess. So it's nice it came out.
Asad was really heart broken as expected. His pillar of strength & the one he thought only brought happiness to him, was the reason he died every single day away from his love. It really is a big blow.
Zoe's response to it made me love her more. She really Loves Dilshaad as her own & hence taking all the blame. After this how can one not fall in love with her more? Her way of explaining things to him & asking him not to react in a bad way as Dilshaad won't be able to take the accusations & hatred from him was really nice. No one would but Zoe could this.
I know it will be difficult for Asad to see his mother in the eyes without remembering this truth but I guess he will go through it because he has what he needed to breathe, Zoya.
Looking forward to see how it goes from here, now that according to me all the past is crystal clear in front of both of them.
Love..


ONCE AGAIN..OH WAT JOY IT IS TO READ UR COMMENTS..N HEY THANKS FOR UR ENCOURAGEMENT FOR MY NEW SS N THE FF I PLAN TO WRITE...I LOOK FORWARD TO UR FEEDBACKS N COMMENTS ON THE 2..FOR SURE..

NOW FOR THE UPDATE..

WELL IM GLAD U ENJOYED THEIR TEASE..THEIR LOVE..AND THEIR TOGETHERNESS..N U ACCEPTED THE REVEAL AT THIS TIME..I GUESS IT WAS THE RITE TIME..COS THEY R FINALLY CLOSE ENHOUGH THAT SUCH SITUATIONS WONT PULL THEM APART...N NOW THEY HAVE IT ALL IN THE OPEN SO ASAD WILL GET HIS CLOSURE..N THEIR RELATIONSHIP CAN FLOURISH FRESH..

N AS FRO THEIR REACTIONS..IT WAS VERY RATIONAL...RATHER THAN IMPULSIVE..N ZOYA HANDLED HIM WELL..N SO DID ASAD..HE KEPT HIS COOL..N LISTENED TO HER..SO ITS ALL FOR THE BETTER..NOW THINGS WILL GO A LIL BAD N THEN FINALLY ITS ALL DONE N DEALT WITH.. SO GAL KEEP READIN...IT WILL ALL FALL INTO PLACE SOON😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

sorry dear...i was caught up with my exams!!!!
unresing now...


HEY GAL ALL COOL..LIFE COMES FIRST...

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

chapter 24:
amazing...what a hottt birthday present!!! asya are truly one...no one n nothing can separate them!!!
their feelings were overflowing...u wrote so well!!!!
good job... 👏


THANK U SO MUCH...WELL U LIKED IT N THAT MAKES ME HAPPPY...😃

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

oh dear...i am again sorry since i was busy updating my own ss...
Chapter 25:
wonderful start...red dress...ohhh!!! 😳 Zoya has changed...much bolder now!!!
they can't keep their hands off each other...so much in love!!!!
the party was fun to read...
omg!!! asad heard all about his mother's deeds...
good that zoya was there with him...



ALL GUD GAL...M JUST HAPPY TO READ UR COMMENT..N SMILE...N GLAD U ENJOYED THE UPDATE...

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

when in the previous chapters...you were not revealing the truth about dilshad and asad was continuously hurting himself and zoya...i was thinking that you could expose the truth and all will be fine!!!
but as usual ...you convinced me that with zoya by his side...he can tackle anything in a better way!!!
i hope zoya will handle asad when he meets dilshad in India!!!


WELL CHALO U FOUND MY REASONS JUSTIFIED.. YIEEE...M HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY..😃

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

i loved it seriously...
now don't keep me waiting for long...
continue soon!!!


THANK U ONCE AGAIN...N WONT KEEP U WAITING FOR LONG..

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

about ur future works...
I'm excited to read all that u write ...
but particularly that colorful prequel to this ss caught my attention...
I'm waiting for it!!!!


THANKS FOR UR FEEDBACK..WILL KEEP U POSTED AS I GO..N WILL LOOK FOR UR COMMENTS..😃
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