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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: manognasai
Nice update...Aahana is so cute and adorable!The way u explained each movement of her,I cud imagine her presence around me!Loved Asad-Aahana's bonding a lot!Aahana liked Zoya also.Interested to know abt Asad's past!Update soon...😃

I love kids, so maybe more than Asad and Zoya, Aahana is the apple of my eye 😆 glad you like her as well

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-Anku-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: Nikita_Smith
👏

Asad and his adorable lil Aanu made me teary eyed today. Your excellent writing actually makes me want to hug a baby tightly.

Asad is just as passionate, protective and possessive Father as he is a lover in actual story.

Can't wait for Aanu to become friendly with Zoya, though I know that it would(and it should) take it's own sweet time.

I have bookmarked this update on my phone😊

Keep up the brilliant work Ankita 👍🏼

I love Aanu 🤗

PS: The story is very well paced Ankita. Neither too fast nor too slow. It's only fair to have Few updates dedicated to showing that how Zoya gets settled in this new home and begins to understand both Asad and Aahana. 😊

I love the relation between a father and daughter, and well this story is about one so Its amazing to get to right it. Shall have AsYa moments too, but the building of their relation has a long time to go. 😆 Well I meant the romance is not otherwise.

Edited by Ankita.M - 11 years ago

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-Anku-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: Linnet
Awesome update

Keep writing

Please pm me

Love
Linnet

😛😉😊

I won't be sending PM's to anyone sadly, please do keep a check here for updates

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TenTinyBreaths

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

no prblm di.. bas whnvr u update title edit kar dena wth date.. dat will b more dan enough to know..😊😊

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-Anku-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: kritz4ever
whats wrong with asad

You'll know eventually 😊

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-Anku-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: riddhi1206
nice updte.. luved it ..
o god this asad huh.. zoya is caring fuh his daughter n he is behaving so rudely...
ahamna is too cute.. do pm me fuh d next part

I don't have a PM system so please keep a check on the updates 😊

You'll know why he is reacting the way he is soon.

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-Anku-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: Tamara27
Hey, this is lovely so far! Love the pace at which you're going. It makes sense especially after you explained.

Aww cutie pie has her father completely wrapped around her finger :)

Thanks, it was wonderful and I look forward to your next update.

I am glad you like it 😊 and yes I need Aahana and Zoya to bond before Asad and Zoya can, but it will happen in good time.