Asya and Ayra FF : Devoted to you ❤️ 11 updated!!! - Page 10

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Loving the new twist
I feel bad bcz ur story is'nt red by a lot of peoples
U knw what i will share your story with my friends after all how can someone ignore such a wonderful story
Cont soon plz

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CHAPTER 11

As soon as the children went to thier rooms ...all the elders sat in the living room...their expressions changing from confusion to anger!

Dilshaad:rashid! Aap ko kisne kaha ke RAZIA zinda hai?
Rashid:aaj mujhe ek call aaya tha aur us insaan ne sirf yeh kaha ke "woh waspis aaye gi ya phir us hi ka koi aayega aur sab ko bigar dega"
Ab yeh sirf RAZIA hi ho sakti hai!! Kyunke aur kisi aurat ka na humne kuch bigara hai na bigarien ge...!
Faisal :yeh RAZIA BI AUR GHAFFUR SIFFIQUE death hui kese?
Dilshaad:bahat unexpectedly hui thi un ki death aur jitna mujhe lagta hai ...ho sakta hai woh zinda bhi ho...!
Faisal looked at her shocked :kya?!?!?
Dilshaad : theek ek saal pehle ...humare ghar kuch mehman aaye hue the...nikhat ki godh-bharai ke liye...uss din sab ke sab bahat kush the magar do log the jo bilkul bhi khush nahi lag rahe the aur woh gaffur sahab aur razia bi the...jab hum nikhat ki godh main nariyal daalne wale the ...tab hi ek aadmi ghar ke andar ghus aaya aur ghafoor
Sahab ke upar cheekhne laga...keh raha tha ke"mujhe tere har raax ke baare main pata hai !!! " aur "aakhir tu saamne aa hi gaya" ...ghafoor sahab aur RAZIA bi bahat dare hue lag rahe the...dusre hi din ghafoor sahab aur Razia bi ne bola ke woh dono kahin kaam se ja rahe hain aur 2 din main laut jayen ge...ek hafte se ek mahine beet gaya aur woh nahi laute ...ek din achanak se hamare ghar police aayi aur kehne lagi ke ghafoor sahab aur razia bi mar chuke hain...hum sab ko yakeen hi nahi hua magar jab woh log 6 mahine tak nahi aaye ...humein laga ke woh mar hi chuke honge...
Faisal : ya Allah! Ab hum kya karain?
Rashid : ab humein bas ankhien khol kar dekhna hoga aur uss ko pakarna hoga!
Shireen : haan rashid aap theek keh rahe hain...hum sab ab so jaate baaki kaam kal karain ge...
Dilshaad,rashid,faisal: chalo...

In asad's & ayaan's room:

Asad: ayaan mujhe woh file paas karna to...
Ayaan:...
Asad:ayaan!
Ayaan:...
Asad:aya...he turned around to see ayaan sleeping while sucking on his blanket...
Asad:yeh larka bhi na!
Asad stood up and went on the other side of the bed..just then his phone rang...thinking that it was Mr.singhs call who's call he was waiting for...and picked it up Without looking at the ID...

*picks up the phone*
Asad:ji Mr.singh ...files ready hain aap apne assistant ko bhej dijiye woh yeh files utha legi...
Zoya:Mr.singh..woh kaun hai? Aur aap un ki assistant se akele milenge ?!?!aap esa kese kar sakte hain?!
Asad:ZOYA?!?!?!?
Asad took the phone of his ear and checked the caller ID mentally cursing himself for not checking it before ...
Zoya:aap kahan chale gaye the?
Asad:woh uhh kuch nahi..aap ne phone kyun kiya tha?
Zoya:kyun main bagair kisi wajah ke apne hone walle husband ko bagair wajah ke phone bhi nahi kar sakti?
Asad (rubbing his temple) :no...mera matlab woh nahi tha...
Zoya: tau kya tha aap ka matlab...acha khair choro...aap kya kar rahain hain?
Asad:ji?
Zoya: kya . Kar. Rahain. Hain. Aap??
Asad:oh woh office ka kaam...
Zoya:kya!! *checking watch* iss waqt !! Aap ko bukhar tau nahi hai na ?
Asad:nahi! Bahat kaam tha iss liye..
Zoya:dekhiye abhi aap ko jitna kaam karna hai kar lijiye kyun ke nikah ke baad main aap ko kaam nahi karne doongi!
Asad: theek hai ..theek hai!
Zoya:Mr.khan...
Asad:atleast ab tau mujhe asad bolo zoya!
Zoya : par mujhe Mr.khan ki aadat ho gayi hai..
Asad: puri zindagi phir mujhe kya Mr.khan hi bolo gi?pata chala ke humare bache bhi 'Abbu' ki jagah 'Mr.khan' bolienge ...
Zoya: bachon se yaad aaya ...main ne humare bacho ke naam bhi soch liye hain!
Asad (smiling) : acha? Tau bataye?
Zoya :agar beti hui tau Anaya Ahmad khan aur agar beta hua ta Zayn ahmad khan...
Asad:hmm kehna pare ga kaafi achi choice hai...
Zoya:hahha thankyou jahanpana six packs!
Asad:yeh kahan se aaya?
Zoya:bas mujhe yaad aaya aur main ne keh diya !
Asad hears Zoya yawning in the other side...
Asad:chalo abhi main bahat thak gaya hun aur kal function bhi hai iss liye ab main phone rakhta hun ...
Zoya: ji GoodNight :)
Asad: GoodNight :)

*keep the phone*

After two seconds his phone rings again...

*picks phone*

Asad: ji begum kahiye?
Zoya:aap kuch bhool rahe hain!
Asad:kya? Main tau kuch nahi bhool raha! (Teasing tone)
Zoya: ASAD!!!
Asad:sorry haan haan mujhe yaad hai...
Zoya acha tau kahiye...
Asad: I LOVE YOU <3
Zoya : I LOVE YOU TOO <3
Asad: khudahafiz :)
Zoya : ji khudahafiz ... :)

*keeps the phone*

Asad smiles and then goes to sleep thinking about the call call that just took place...

Zoya and Haniya's Room:

Zoya smiles after keeping the phone and turns around to look at humera sleeping peacefully.
Zoya stands up and goes to humera and tucks her under the blanket! : Goodnight baby<3
Then goes and lies on her bed thinking about the call that just took place...

PRECAP: HAIDER and RIZWAN entry in the house...

Soo how was it...i know not that good but still hope you liked it :)
Pls comment and tell your opinion about and once again thanks for the lovely comments for the previous update

I was thinking to change ye name of the FF to " DEVOTED TO YOU " or " DEVOTED TO YOU FOREVER"

Yeeepppi I'm the first one to comment
It was awesome n I loved it
I'm madly in love with the story
If for no one atleast for me update every week it is awesome n inshallah u will gt more readers

Nice update...
Thanx fr pm...