AsYa FF - The Hate Story-ON HIATUS TILL JAN ! AUTHOR NOTE PG 55 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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why is asad behaving so rude😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved this asad
am confused about asad n noora relationship
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loved this part! it hurts to see Asad like this but I'm sure u'll reunite them soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome part
asad and noora ? confused


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

😡" What The F***? "

Zoya choose Aayaan! 😡 Sherni weds the Mickey Mouse out of some crap Muquadar! Phuuuhleez! Zaara ! Do better than Gul Khan!
You know I have told you before Asad deserves better. He deserves Me! LOL!😆
Why should my Asad get Aayaan's hand me downs yaar! When Asad was denounced for being weak and sleeping with Tanu, Zoya walked off saying No Dude! I cant use second hand stuff so why should Asad now!
Ok ! I shall shut up now! It is your story and a rather interesting one. Keep Asad angry and make Zoya suffer. But nice update and do post soon.
My take on your story is Noora is from a conservative family breaking free from her excess baggage on trouble some past and finds Asad's shoulder to cry. ( Such sexy shoulders who would refuse to take shelter ). Asad I presume will be using Noora to make Zoya repent and burn with redemption and jealousy.
Why does Zoya never have a job to find and live independently. Why does she have to linger around and screw Asad . I wish Asad tells her to make herself useful around the house.
You write beautifully Zaara! Hugs!

lol thank you for the comment ! hah I might just be gul khan 2.0 ! don't worry my akdu asad wont accept ayaans hand me downs but that doesn't mean he doesn't love her ! you cant kill a love ilke asya ! but asad still hates her with a passion and lets see what happens ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: chibi_deea

Great update! I love this version of Asad. I wonder why Zoya chose Ayaan and why is he so eager to get rid of her. It's kind of insensitive the way he is behaving. I just hope Zoya didn't chose Ayaan because of her ta umr vaada. Noora seems very nice

Can't wait for the next part! Please update soon!

even I love angry hateful asad ! tis is what I wanted to see in the show lol but anyways ayaans storyline about why he is like this will come later in the story but lets just say he changed when zoya came into his life
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: asadkiizoya

why is asad behaving so rude😭

asad is being rude because he is emotionless at the moment ! ever since zoya hurt him he has been arrogant and rude but now that zoya has come back he wants to hurt her like she hurt him !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey everyone I am glad u r liking this story and hateful asad ! here is another update I hope you guys like it and get some answers about noora and asads relationship !

chapter 5

flashback

so mr asad ahmed khan ! are you enjoying ur lunch ?

yes i - before he could continue noora cut in again ... eww salad asad ! how do you eat it everyday ? it has no taste and its not even food !

well miss noora ! i think its healty unlike your full of carbs and fatty burger !

noora laughed ! they had been working together for almost 6 months and everyday they argued about salad and burgers .. but asad ! and there was a knock on the door -

mr khan you need to see this its very important -one of his consultants walked in urgently and placed a file on his desk -

asad opened it and read the file - are you sure its from india ?

yes mr khan and if you dont buy more shares in your company soon you could lose everything !

noor watched asad and for the 1st time she saw a fear in his eyes ! and it worried her .. she had to help him ..

3 days later

noora walked into asads office .. his workers were running in and out of the office - asad was on the phone and she heard one consultantant say - mr khan they are bidding us out on everything thing ! we need more money !

asad put the phone down and said ! i dont have any more ! im losing my company - i dont understand who is this silent buyer ! and why are they doing this ! its all over and asad sat down !

use my money - noora came to asad ! i checked out your funds , if you take my money it will be enough for us to save your company !

no noora dont be stupid !

asad ahmed khan im not asking ! i am telling you ! take it ! and she picked up his phone dialled the last called number - told the auctioner the combined amount of their money and listened silently - few minutes later she looked to asad and said .. they backed down - u have your company back !

asad was speechless ! thank you noora - i dont know what to say ! how can i repay you

you are welcome asad ! dont worry - u will find a way to repay me ! and she hugged him ..

-- flashback over

noora sat in asads room and he brought over the papers for her to sign -- are you sure asad ? do you know what you are doing ! you are giving me 30 % of your company ! and making me the head of your mumbai office ! its too much .. and what will your family think ! what if dilshaad aunty thinks i am a gold digger ?

noora - he said softly and he took her hand .. its the only way i can repay my best friend ! after you gave me that money my company has grew even bigger ! so its your right ! now sign the papers !

