FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE - Page 48

Originally posted by: jazmeen

Res can't wait to read the update

At work but as soon as I saw ur pm m stantding in a corner reading it lol

Unres

Finally read it

OMG OMG

You made me pagal

I am keep reading it again and again

Totally loved it

I could feel my heart pounding at so many points

Specially the way asad asked all do you rmb this do u rmb that and den hitting part, Guilt, phupee's safety discussion and then I havo no place I was like awwwn my heart was like pounding and den comes tamrez And tehzeeb with asad's daoouge "they have a place but not here" man mar dala

Many many congrates on winning the award you truly deserves it man. I neva read anything other than love stories but I am fan of your suspense and thrilling writing and I have told you that many times eh.

I imagined ksG and surbhi in all the scenes like I literally watched it.

Not watching qabool hai not even one glimpse but always look forward for updates

Your pm always make me happy when I see you have updated.

Thank you so much for the pm love.

May God bless you

I am just in love with your writing

Keep rocking and please please update sooonn 😳

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

Oh, I have never thought that it was possible, but I have fell more in love with Asad Ahmed Khan after reading this chapter...Ma gentle, adorably possessive, overprotective and territorial man...!!! ☺️ lol

Zoya and Asad, Asya, they are something magical...so real, so true, so beautiful but still magical...!!!

This chapter is simply the best till yet...For the fact, I know writing more perfectly than this one is going to be very difficult for you...I know somehow you will manage, but still it's going to difficult...!!! lol Well, now that Zoya and Asad have taken a well-deserved break and aligned their priorities, it's back to the story. They still have to uncover Rohan's secret and handle him before he hurts Dilshad.

Congratulations for Best Author award...Very, very well deserved...!!! 🤗

Thank you so much! it was a surprise to me, but a very pleasant one!

Originally posted by: tehzeeb101

Thank you soo much for writing these stories! You deserved the award and I was literally at the edge of my seat while reading this newest chapter! It was AMAZING!!

Originally posted by: webuser7

Paly,

First of all Congrats on winning the award! Truly well deserved! 👏

Thank you very much. I truly was not expecting it.

Coming to this update:

WOW! AMAZING! BRILLIANT! MIND-BLOWING! FANTASTIC! SUPERB! AWESOME!

I have run out of superlatives to describe this last update. This update was so beautiful, I am speechless.

In your last comment to me, you mentioned:

"If you think this chapter is good, wait until the next chapter! I hope it will be heart-wrenching."

Girl, you delivered and how!! This has got to be your best chapter so far and I have been an ardent fan of all 3 FFs! How in the world are you going to beat this?! 😆

Oye, the pressure! Maybe I should just stop writing this story with this chapter. It can only go downhill from here. Who cares what Rohan is up to? I'm sure Dilshad will be just fine without Zoya's help.

Yes, it was indeed heart-wrenching! I actually got tears in my eyes , especially in the last scene.😭 Very emotional!

EXACTLY the reaction I was going for!

Do I need to say it? I LOVED IT!!

Patiently waiting for next Monday to find out what happens when they wake up! 😃

Originally posted by: rajnid68

Wow..this was absolutely amazing...

Did not expect this asad ...

Showing his emotions...

Not hiding himself behind a veil..

He was scared for zoya...

Probably...his fears out in front of his eyes..

He knows she is not selfish..

And loves his family...

But was not ready to acknowledge it..

Both in tune to each others mood swings..

Happy that asad is with zoya...

She will remain safe and sound...

Thanks for the pm...

Congratulations once again...

Originally posted by: notagain

Congrats on being chosen as one of the best author on QH forum, well deserved indeed. And a lovely chapter.