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Sangeeta, brilliant update!! I loved it!! Rather than finding it sweet, I found it hilarious! Instead of insulin, I need meds for stomach and face ache. I smiled and laughed so much!
The morning after started off sweetly and soon turned hilarious!
Zoya touched his lips with her fingers and smiled back, "I never realized you have such a beautiful smile. Itne kareeb se aapko pehle kabhie nahin dekha."
Bemused, Asad raised his eyebrow, "Allah ka shukr hai budhaape se pehle dekh liya warna sirf jhurriyan nazar aati."
Aww!! 😆
No more Mr. Khan??!! YIPPEE!! My dream came true!! Yes, yes yes!!
"ZOYA! I-I mean," a flustered Asad folded the mattress on himself, "how do you expect we will get home now? Our clothes floated away somewhere."
On seeing Asad buried under the folded mattress, she was in splits.
Me too! Me too!!
Mr. OCD Ahmed Khan will have bathe in dettol to get rid of the bed mites!! Oh, my stomach hurts!!
Instead, she opened an old steel almirah in the room and pulled out a few dry clothes from it. She threw a pair of jeans and a black t-shirt on Asad, "yeh rahe aapke kapde." Then she pulled out her jeans and a pink top, "aur yeh rahe mere kapde."
Asad was baffled to see the dry clothes, "Zoya----these are actually my clothes. How did they get here? Yeh----yeh," his face lit up, "you mean---this was all planned by---you?"
Ha, ha!! Full marks to me for guessing that Zoya planned it all!! You had admitted it in your comment after the previous update. But seeing it unfold like this was awesome!! Her Abbu's old home!! Wah! What a way to embark on her newly married life! The same home where she was born!!
"If he can give me a hospital nikaah, why can't I give him a soggy and rainy suhaag raat?"
😆 Payback isse kehte hain!!
Back home, things turned even funnier!!
"Wo"ammi---our car broke down, so we spent the night at one of his friend's house---paas mein inke Navy ke ek friend ka ghar tha. We borrowed these clothes from them also." Zoya bit her lip guiltily. She knew Dilshaad hated lies but it would be a bit embarrassing to tell her the entire truth.
It was a good thing Asad went to his room right away! Else, Dilshad would have recognized his clothes and called Zoya's bluff!!
Bedroom nok zokh was cute. Wow! Mr. Khan has lot of energy! Suhaag raat ke baad suhaag din!!
Cut to dining room scene!! Ha! Ha! Asad is like a puppy following Zoya with his eyes!! He is so distracted, he is unable to concentrate on what Dilshad is saying!
"Yeh tho paida hi 50 saal ki umr mein huye the. Now he is like a 70 year old man."
Bechaara Asad!!
"Th-that's not true. I will plan----I mean----plan the"" Asad scratched his forehead, fumbling for words.
To add to his discomfiture, Zoya decided to play footsies with Asad. He was taken aback and almost jumped in his seat, "yeh---I mean----yeh??" He gave her an incredulous look with an I-can't-believe-you-are-doing-this-in-front-of-everyone expression. The warmth of her foot threw him in a frenzy of emotions, rendering him wordless.
Footsie?!
Bechaara Asad!! Yeah, phir se!! That was so unexpected. I couldn't stop grinning!!
The whole "Honeymoon" talk along with the "foot work" was beyond funny!
Best dialogue at the dining table was from Najma:
"Yes bhaijaan and bhabhi----please go---otherwise you guys will drive us crazy. At least you will spare us the drama that's going on under the dining table."
Sangeeta, only you can give us drama, action, emotional and funny scenes with equal aplomb! Thank you so much for deciding to add a few more chapters and continue posting it on IF.
For me, YOU ARE THE BEST!!!! 🤗
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