FAASLE IV: END/EPILOGUE Pg 130 Nov 30 - Page 60

Originally posted by: me2you

RK mom PMed me about the update. Lekin uss waqt her DQS (Drama Queen Senior, my new name, apparently) koi aur duniya mein thi. The world of dreams, with her dream man...

Yes, it was time for my beauty sleep so it was not a first day first show for me.

But, I see RK mom made it and I am very happy for her. She deserves it 😃 Itna kam karti hain, and this is the perfect way to relax after a long day at work: Faasle update 😳

such good understanding between mom and DQ😊

Part 47

At the hospital

Tumney apni mohabbat se na jaane kitne faasle door kar diye. Wo faasle jo humne sirf nafrat se paida kiye the. Shayad hamari mohabbat sachchi nahin thi ya hamari ego bahut badhi thi (very very very beautiful)

As a child, she had always dreamt of a fairytale wedding where her abbu would give her away to her prince charming (So glad her dream finally came true...)

"MR. KHAN!" Zoya yelled on the phone - "lagta hai tum ab bilkul theek ho gayi ho." (Indeed, she is back to her old self)

"kye meri khushi ke liye apni ek wish compromise nahin kar sakti?" (Bechara Mr. Khan...I can understand his anger)

"Ab tho dono ki dono nautanki ban gaye hain." (See, I am not the only one)

I had always dreamt of that perfect nikaah (Well sometimes we have to adjust our dreams...)

jab mohabbat dastakhat de, usey qubool kar lena chaahiye (Wah...very well said)

Asad, dressed in a navy blue sherwani (Wow, I can totally imagine that)

"Zoya ka koi bharosa nahin hai." (True!!!)

Qubool hai (And there it was...the long life commitment...)

This ambidextrous business is very convenient Mrs. Khan (Acha??? Please elaborate Mr. Khan...LOL)

I have nothing to be ashamed of. I am legally married now. Agar aap sabko yeh qubool hai tho aap log shauk se room mein aaiyega warna yeh mithai enjoy kariyega (Hahahaha, you amaze me Mr. Khan)

JUST MARRIED! ENTER AT YOUR OWN RISK! (Nahin baba, I won't dare to enter that room!!!)

She was indeed Mrs. Zoya Ahmed Khan (Pata nahin, yeh din kab aayega in the show)

Shareef log suhaag raat par apne darwaaze bandh hi rakhte hain (😆😆😆)

yeh raat na aap bhoolengi na main bhoolunga (Romantic)

Grandpa held grandma in his arms all night on their suhaagraat (Aww, that's sooo cute)

if it's a boy then his name will start with a Z and if a girl, it will start with an A (I like this)

"Pehle sirf Zoya Farooqui ya Zoya Siddiqui ko dekha tha lekin aaj pehli baar Mrs. Zoya Khan ko dekh raha hoon." (Every girl would melt in his arms)

their first kiss as man and wife- as Mr. and Mrs. Khan (...speechless...) 😳

Very typical for Zoya to get all hyper about her nikaah, since this was not the kind of nikaah she had dreamed about. But not everything in life goes the way we want, right?

Thank God was done in the proper way; saying Qubool Hai' three times rather than once or just a 'jee'. 👍🏼

hope i got the qazi's nikaah wording right. A friend of mine sent it to me...

Mr. Khan was on a roll today. He was in some very different mood. Perhaps it had to do with all the excitement and new feelings. Is it indeed typical for Indian men to say, on their SR, that they have not done it yet??? I mean, that is perhaps just to see the reaction of their nayi dulhan??? Well, joh bhi ho, I liked that part! 😊

yes, I think all men (esp desi men) want to know the 'status' of their wives. Even if they pretend otherwise. Mr. Khan of course was very chalaak but Zoya bhi kam nahin thi

Most of couples would go for a kiss right away, but being the unusual couple, they first had a very cute and sweet convo about kids and grandchildren and then... The editing part, that was just very very very romantic... 😳 The song was very apt. Indeed this was the most unique and very yaadgaar SR.

yes, asya are a unique couple and i wanted them to have a unique SR...especially because we all keep craving for communication in the real show

Kya batao aur kaha se shuru karoon... Kitne dino baad you finally updated and trust me Di, it was definitely worth the wait. It was a Sangi-licious update! You have proved again that you are the queen of romance. No one can beat you in this. Every single word was just perfect.

