AsYa TS In Love With Telescope - Completed ! - Page 15

haute such a cute sweet part loved it

dis is such a cute story. I was smiling all throughout reading this. very very nice. Nice way to provide the card to zoya. Asad's POV was awesome. Loved the update.

aww..asad is so cute.. this is such an adorable story

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See...listen to your gut feeling to find out stalkers 🤣

Asad's pov was cute ...now he's watching her 😲

Poor girl ...didn't see him for a day

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Caught ur update just before I head off to sleep,
Great read as usual.
Love the fact that its Mr Khan turn to peep at Zoya
And him purposely hiding from her. 😉

Brilliant Brillaint👏...looove your story...

Awesome yaar...👏
Loved everything of it.Asad caught her and he was also doing the same thing!Best parts were
1.I need that card nw aunty,if I did'nt get it then I wont eat dinner today
2.I knew it,I knew it he is a fraud but Mr.Stupid Ahmed Khan never listens to me
3."Iam his sister...no I mean Iam his friend,very close friend"Zoya said.why cudnt I say that Iam his sister?I dont know wats wrong wid me!
4.How can he do that to me?Allahmiyaa!He is so rude,I wont leave u so easily now,Mr.Rude Ahmed Khan
5.Listen Mr.Rude Ahmed Khan.wat do u think of urself?Dont u dare disconnect the cell this time or I will come to ur office right now without caring abt my back pain and cut u into pieces immediately!😡
6.Iam Bond.James Bond..."Thanks for ur concern Miss.Bond"he said wid a smile😊
7."Thankgod in this whole world there is a girl...I mean a boy who cares for for me"Asad chuckled at his own joke😆
8.Now wen I dont want to go,they are telling me to leave.Allahmiyaa y u do that to me always?
9.No aunty there is no cure for this!she said looking at her😭
10.She was crying.I mentally thought of killing myself as I knew I was responsible for those tears.
11.She was telling me to keep a bodyguard n I smiled at her.For the first time,I felt something for a girl even I havent seen her yet.She was adorable.I liked the fact that she cared for me.❤️
12.She is intelligent n stupid at the same time😆
13.The very first thing I liked on her face was her dimples,I felt like touching those dents right now.She has beautiful,mesmerising eyes
14.Miss.Bond,Its my time now,not urs to enjoy!
Iqra yaar...love u a lot!🤗This is the best TS I have ever read till now⭐️ and late comment bt this is my longest comment on any thread till now I think...!Update soon:)

THIS IS FANTASTIC!!!!