kabhi lagta hai..........poem for AsYa

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Posted: 11 years ago
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just wrote something for Asya...
hope you guys like it😃



kabhi lagta hai sab kuchh fir se bikhar gaya
kabhi lagta hai ki vo khushiyon ka daur kidhar gaya

kabhi lagta hai ki kyu ham mil ke bhi na mile
kabhi lagata hai kab ham kyu aise ho juda chale

kabhi lagta hai main khud me sheesha ban ke tut gayi
kabhi lagata hai jo ek dor bandhi thi tujhse vo bhi chhut gayi

kabhi lagta hai kismat kyu nam hamara sang likhna bhul gayi
kabhi lagta hai umeed hamari dehleej pe kadam rakhna bhul gayi

kyu us mod pe aake khade hain ham tum, Jo do raaho me bant jaayega
tera naam dil pe likha hai mere gahra ,ret ke nishaan nahi ye jo pani se hat jaayega

main chhod du kya ummeed tujhse fir se mil paane ki
ya tod du vo rasmein jo baandhe hain mujhe jamane ki

kya karu kya na karu sab kuchh toh dhundhla sa hua pada hai
sab kuchh to bikhar gaya bas ek ishq hi ab tak sambhla hua khada hai

kyu hamari duaayein hi khuda ansuna kar ke baitha hai
aur ek yaar hai mera jo mohabbat mujhse bepnaah kar ke baitha hai


kya ab hi gunjaaish hai vo vaqt hamara vaapis laut ke aayega
jab fir se sehar hogi khoobsurat aur sirhaane tu najar aajega

kya ham fir se chhat se sitaare saath me niharenge raato ko
jab tu najro se apni pad lega fir se meri har ankahi baato ko

kya mere tere darmiya se ye zamana fir se hat jaayega
kya ye kaale badal ka dhuaan hmpe se chhant jaaega

kya teri meri dil ki tarah ,ye lakirein haatho ki hamare khud ko jodengi
kya fir se ishq ki hawaayein rasmon ke sarhadon ko hamesha ke liye todengi

mujhe kuchh nahi khabar ki aane wala kal kaisa hoga
ham mil bhi paayenge ,ya panne hamari mohabat k khali rah jaayege

kya. khuda dega jawab hamari duaaon ka is dafa ham pe raham khake
ya is baar bhi ham apne mukaddar ke aage sawali rah jaayenge...




P.S-this update is only for India forum members..dont copy paste on other sites and steal it 😃






Edited by sujataraje - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg... that was just beautiful Sujata...👏
just perfect for Asya...loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Di aapne mujhe rula diya 😭 this was just amazing
i just want to hug you after reading this 🤗

main chhod du kya ummeed tujhse fir se mil paane ki ya tod du vo rasmein jo baandhe hain mujhe jamane ki
These lines are so apt for asya right now...i wish ko zamaano ki rasmon ko todkar bhaag hate
Di you are very very talented and i get why your inlaws were pushinng you 😳
Edited by anushreemishra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You write so well 👏
This was absolutely beautiful

It made me tear up a bit😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb take a bow
it was fantabulous

mah fav line was
kyu hamari duaayein hi khuda ansuna kar ke baitha hai
aur ek yaar hai mera jo mohabbat mujhse bepnaah kat ke baitha hai

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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb...👏
very emotional...love it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You wrote it??
It was marvelously written I must say.👏👏
Fabulous it is!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was awesome...U have written so well!Perfect for the situation...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Unres pg 1
P.S.-I would have left a bigger comment but i am online from phone so quoting is hard 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey sujata its written so brilliantly👏...i just luv da choice of words u hv used coz it aptly describes da depth of situation asya is is ryt now...fab work dear😃...sumtym bk i also wrote a poem on dem not gud as urs bt still i'm posting it...i hope u lyk it😳

Dil ki ye kashmakash toh do pyar karne wale hi jane

Halat-e-bayan kaise kare hum par ye dil hi mane

Muhabbat ka jadu aisa hai phayla jaise mann ki baje tane

Pyar ke is tukde ka kaise kia jae jurmane

Kehte hai dastan-e-milan ho hi jata hai agar kismat de sath

Ruk jaunga main agar tum mujhe pukaroge kehke apni jazbat

Agar dil ka elaan zuban karde toh ho jae shay aur maat

Apke bin kaise bitaye unginat din aur akele raat

Sailabon ka pahad jo apne gadh dia mere seene mein

Rukhsat ho na kabhi who hamare dil se

Ye ajab si kashish kya hai pata nahi jo khiche teri odh re

Barsat ki tarannum mein chahta hu mukammal ho jae chahat ke ye silsiley


Edited by ras224 - 11 years ago

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