AsYa SS- ' JOURNEY TO LOVE' part 3 on Page 17 on 11/12/13 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wao this is interesting 😉
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Loved how the storm demanded he marry her...look forward to it
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Sounds interesting, please update soon.
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Nice start! 👍🏼
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Guys thank you so much for ur comments. n wishing u a very HAPPY DIWALI..have a safe diwali.

here is part 1. hope u ppl like it. n sry fr mistakes.


PART 1


Morning is as sunny as usual in London, People are rushing for their work , roads are full of cars buses and pedestrian , whose one eye is on the road and other on running watch.

Road side newspaper stands and bookstore are full of readers, who indulge in gossiping, as usual.

A Black Lamborghini enters in a huge banglow, which has a golden name plate -FARROUQI'S .

The Car stops in front of the main enterence. The car chauffeur open the back door for his master. A pair of black leather shoes with a wooden stick comes out of the car, a old man with grey beard and glasses on his face comes out, his face is as dull as his grey safari suit.

He enters in a big hall, whose interior is so classy, which shows the elegant taste of its owner, a beautiful color combination of white and red on the wall of the room, milky white light create a different flavor of the room, window behind the sofa gives the beautiful view of poolside.

A English boy in suit come to locate him.

"Where he is?" he asked

"This way sir" the servant show the way , he follow the servant.

The servant knock a room.."may i come in , sir?" , a weak answer comes out of the room which gives him permission to come.

He enter in a dull room, having no sign of life, a old man, around 70 yrs, lying in bed.

"sir, he is here to meet you."

"kaise ho Usmaan" the guest ask him.

Usmaan saw him n smile weakly.

"assalamwalekum "

"walekumuasalam" he reply to Usmaan n come towards his bed.

He placed his supporting hands in Usmaan's " Don't worry, media people have no work other then to spice up their newspaper to sell it"

" I dont knw what to do, sarfaraz" his eyes welled up.

"Tum uska nikaah kyu nhi karva dete", he suggest him.

"Par usse nikaah karega kon", Usmaan said in low tone.



A routine morning at " KHANS VILLA", all servants are doing their jobs.

A dangerously handsome deep brown eye man with prefect jaw line wear black formals , holding newspaper with sipping his coffee, sitting on dining table, suddenly his brows narrowed in disgust. He throw the paper on table, Dilshad, who is sitting besides him , get tensed "Asad".

"Wat happen to you, asad", she nearly shouting.

"The same daily routine ammi", asad said in very rude way n getting up from his chair.

While taking his coat which is hanging on chair, suddenly asad stops n think for a moment thn ask "ammi, where z dadu?"

Before she reply , he answer his question himself, " I knw where he is."

" But he is your dadu's childhood friend"said dilshad in defending way.

" but y we people ammi, y alwys we suffers because of them specially when we know she will never change."

before dilshad say he leave for office while mummering.


so this z it. hope u guys like it. plz do comment , it means lot to me.


Love

Shreya.


Edited by shreya11mehra - 11 years ago
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wow totally interesting...waiting for the update

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