Ciao Bella,
Now, now what do I say? It's like.. I m out of words.. It was superb, especially the pace with which the day went on & ended. You know the starting had only made me grin & by the end of it i was grinning like an idiot. I won't say that I didn't cry because I did, but for the first time they were Khushi ke aansoo, 😭 OMG. how did I get lucky enough to see this day? 🤔 You've been nothing less than a sweetheart in this update Aashna, itni meherbani aik saath. Ye sach hai ya hai sapna... Okay I get it, you understand my state of mind after reading the part. 😆 I'm laughing, flying high, all happy shappy. Just love you for this & for a lot more, us ki details alag se doon gi, u know.
I'll quote all my favorite lines at the end.
Okay getting back to the part. It indeed was A New Day & A New Beginning. Seeing both of them nervous & yet relieved of all agony. Smiling, blushing, teasing, laughing, that feeling of like being in love for the first time & appreciating the other as their other own, with full rights was so amazing & a very powerful feeling. this zest of starting again together was the point that set my mood.
Of course it was nothing new when Asad got the breakfast according to Zoe's likes. He remembers every detail about her. & so does Zoe.
I could so visualize an all hyper, babbling, laughing & jumping Zoe, walking ahead of Asad, reminding him & herself of the places & memories they had made together. Asad, what can I say about him. He's a man who's got his life back, whose fears are removed, whose deep wound is healed, all just in a moment, by the declaration that Zoya still belonged to him. She was His to keep & love. You know seeing Asad, has taught & reminded me of how much Love & Life are co-related. My heart had swelled in love for Asad, just by the way he was gazing at Zoe. I am not saying that Zoe loves him any less, but you know she was holding on to his name & knew they were still one, even though on papers. But he was dying in pain & restlessness that whole time trying to accept that they weren't together anymore & that zoya had wanted to go away from him.
The most important part of this update was the communication between AsYa acc to me. Asad & Zoya have been always been connected through heart & soul but I agree with Zoya on this point that hearing literally gives you the hope & strength to face everything. The physical distance has dampened their spirits & changed their outlook on life. To begin a new, they need the assurance that now they have the support & love of their beloved.
So I guess I know what the letter has. But what I want to about it is the memories attached with it, I mean why is she so excited about it? You didn't tell by when you'll post the next part.
Here are my fav lines:
She looked away, not wanting to stare,but then she turned back and stared, hell he was hers and she had full rights to oogle at him...
Somehow hearing the truth, that they were still married and Zoya was still Mrs Zoya Asad Khan, had erased all the pain and bitterness from his heart.
Zoya-my husband Mr Asad Ahmed Kha blushin...she laughed O man I gotta take a picture of it...she tried grabbing her phone..but Asad grabbed her hand...glaring at her...having no effect on the effervescent Zoya...
Asad just follwed her footsteps, content in the realisation that his company was the reason for Zoya's smile, the constant repeatation of the words, Mrs Zoya Asad Khan, mending even the deepest of cracks.He was a happy man today, he felt his age he was acting his age, and he was having the time of his life, with the girl of his dreams. (My most favorite)
She smiled even more when she remembered the moments just a while ago when Asad called her Mrs Zoya Asad Khan, Making her heart swell with joy,Asad considered her his own, and he had already accepted everything she had confessed, choosing to still call her his wife. She was happy, today finally Allah was giving her everything back..
Asad-The how did you mean it?? Zoya I need to know...Are you mine or are you mine?? He asked his possessiveness reeking in his every word...
Aray yaar, this is being unfair. Can I post the entire part? I feel like I'm being unfair with my own self, so many of my fav lines are getting missed due to this. I think I shouldn't do this. I hope you know that this chapter does indeed mean a lot to me, as this is the basis of their new start.
Lots of Love..
Edited by Rarepearl - 11 years ago
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