ASYA FF 'REVENGE' - Chapter 19, Page 128 24/09/2014

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taznim

@kaussar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

I love your writing.. And the concept of the story is also something different and the story so far is very interesting.. keep up the good work...waiting eagerly for the next update... thanks for the PM.😊

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Radhika. | Rads.

@--Radhika--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Thanks for the pm.
Awesome update!!

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aish-au

@aish-au

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

u r ff has became my addiction, whenever i get a pm, i always hope dat u r ff has been update.

luved asya convo, especially zoya's reply 👏

can't wait 2 see asad repent for the pain he caused zoya.

update soon plzzz

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Nim

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Hey Dear,

I am in love with this story. you have an awesome way of describing the scenes & emotions of the characters.

My heart went out for Zoya after reading her side of the past. She has been treated ruthlessly by destiny all through out & when she was on the verge of getting her fairytale completed, her dream broke. she must have been beyond repair to find herself the pawn of Asad's mind game. I hate him so much. I understand that Gaffur must have wronged him extremely but that didn't mean he could use his daughter to get back at him. that too without knowing the entire truth of her life.

Zoe has lived a life of an orphan throughout, compromising & submitting herself in front of her step mother & sister.

I want Zoe to teach Asad a lesson so hard that he gets it all settled in his mind & learns how much a heart aches when someone they rely on deceives.

Plz continue soon. dear don't mind but my like button has issues, it won't click but it's okay, cox I don't like the update, I love it!!

Love.

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vinita459

@vinita459

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Good one, I like your story. It's different. Please update the next chapter soon. Thanks

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Maryam Hassan

@mariam1368

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Asad loves Zoya bt still he's hurting her,he's wrong by doing that
Awesome update
Loved it

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princess101

@princess101

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

That was beautiful super excited for the next update :) please pm me once u update

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

See asad.. there bring back the sad memory... just to bad
for zoya...

She'd had enough; she would give him a glimpse of the Zoya Farooqui, the ice queen. - love that

now her time to give back...she is not that week zoya..

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Cinderala story...

zoya is the step daughter... and his a slave..
asad played her emotions for a year... - he is going to
pay more...

Zoya lost all her feeling for a father... who never wanted her..
asad choose the wrong person... but he have no
idea... what zoya went through... - went he learn this he is going
to regret

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#100

As she watched Asad looking at her expectantly 😔 waiting for her to break down, she sneered at him.
"Is he now?" 😈she asked in a cold voice
devoid of any emotion.. 👏