kabhi lagta hai..........poem for AsYa - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anushreemishra

Unres pg 1
P.S.-I would have left a bigger comment but i am online from phone so quoting is hard 😭

shona your even one line comment mean a lot to me..so dont worry about length of comment😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujataraje

thanks palak😳
am glad you enjoyed it😳


i am not palak😆..lakshmi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: penfriend28


i am not palak😆..lakshmi...

ohhh i am really sorry dear😆
lakshmi thanks for liking poem and correcting me😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ras224

hey sujata its written so brilliantly👏...i just luv da choice of words u hv used coz it aptly describes da depth of situation asya is is ryt now...fab work dear😃...sumtym bk i also wrote a poem on dem not gud as urs bt still i'm posting it...i hope u lyk it😳

Dil ki ye kashmakash toh do pyar karne wale hi jane

Halat-e-bayan kaise kare hum par ye dil hi mane

Muhabbat ka jadu aisa hai phayla jaise mann ki baje tane

Pyar ke is tukde ka kaise kia jae jurmane

Kehte hai dastan-e-milan ho hi jata hai agar kismat de sath

Ruk jaunga main agar tum mujhe pukaroge kehke apni jazbat

Agar dil ka elaan zuban karde toh ho jae shay aur maat

Apke bin kaise bitaye unginat din aur akele raat

Sailabon ka pahad jo apne gadh dia mere seene mein

Rukhsat ho na kabhi who hamare dil se

Ye ajab si kashish kya hai pata nahi jo khiche teri odh re

Barsat ki tarannum mein chahta hu mukammal ho jae chahat ke ye silsiley


thanks dear😳
and am glad you liked it..

and you write so well,you should start posting it on forum..people will love it,,,,
i too write sometimes ..today was one of those day😆
i lived your creation ..and you are very good with words too
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice one
is this Asad to Zoya or
Zoya to Asad or both
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujataraje

yups😳
thanks dear😳


u r welcome.
And you are amazing writer. 👏

Have you already been into poetry writing or AsYa's judai has made you a poetess?😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing, beautiful, romantic, wonderful and very touching! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really emotional! *teary-eyed* 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is brilliant, very heart touching😊

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