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Posted: 11 years ago
hey a nice update...Zoya s sooo smart n dis s what i alws want to see n i love possessive Asad...

Whats this Rohan upto???? is the trying to steal some deal from Asad s company???? pl continue...I know u updt on Mondays only but pl try if u can earlier...
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey tis is superb...
luv it...
she is so smart n hw she makes her brain work in all the different way is superb...
he is so possesive of her...
wonder wat is rohan up to...
very interesting...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Paly: I normally don't reply to feedback because I want readers to feel free to say whatever they want. However, I HAD to reply to your post. My responses are below.

Originally posted by: Rattyswami

amazing update...what the hell is that Rohan up to??? sweet one minute...mysterious the next😕

Paly: I feel this is how we all are - happy, sad, hopeful, hopeless, etc. These emotions are all part of the human experience. You've already gotten your first look at how painful Rohan's childhood really was and how he's built himself from nothing. There was no way he got up and out without SOME scars.

and this 'one step forward, two steps back' dance between Asya is quite entertaining😆 when is Asad finally going to gather enough courage to at least acknowledge his true feelings for Zoya, at least to himself if not to her...
Paly: Please be patient. You only have to wait one more day for the tension between Asad and Zoya to break. Of course, this is QH so a single day takes MANY chapters! 😉

And how long is Zoya going to be a GUEST in Asad's house...has she forgotten why she came to India in the first place???...she seems to be more interested in solving all the random mysterious surrounding the Khan Clan than fulfilling her Goal of coming to India...
Paly: Zoya no longer thinks of herself as a guest. Even Asad has clearly - several times - said she is part of the family. Plus this is QH, time is elastic! It's only been a few weeks since she went to Agput looking for clues. Plus, protecting Dilshad is more important to Zoya than finding her father.

Zoya dear it's okay if you consider the Khan's as family and want to protect them from all evil-doers but come on women...don't forget your own self while doing it...At least try to make some progress so we don't feel like you have NO INTENTION of ever leaving KV (Even though Asad will NEVER let you leave, you still have to try)
Paly: Again, please give me a few more chapters. Asad's feelings will be crystal clear in one more (QH) day.


Thank you for posting this lovely, thoughtful feedback!
Paly
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: friendsall

hey a nice update...Zoya s sooo smart n dis s what i alws want to see n i love possessive Asad...


Whats this Rohan upto???? is the trying to steal some deal from Asad s company???? pl continue...I know u updt on Mondays only but pl try if u can earlier...


I'm sorry but I can't update any sooner. My chapters are very long and detailed. I end up sending three revisions a week to my betas. I'm over-working them as is!

Thank you for reading and taking the time to post feedback,
Paly
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for the prompt reply😃 i felt so nice when I read that you don't usually reply but just HAD to reply to MY post...that makes me feel really SPECIAL😃...

I almost felt like it was an interview between an ardent Fan and her favorite Author😆😉...and don't worry I'll wait till the end of all your upcoming series for Asad to propose to Zoya...cuz knowing you it'll be something spectacular😉

By the way, did I mention that I'm a HUGE FAN😳 and I'm eagerly awaiting all your future ASYA tracks as well, I'm especially looking forward to 'PERFECT PARTNER ' 😃 I hope you continue with the QH mysteries even after that one...
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Posted: 11 years ago
of course
one of my fav writers has updated her story

I seriously can't wait to buy your book one day

you are brilliant

the way you characterize your characters

they way you pen down every scene

its wow

its not like reading but watching the scenes

you are the best

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Posted: 11 years ago
Paly, you know I love your work!! I have said it many times and don't get tired of repeating it! Just loved this update too! It had a right mix of suspense, thrill, pain, hint of romance, worry and angst! Although, there are many stories on this forum, what sets this apart for me is the suspense. I absolutely love mysteries!! I love your writing style and clear diction! How many times have I used the word love already?! 😆

Highlights for me:
  • You have taken Najma and Zoya's bond up a level! It's great to see Najma proactively help Zoya in Mission Unmask Rohan! 👍🏼
  • The girls thought of Ayaan!! Looking forward to some funny Raabert-Mona interactions. Wonder if the GEM will strike Asad again!! 😆 Rohan, Ayaan, who else?!
  • Zoya is my heroine!! An amazing brain and an even more amazing heart!!
  • Asad is slowly but surely realizing his feelings. Looks like he's gonna stop fighting the losing battle of his mind over heart, when it comes to Zoya!
  • Ooh!! Like all thieves and perpetrators, Rohan's mask slipped and he made a mistake!! Brilliant Zoya caught it! Loved how you showed that slip! I almost missed it!! Had to go back and read again after reading Zoya's declaration of Rohan's guilt! Brilliant!!
  • Rohan obviously is up to no good! He is searching for something in the Khan house. Eager to find out what it is.
I look forward to your updates!! I can appreciate how much hard work it must be to come up with such perfect and long updates every week. That's what makes the wait well worth it!!

2 thumbs up and lots of applause from me to you!

👍🏼 👍🏼

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow, fabulous update! Looks like Zoe's cracking the case. 😎

I love those little AsYa moments you add in there! 😃 And I'm loving Najma and Zoya! I also really liked how you mentioned Ayaan. 😉
Continue soon! 😛
-Fari. 😳 ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Please update😭
Edited by rajnid68 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is really an amazing update..m loving it..the way u r taking turns in ths story m really liking thats..pls do continue soon..n thank you so much for ur pm..pls do keep pm ing me.. Keep it up!.


--Sana

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