Dialogues, as usual, were bang on; very well written and used. You created a very nice, sweet, romantic atmosphere. So good to see that they are finally married. A lot of us can't wait for their nikaah. If that will be a hospital nikaah, don't know but chances are there. Why? Because, we also saw the accident scene happen in yesterday's episode and that looked like a copy paste scene from your Faasle. Are the CVs reading this by any chance? Or have they really approached you for some creative input?

ha ha Narges...I just enjoy writing light hearted romantic parts. The hardest parts for me to write are sensual parts because I never want to write vulgar stuff but at the same time want to convey the true emotion...but shukriya shukriya. Hey, i would not mind if CVs steal my ideas...it would be an honor

Words are not enough to praise, lafz kam padh jayenge aapke tareef karne ke liye.

You are a phenomenal and gifted writer. In true Terence Lewis style: 'This was a chumeshwaari update!!!' 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

tareef karo na itni...

Thank you so so so much! 🤗

Another ⭐️ for you

There is only love for you! 😳

love ya too

P.S. When will Zoya call Mr. Khan by his first name...???

he he...yes i have planned that one too. You will have to wait for that special night😉

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Yes. Grandpa held grandma in his arms all night on their suhaagraat."

"Editing ki bhi zaroorat nahin padhegi." She laughed.

🤣

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

phewww...m done wid reading all 47 parts in one go ...n i confess..i was missing such a brilliant piece of writing by nt reading it ...sangeeta u r an excellent writer ...n dis is one of d best stories i ve read ...

d story has everything ...d essence of asad n zoya ...deir luv ...deir differences ...deir passion ...n ofcource d layers in deir characters ...

it is a very nicely built story wid growing characters ...
finally dey r married ...n dat too in hospital ...hw i wish dat happens in d show ...n suhaag raat in hospital only ...luvd it ...

update soon sangeeta ...
n if possible plzzz pm me for d next

Originally posted by: _vineeta_

OMG Sangeeta you just nailed this one, most romantic, sensual and cute even.

Loved the bickering in first, Akdu knows only how to tame her. Poor girl getting married in plaster and bandage, but then her not now dream man still know how to make it special and memorable. The grandkid part was uber cute. LOL typical Indian male, he needed answers but dont have courage to ask directly, but then didnt he know who he was asking😛. Love the dignity in your Zoya..

Loved the last line the most "to be cont..", I thought end is coming when I was reading. Dont care whats coming next as long as something, I am happy to savior this one for awhile..

When I get time I might read their journey to Istanbul, again! Feel like after this one specially😳..

Originally posted by: -KSGsmitten-

Ohhh why did you end here? I feel like somebody woke me up from a really beautiful dream. 😔 You have to update really soon now. Please. 😳

It couldn't have been any better! 👏❤️

This is the cutest, sweetest and hottest Suhaag Raat ever! ☺️

The way Asad ensured their privacy! 😆

Please please please don't keep us waiting for long.

Originally posted by: bheegi

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

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OHk i am back...hope i can make it worth your while and give you ladoos😆😆

OMG OMG OMG di you have made me so so so happy with this update😃i typed half my update i the afternoon but phir lapi shut down ho gaya😭😭😭and then i wasn't feeling well😭😭😭

I was waiting so long for this update and when you told me yesterday that you were half way done through the update you made me the happiest person on earth😳so as a good girl i went to bed early so that i could wake up around 3-4 to see if you have updated my faasle yet and i did but you were still at the office so i had to wait for the morning but the wait was totally worth it😳😳😳

And i am glad you updated it late coz had i read the update earlier i don't think i could have slept through the night😆😆😆

Hi anu...I expedited this part mainly for you😃...