-- after she had signed asad congratulated her and then that cold gleam returned to his eyes ! so tell me noora what did you think of my brothers ex wife ? did she say anything to you ?

noora noticed that whenever he spoke of zoya he went cold - even last night when he spoke to her he was very rude ! and noora didnt like this side of him !

well we didnt speak much ! shes a very quite girl ! she hardly brought any clothes just a few salwaar suits ! she went to sleep asa soon as she came home last night although i did notice one thing ! she always hold this necklace around her neck even when she was sleeping ! but why are you so interested asad ?

just curious- a necklace u said ? he answered back ! come lets go for breakfast !

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the whole family finished breakfast ... imraan and najma went up to their room to check on the baby .. noora pulled asad with her for a tour of his house and garden and now they sat in the lounge discussing some architectural business ..

zoya was cleaning up the kitchen with dilshaad and she kept on glancing towards asad and noora -- she had dreams about meeting asad again but she never thought he would be engaged to someone else ! and she saw the hate for her in his eyes everytime he looked at her ! he had every right to move on and it was her own fault that she lost him - she looked towards them again and she saw asad look at her and then take nooras hand and pull her towards his room with a smirk on his face ! it confused zoya ! was he playing a game with her ? was he trying to make her jealous ?

zoya ! phupi interrupted her thoughts .. everything is clean you can go ! and pleas eat when ever you are hungry ! u hardly touched your breakfast !

thank you phupi ! i dont have much of an appetite and she walked to her room - noora entered the room 10 minutes later with a bright smile and holding a file of papers ! zoya wanted to dislike her but she seemed really nice so zoya got up and went to her --

hi noora im zoya ! im sorry if i was distant yesterday ! its nice to meet you and noora hugged her ! oh zoya today i am sooo happy ! asad is the best ! and she twirled zoya around and let go of a dizzy zoya who stumbled to the door and bumped into asad - she took a step backwards about to fall only to be caught by asad who wrapped his arms around her waist and he pulled zoya up to him holding her tight and he turned to noora - give us a minute please - i want to talk to zoya alone !

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noora left the room and asad still didnt let go of a squirming zoya she tried to wriggle free but even with one arm in a bandage he still had a tight grip on her - he looked down at her - she kept her gaze down - did you want something ? she assked him in a whisper

he finally let go of her but moved a step foward to leave no space between them - oh zoya and he touched her hair ..i was going to ask you the same thing since you had been looking at me all morning ! and he traced his hands on her face ..and up and down her arm and around her neck ..

zoya couldnt breathe .. every touch from him numbed her body and made her skin burn - he still had that effect on her and she was a loss for words she couldnt reply because she forgot what he had asked ! zoya he whispered in to her her ear and she looked to him was he about to kiss her ?

asad - she whispered back and she felt a burning sensation on her and he pulled the necklace !

aah ! she winced in pain and her hand went to her neck and then she tried to grab the necklace from him but he held it high ! the necklace was her most special piece of clothing she wore - because it had the engagement ring asad had given her she never took it of for 2 years !

tears threathend to burst from her eyes and she asked what are you doing asad ? can i have my necklace back and he laughed at her !

oh zoya ! how can i give you a ring that was never yours ! you lost the right to this ring the day you stayed with ayaan ! but what surprises me he said mockingly is that you kept it all this while ! he faked a surprised faced and asked ! are you still in love with me ? and he laughed again ! this ring is not yours anymore ! it belongs to the woman i will marry and he walked out of the room leaving zoya humiliated and in tears !

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dinner was a quite event when asad shocked everyone by saying ! ammi i think you should know i have decided to get married in 3 days ! and he left the table followed by an even more shocked noora !

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asad ! noora came and slapped the back of his head ! are you crazy ! we are friends ! thats all ! this fiance thing was supposed to be over ! im not marrying you !noora declared!

and asad turned to her , with that same cold stare ! i said i was getting married noora but i never said who was going to be my wife ! and he looked down and she saw him holding a necklace and he winked at her !

-- so how was this update ? did you like it ? I know asad is being very rude to zoya but its going to be like this for while as asad doesn't feel anything but hate for her right now ! so do you think asad really wants to marry zoya ? or will he play her ? -- im not sure when I will update again as I will be very busy tomorrow and Wednesday - so maybe an update on Wednesday night or Thursday ! enjoy the Monday - xoxo zara
Edited by zara1ksg - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
excellent my dear friend. Pls update soon and PM if possible.
Lovely story
Edited by sheilasandhu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
asad is being so rude to her..

poor my zoya..😭

love the way, you are narrating the story..👍🏼

pheww!! noora is just a friend..

update soon..

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