FAASLE IV: END/EPILOGUE Pg 130 Nov 30 - Page 59

"Ek part edit karna padhega." He whispered into her lips.

"Kya?" She whispered back.

"Yeh." He bent down and brushed his lips against hers. A faint touch soon melted into a passionate lip lock, their first kiss as man and wife- as Mr. and Mrs. Khan."

and this was my favourite part!!!!

Originally posted by: webuser7

My DQS bachha!! 🤗 Mom tried to get you in the first few rows. Kya karein: kambakht time zone!! Kabhi aapke favor mein aur kabhi hamare. You will be proud of Mom, I said hell with office work that I brought home and sat down with my IPad and chilled out!! 😉

Faasle update was amazing. I am still grinning like a fool. 😃 Off to work now.

Originally posted by: webuser7

Res my spot

Unres...

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OK, no drama today except one small dance!! Oh yeah, I got first spot again!!! 😃 Time zone wins!!

You are so cute RK😃 Your responses and emoticons bring a big grin on my face

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Sangeeta, brilliant update! I just loved it! I am grinning like a silly kid!! It was so cute,adorable, romantic and perfect ending to a long and tiring work day!!

Sigh, where do I start??

i am glad it was a relaxing update...even I enjoyed writing it

First, lo behold, all missing people made an appearance or got a mention! Karan finally got to bond a bit with Asad!! 😆 Dadijaan is back too. QH mein BB let Zoya go with Asad and apne unpe apni dayya baras daali! Unko Istanbul ke next flight se Mumbai bulvaya!! 😉 Even Humeira and Farhan made an appearance, albeit a silent one! Kidding aside, I loved Zoya bonding with her family! Very touching scene! Especially the Ghafoor Zoya one! Glad father and daughter patched up!

yes, like a Hindi movie everyone shows up in the end. Ghafoor Zoya milan was very crucial

Very happy that Zoya asked her father again to rectify his mistake and apologize to Dilshaad! Kids teaching Parents to do the right thing!! Dilshaad is a very gracious and elegant woman. She handled Ghafoor perfectly!!

Zoya's reaction after finding out about the hospital Nikaah plan was priceless! She screamed at Asad!! Ha! Ha! 😆 But Asad and his minions pataoed the lioness. 😃 I found it funny that Asad told her if she didn't want to get married, say Qubool nahi hai!! How come he didn't tell her to run away??!! 🤣 I know, she's injured and he'd probably be scared to suggest anything like that to her, as she is quite capable of acting on it. "Zoya ka koi bharosa nahin hai."

Aww, AsYa are finally married! How cute was that!!

Hospital waala nikaah was always Ankie's idea...i owe it to her

Ha! Ha!! Zoya is truly Ambidextrous!! Zoya tricked Asad and you tricked us!! Yet again!! Sneaky!!

I wonder if we will ever find out the truth about her handedness

"Raat ko kaun rahega Zoya ke saath?" What a question!! Of course Asad rahega! After all it's his SR!

The stunt Asad pulled with the nurses was hilarious. Besharam Mr. Khan!! "JUST MARRIED! ENTER AT YOUR OWN RISK!"

What an awesome PG rated SR! "Yeh raat na aap bhoolengi na main bhoolunga." Aur yeh update or FF aapke fans nahi bhulenge!!

Now that I know a 12 year old also reads my ff, am I glad this SR was PG rated. I have the consummation scene planned out in one of the subsequent chapters but now I will really have to tone it down. Maybe I will put a disclaimer but no guarantees the 12 years olds won't read it

Mr. Khan is a virgin and curious to know if Zoya is one too! 🤣 How cute!

Men! Don't they all want to know? Even if they say otherwise, i think they all do

Zoya has thought of the kids nicknames! Chintu aur Bunty!! That was unexpected but super duper cute! I burst out laughing when I read it!! How apt!! F32 would surely appreciate that!!

Aur Asad ne initials A and Z decide kiye!! Aww!! How cute!! (Cute - How many times have I used that word in this post?!)

yes, i had always thought that I will name Asya's kids chintu and bunty - perfect homage to Kabhie

"Ek part edit karna padhega." He whispered into her lips.

"Kya?" She whispered back.

"Yeh." He bent down and brushed his lips against hers. A faint touch soon melted into a passionate lip lock, their first kiss as man and wife- as Mr. and Mrs. Khan."

Who said stories had to be PG18 to be hot??!! That one scene had a higher heat quotient than some explicit scenes I have read!

Ho ho...so I succeeded😉

You are a terrific all round writer: emotions, comedy, drama, suspense, thriller and romance! A beautiful blend of all emotions. Bravo!!

oye hoye...shukriya shukriya. Years of watching BW movies and imagination

Originally posted by: fanraya

OMG so romantic, really amazing chapter.. I am so😳 I have no words.. I am so glad they are married now, perfect wedding.. Thanks for this beautiful update, 🤗looking forward to next update, hope Zoe gets better soon and both can share beautiful moments together, they have been through a lot, they deserve happiness in their lives.

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

Beautifuly written part. I just loved the way Asad requests a no intrusion night. That was so out of his character.

Please update soon n pm me for it please.

Originally posted by: QueenOfMyCastle

Sangi - been long since I have posted a comment. Sorry. But I am usually reading your FF first thing in the morning on my cell phone. By the time I am on the computer, I forget. What to do...brain cells are slowly giving up.

Amazing progression of the story. The pace and writing keeps me hooked.

I am kind of sad that Ayaan did not get a chance to bond with Asad, but then his death was needed. And Asad did get a chance to know him.

So now they are married. fantastic. Will they all live like one big happy family? They could very well do that. Loved the PG SR. I did not expect Asad to talk to the nurses the way he did or even put up the notice on the door. But then love make u do crazy things and he was high on it...being newly married and all.

Lovely.👏

Originally posted by: subhkisonu

Thank you Sangeeta for the update!! I was eagerly waiting for this😊.It's wonderful!!😳 I loved the suhagraat part😳very much!! You are really romantic at heart. And I always love this type of stories. Your writing is so mature. Loved the convo between A and z. Waiting for your next update 😃