Ohk so enough of my blabbering and now let us come back to the update😳😳

"Tum ne yaad kiya aur hum sab aa gaye."

as i read this line i was imagining everyone signig "tumne pukara aur hum chale aye"😆😆😆

I loved zoya gaffur convo😳😳very touching and emotional and i am so happy to see gaffur trying to make it upto zoya for everything and well Dilshad has forgiven him too now i guess for zoya nd also because he has paid for his mistakes...so i am happy that everything is well at the end😃😃

Ghafoor-zoya angst was a big part of the story so I had to sort it out for sure. In fact, agar Ghafoor itna strict nahin hota tho asya kabhie milte hi nahin...so we all owe Ghafoor that favor😆

"Tumney apni mohabbat se na jaane kitne faasle door kar diye. Wo faasle jo humne sirf nafrat se paida kiye the

Beautiful lines di👏👏

"jaise tum ziddi ho, Asad bhi koi kam nahin hai Zoya. This time he is very determined. Waise bhi nikaah se pehle tum usey dekh nahin sakti."

These two ziddis are made for each other😳😳I feel a little sad for zoya bechari she couldn't have her dream wedding but i guess when you are marrying the love of your life nothing else matters😳😳
"lagta hai tum ab bilkul theek ho gayi ho."

🤣🤣inka chikhan chillana is back😆😆

Loved the little convo between asad nd karan...i guess this was on audience demand

yes, everyone wanted KW to have some lines

"Zoya, there is nothing like a perfect moment for a nikaah," Zeenat added, "jab mohabbat dastakhat de, usey qubool kar lena chaahiye. Asad has gone through so much in the past few days. That man needs some happiness in his life. Can't you be happy for him?"

i guess this is the biggest truth of life...there is nothing like the perfect moment or perfect wedding...loved zeenat's advice to zoya...good to see that she is present for her sister's wedding and isn't MIA like serial

yes, Zoya shall realize that expectation of that perfect nikaah, SR, honeymoon is useless as long as honey is with her😳

Zoya sighed and then lowered her eyes, "jaanti hoon. Betaab tho main bhi hoon Mr. Khan se nikaah karne ke liye. Agar wo yahi chaahte hain, tho mujhey manzoor hai. Unki khushi mein hi meri khushi hai. And Najma, Mr. Khan se keh dena ki mujhey agar qubool nahin hai bolna hota tho unse nikaah hi kyun karna chaahti? Aisi baa two soch bhi kaise sakte hain? I am really angry at him for this."

Aww this was so sweet😳

Are you a fan of jaipuri quilt too?everyone in my family is too😆😆😆

i just read a book in which there was a lot of mention of Jaipuri quilt...i have one too

Zoya's qubool hai' chants were music to his ears. Asad was in seventh heaven. His museebat was now his permanent museebat- for life and he was ready for that challenge.

Asad miyan ki jaan mein jaan ayi hogi after finally hearing zoya say qubool hai after all bahut intezaar kiya hai to make that musibat forever his 😳😳😳

aww they are finally married...nikaah mubarak ho di😳

Asad's jaw dropped. He couldn't believe she had deceived him once again.Ambidextrous?

Zoya is actually ambidextrous😲😲i thought she was just joking around that day...if so why didn't she complete his portrait earlier or will this be included in post nikaah fun...some paint romance☺️

I think Zoya uses it based on convenience😆 Last time she wanted him to stay over

OMG OMG asad miyan kitne naughty ho gaye hain😆😆😆he asked for no intrusion😳😳

Aap log agar hamare room mein aaye tho aap sabko hi sharminda hona padhega. I have nothing to be ashamed of. I am legally married now. Agar aap sabko yeh qubool hai tho aap log shauk se room mein aaiyega warna yeh mithai enjoy kariyega.

☺️☺️☺️Mr.AAk did not just say that😲😲hayyee i want to sing the song"pyaar hume kis mod pe le aya"for asad miyan right now😆😆😆i seriously couldn't believe that asad said this i had to re read it to make sure i wasn't reading it wrong😆😆

JUST MARRIED! ENTER AT YOUR OWN RISK! U wanted a naughty asad...here he is

"Jee Mrs. Khan. Do you realize that this is supposed to be our suhaag raat? Shareef log suhaag raat par apne darwaaze bandh hi rakhte hain. Agar aap chaahein tho main khol sakta hoon."

