Just When I Thought. AsYa/ Asad/OC FF Part1-Pg2(Complete)16/10 NotePg3

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Continue and pm me.. if you want my comments 😆 😆 😆

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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nilusoni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Wow its amazing
plz pm me for next part
continue soon

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EkPagliLadki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

thnx for the pm and nice update

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rajnid68

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Sad but an awesome piece. ...

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JustEthereal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Linsie
Chapter 1...

Look like Zoya stayed at SM... asya got separated...

now asad is moving on.. with amy... so bad

you are separating them...😭 or you starting from they separation
to reunite them 😲 😲

As a general rule, I hate tragic stories. But second chance romances, and gut wrenching love stories - I'm a sucker for them! But yeah, HEAs all the way.

Thanks for your comments.

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Adi my pet name

@A_bibliophile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Hi I just have one doubt as ad let amyra kiss him and he has a odd fondness for her he thinks about her she is a lot like zoya or is she even better so has as ad moved on the kiss part and amyra saying that I know all the right buttons so is zoya going to cry while sad will remain content or even zoya has moved on with ayan confused I she kissed him and asad never allows miss farooqui to kiss him
As amyra a ditto copy of zoya or is she even better cause she is crazy and sad also says u make me crazy his behaviour is Turing out to be the same he had with zoya pls dedicate a chapter to the differences in zoya and amyra

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JustEthereal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: ican
Hi I just have one doubt as ad let amyra kiss him and he has a odd fondness for her he thinks about her she is a lot like zoya or is she even better so has as ad moved on the kiss part and amyra saying that I know all the right buttons so is zoya going to cry while sad will remain content or even zoya has moved on with ayan confused I she kissed him and asad never allows miss farooqui to kiss him
As amyra a ditto copy of zoya or is she even better cause she is crazy and sad also says u make me crazy his behaviour is Turing out to be the same he had with zoya pls dedicate a chapter to the differences in zoya and amyra

Well, I guess my writing probably didn't get my point to the other side correctly. Amyra and Zoya have similar personalities; however the relationship Asad shares with both the characters is quite different. With Zoya, Asad has not been as compliant as he has been with Amyra. The intricacies of their relationship haven't been showcased by the story yet; just wait a little :)

I have been trying to stick to the characterization portrayed in QH for every character, but I guess it isn't working out perfectly, eh? Let's just pretend to consider my disparities as "creative liberty." Lol😆

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jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

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hi i like ur story very much

but i would like 2 suggest 2 plz put index on ur 1st pg

& updt each chapter separably, i saw after part-1 u updted part-2 also on same post. Cuz i have read part-1 i didn't knew that u put part-2 on d same post i had 2 check it then i came 2 know about part-2.

PM me 4 nxt part