AsYa TS In Love With Telescope - Completed !

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--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: laks_vish
dear Bubble,
I think we love the story because of you not bcoz it is abt Asad...Cute story..update sooon...

Awww

Thank You sooo much 😳

Will be updating sooon 😉

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--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: sweetnandu
that was so awesome

Thank You 😳

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--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: ziya117
beautiful!!! love the whole part!!
do continue soon! 😃

Thank You 😳

Will be updating sooon 😉

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vinita459

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Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: Bubble007

Thank You😳
You will have to wait for the next part😆

Oh no...update this one before the other one. I really want to read more on asad p.o.v.
Well, anyway I will be waiting.

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#175

wow!wow!!wow!!!...a beautiful chapter...loved it,thanks for the PM..😳

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life4me

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Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Awww. I love this story and I love you for that.

Please update soon.

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#177

Hey Nice update👍🏼...Beautifully written 👏... Hope ASYA get together soon. ☺️
Thanks for the pm n please pm me for the next part too on both the updates.😃

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snehasya

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Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#178

I am waiting for you but you didn't turned up

I was standing whole evening at the balcony

with a hope and coffee cup

I frowned and cried and died to see you

but you didnt turned up for moments few

now I lost the last bond that connected us

I am leaving this place and in my heart there is ruckus

I still hope you will come someday

I belonged to you ,you would say

I will jump in the air and do a little dance

if destiny allows me a second chance

wow what an update even he felt her presense, someone watching him

and he knew it form long time wow and he is doing the same now he has not been concentrating on the work in hand but only on her

this is just wow how many things you will make me fall into love with and how many places

ya I thought of many options but hospital was not on list for sure but even I have fell in love with the hospitals now

hope he meets her soon and confess the feeling is mutual and aweee poor baby she cried I ffelt a tinge in my heart too and he is smarty.

loved the way he laughed when she addressed his secretary a taklu 😆😆😆😆

telescope can work wonders in case of lovestory even I need to buy one now I guess😆😆😆😆😆

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KaranSG_01

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#179

How intelligent of Asad.
The way he found out how zoya was looking at him was something.and even he decided to watch her through telescope...that was so cute.
great story.
cont soon.