Hayyee mr.kahn tussi bade naughty ho...this reminded me of the time when zoya saw asad undressing and then she says ki decent log darwaza band karke kapde badalte hain😆😆😆

Yeh raat na aap bhoolengi na main bhoolunga

I honestly thought they will do ahem ahem tonight but ya i guess zoya isn't well yet😆😆😆Lol zoya is so uncomfotable she changes the topic and asks him to remove her jewellery

Di the jewellery removing was so hawtt☺️☺️☺️

a question...log apni shaadi pe itni sari jewellery isiliye pehente hain kya?so that they can romance while taking it off😳😳😳 I think jewelery is a good starting point for most couples😉

Only you have the ability to make even a simple hug look so passionate😳😳

Jaanta hoon. You know we are a unique couple. Even our grandchildren will hear stories about our suhaag raat."

"Grandchildren?" She chuckled.

"Hmm," he murmured, "U rated suhaag raat.

" You mean rated PG rated?"

Yes. Grandpa held grandma in his arms all night on their suhaagraat."

"Editing ki bhi zaroorat nahin padhegi." She laughed.\

🤣🤣This convo was so so so adorable di...you are right you asya have a unique talent of roamancing through tehir words rather than action although we wouldn't mind some action either😉

Oh di you are just amazing👏👏how can you give us such sweet,simple and adorable convo that makes me go aww every single time...and i don't believe that you aren't like this in your real life😆😆

shukriya shukriya...duniya dekhi hai, au kya?😆

OMG the vignity talk was so funny😆😆😆 typical desi guy!

Chintu and bunty😆😆😆cute names😳😳aww baby talks so adorable😳😳😳

i guess i need a mr.khan in my life to really understand all this but i am blushing like an idiot and my cheeks are tomato red☺️☺️

"Pehle sirf Zoya Farooqui ya Zoya Siddiqui ko dekha tha lekin aaj pehli baar Mrs. Zoya Khan ko dekh raha hoon."

i love your dialogues di...never fail to make me go aww😳

"Ek part edit karna padhega." He whispered into her lips.

"Kya?" She whispered back.

"Yeh." He bent down and brushed his lips against hers. A faint touch soon melted into a passionate lip lock, their first kiss as man and wife- as Mr. and Mrs. Khan.

☺️

What an adorable chapter di..yes that is how i will descibe this one in one word adorable😳😳i was awwing throughout smiling and grinning like an idiot and lost in my asya lala land

P.S-agar U rated suhaagraat aisi this to PG rated kaisi hogi☺️☺️

P.P.S-You made my day with this one...did i already say that?well no problem i will say it again...i haope i made yours too and gave you ladoos😆😆😆

P.P.P.S-i want to dedicate a very romantic song to you time time for a very romantic update "tumse milke aisa laga tumse milke armaan hue pure dil ke"😳

lovely song as always...glad u liked this PG rated part...next one might be PG13😉

Love you loads di❤️

loads of hug and kisses Love ya too

Originally posted by: manognasai

Came home from college!
Awesome update Sangeeta di👏
Hospital nikaah ho tho esa⭐️
Loved every bit of it...🤗
Zoya-Gaffur's convo is amazing!
Zoya was shocked to know that they will get married like this in hospital😆
She wants to be a perfect bride for Asad.😳
Jab mohabbat dastakat de tho use qubool karleni chahiye👏
Finally AsYa are married...🥳
Asad's musibat now was his permanent musibat-for life and he is ready for that challenge!❤️
Unke saat unka shauhar rahenge❤️
AsYa's suhaagraat is the best!
Asad started talking abt grandkids already and then kids...!😆
They will narate their SR story that Asad held Zoya in his arms the whole night!
Edit karna padega😉
Waiting for the update...
Update soon!
Love U Sangeeta di🤗

Originally posted by: ...Asya...

"Ek part edit karna padhega." He whispered into her lips.

"Kya?" She whispered back.

"Yeh." He bent down and brushed his lips against hers. A faint touch soon melted into a passionate lip lock, their first kiss as man and wife- as Mr. and Mrs. Khan."

Loved This!!!

update soon!!!

do pm me!!!

Loved their silly & Romantic Talks!!

Really I Must say i realized how better is ur ff is!

before i used to avoid ur ff after reading till 27 parts as i could not understand anything as im just 12 now😳

Now i read this part and now i decided im ur daily follower of Your ff👏👏👏

lOVE IT

DO PM ME

TAKE CARE

BYE

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