~ The Sunshine of My life ~ AsYa FF||Part 14 Page 129 NOTE PG 140 - Page 18

Created

Last reply

Replies

948

Views

193.8k

Users

141

Likes

2.6k

Frequent Posters

canadiankudi thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Aww such a cute FF... great work!!
Please continue soon! =)
chainreaction. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
omg omg omg YOU UPDATEDDD GAHHH LET ME GO READ

i was having such a blahhh day but this cheered me up so muchhh! Aahana is the CUTEST BABY EVER (okay no leo is a little cuter.) You describe everything so perfectly i can actually picture it :| i love kids so much and Aahana is my babyyy! i know i said this in my last comment but i can't get over asad's and Aahana's relationship, its so beautifulll <3 the way he worries and cares about her so much and also how she always wants her buuu.

omg why can't she be my kid i want her now, i'm gonna adopt her :| LMAOOO i realise how this is an AsYa ff and i spend most of my comment talking about AA but omg they so cuteee (they're called AA now its too much effort to keeep typing out their names.)

BUT OHHH MY ASAD why you so cold towards zoyaaa? i really wanna know what happened to Aahana's ammi and about Zoya's past so i'm excited to see what happens next EEEKS. UPDATE SOON i can't wait long...you should know i'm not very patient. If you don't update soon imma spam your WA like crazy.

THANK YOU for making me smileee on such a crappy day 🤣 it was a wonderfulll update anku lungi

oh oh i just saw you replying to people and using that creepy smile omg stop using it, it looks like you're just about to jump off a cliff but smiling cos you're a freak with no brain
Edited by kajen_hamesha - 11 years ago
-Hinaloveasya- thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
I loved it
I loved that najma is having bonding with zoya from day one
madina12 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Super lovely update. Juz love the way u portray asad as a super loving dad.
Juz love the bond between the father & the daughter...n How cute is the daughter 😳
Look forward to the next update
madina12 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Hello again...I have repeatedlyread tis for more than 4 times..Juz could not get enough of tis 😛
Chaldi chaldi update...So looking forward
amruta04 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update Ankita...
Aahana is soo adorable...
loved Asad-Aahana's bonding..
looking forward for next update
do continue soon
-Anku- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Oldestfan

Shaping up beautifully! What better than a little one to show a third person what our silent hero is made of!?! Do continue. Dare

I hope you have time this weekend for a double update?


AHH I hope I had that time, I've had a long day today which started off even before sunrise, so I don't think I am in a stamina to even write, but hopefully a lengthy update the coming week.

Thank you so much for your comments 🤗
-Anku- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kajen_hamesha

omg omg omg YOU UPDATEDDD GAHHH LET ME GO READ


i was having such a blahhh day but this cheered me up so muchhh! Aahana is the CUTEST BABY EVER (okay no leo is a little cuter.) You describe everything so perfectly i can actually picture it :| i love kids so much and Aahana is my babyyy! i know i said this in my last comment but i can't get over asad's and Aahana's relationship, its so beautifulll <3 the way he worries and cares about her so much and also how she always wants her buuu.

omg why can't she be my kid i want her now, i'm gonna adopt her :| LMAOOO i realise how this is an AsYa ff and i spend most of my comment talking about AA but omg they so cuteee (they're called AA now its too much effort to keeep typing out their names.)

BUT OHHH MY ASAD why you so cold towards zoyaaa? i really wanna know what happened to Aahana's ammi and about Zoya's past so i'm excited to see what happens next EEEKS. UPDATE SOON i can't wait long...you should know i'm not very patient. If you don't update soon imma spam your WA like crazy.

THANK YOU for making me smileee on such a crappy day 🤣 it was a wonderfulll update anku lungi

oh oh i just saw you replying to people and using that creepy smile omg stop using it, it looks like you're just about to jump off a cliff but smiling cos you're a freak with no brain


EWW don't be calling me weird names PLEASE. At least I gave you a better name, that suits you.
THANKS BTW you're adorable, you've actually commented so long even though you're so busy and so worked up atm. ILY and I AM GLAD you enjoy the parts 🤗
-Anku- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: madina12

Super lovely update. Juz love the way u portray asad as a super loving dad.
Juz love the bond between the father & the daughter...n How cute is the daughter 😳
Look forward to the next update


Asad as a dad is something I'd love to see myself because of his own issues with the kind of growing up he has had, it'll be interesting to see. Thanks so much for the comments, glad to know you like the FF. 😃
Ishaqzaadi thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
OMG Anku. This is brilliant! So well written and so, so gripping. I caught up with all four parts last night and cannot wait to read what happens next in the story.

I love how you've kept the basic crux of QH's story and characters but added a really interesting twist.

Since sooo many years, as a KSG fan, I have had two wishes regarding characters he plays... 1) for him to wear suits, 2) for him to play a dad! Thankfully we got to see him play dad in TMLS and be suited in QH; I love how your FF combines both of my wishes =))

It's sooo cute to imagine the moments between Asad & Aahana... <3 and I love how Zoya & Aahana are slowly forming a bond too! Looking forward to how all these relationships develop!

Related Topics

Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

1 years ago

AsYa FF ~ Broken Ties (chapter 5 updated)

[NOCOPY] Hello everyone! Happy to be here. I was searching for an opportunity to be here with all of you as a member after a long time as writer...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: Coloursoflove

2 years ago

*New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor *New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor

Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor Asad Ahmed Khan is the prodigal son. All the tabloids say so. Coming from an affluent family in Bhopal, he's done...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: ExoticDisaster

7 months ago

AsYa OS - Unfolding Yesterday

Writer - ExoticDisaster | Graphicer - Oh_nakhrewaali | Theme - Bag Unfolding Yesterday Zoya coughed, pulling the scarf higher over her nose and...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69

7 months ago

AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts. AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts.

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's day contest - A Bag full of love. cover : oh_nakhrewaali | writer : missFiesty_69 |...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69

7 months ago

AsYa OS - Love, Lies and a Spilled Latte AsYa OS - Love, Lies and a Spilled Latte

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's Day contest - A bag full of love . cover : ExoticDisaster aka Shiri | writer :...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".