~ The Sunshine of My life ~ AsYa FF||Part 14 Page 129 NOTE PG 140 - Page 79

Originally posted by: sanah12

Read all the chapters in one go!
Loved them loadz!!
Truly they were amazingly written. You are an awesome writer
The emotions described really well.
Love the flow of the story.. Its really good
Love ahana she is such a sweetheart
Feeling bad for asad that ayesha is no more but its k coz our miss farooqi is there withh him.
Love zoya's and ahana's bonding its really sweet and how zoya gets along with all is just superb.
The best part of today's update was that 'But she moved his hand to his
mouth, Bu mum mum!" she burbled. Asad looked at
her in awe touched at the baby's love for her father'
It was such a heart warming scene loved it to the core.
Aww poor asad can never be angry with ahana though he sometimes is
Love the part where zoya goes to his room and gives him the food though he was busy resisting.
The whole update was beautifully awesomely written
Do continue asap
Plz do pm me is possible..

Originally posted by: BeautyfulDesire

Great update! I have always loved Dilshaad. In QH and in this story and now she will try to get Asad and Zoya married...I hope.

Originally posted by: Nicole.

I finally got time to catch up with this FF and I am absolutely loving it. I love the pace that the story has picked. I really have this big urge to just kidnap Ahana from your story, even if that means leaving Asad devastated 😆 She is just super adorable <33 And she is playing cupid to her Bu and soon to be Ammi, how cute! I have said this before and I will say it again, I love the Aanu-Bu bond, I think you describe their relationship so beautifully!

Coming to this part, after this snippet of the past, I really want to know how deeply Asad felt for Ayesha. Ahana surely knows how to make her Bu dance on her tiny fingers. Seriously Asad and Zoya make a great team, why is Asad running away from it? LOL Oh and I'd love to read more on how Asad really feels about Zoya! Good going!

xx

Originally posted by: Tamara27

Hello Ankita sweetheart!

I haven't commented on this story for a couple of chapters, but I must admit, I greedily read whenever you post one.

I am absolutely loving this story! The pace is excellent. Nothing is rushed. Asad and Zoya are slowly finding their way to each other, but in a very "real" way. Nothing too cheesy happening, and I love love love the "realness"!

Oh, and Aahana is the cutest! Man, is she attached to her Bu' :-)

But slowly, she is starting to realise that Zoya has something to offer her as well. I like the fact that Asad is realising this as well.

Thanks so much for this story. I love reading it.

And now for the obligatory line at the end of every comment...

Please update soon :-)