FAASLE IV: END/EPILOGUE Pg 130 Nov 30 - Page 55

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Posted: 11 years ago
Res my spot

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OK, no drama today except one small dance!! Oh yeah, I got first spot again!!! 😃 Time zone wins!!



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Sangeeta, brilliant update! I just loved it! I am grinning like a silly kid!! It was so cute,adorable, romantic and perfect ending to a long and tiring work day!!


Sigh, where do I start??

First, lo behold, all missing people made an appearance or got a mention! Karan finally got to bond a bit with Asad!! 😆 Dadijaan is back too. QH mein BB let Zoya go with Asad and apne unpe apni dayya baras daali! Unko Istanbul ke next flight se Mumbai bulvaya!! 😉 Even Humeira and Farhan made an appearance, albeit a silent one! Kidding aside, I loved Zoya bonding with her family! Very touching scene! Especially the Ghafoor Zoya one! Glad father and daughter patched up!

Very happy that Zoya asked her father again to rectify his mistake and apologize to Dilshaad! Kids teaching Parents to do the right thing!! Dilshaad is a very gracious and elegant woman. She handled Ghafoor perfectly!!

Zoya's reaction after finding out about the hospital Nikaah plan was priceless! She screamed at Asad!! Ha! Ha! 😆 But Asad and his minions pataoed the lioness. 😃 I found it funny that Asad told her if she didn't want to get married, say Qubool nahi hai!! How come he didn't tell her to run away??!! 🤣 I know, she's injured and he'd probably be scared to suggest anything like that to her, as she is quite capable of acting on it. "Zoya ka koi bharosa nahin hai."

Aww, AsYa are finally married! How cute was that!!

Ha! Ha!! Zoya is truly Ambidextrous!! Zoya tricked Asad and you tricked us!! Yet again!! Sneaky!!

"Raat ko kaun rahega Zoya ke saath?" What a question!! Of course Asad rahega! After all it's his SR!

The stunt Asad pulled with the nurses was hilarious. Besharam Mr. Khan!! "JUST MARRIED! ENTER AT YOUR OWN RISK!"

What an awesome PG rated SR! "Yeh raat na aap bhoolengi na main bhoolunga." Aur yeh update or FF aapke fans nahi bhulenge!!

Mr. Khan is a virgin and curious to know if Zoya is one too! 🤣 How cute!

Zoya has thought of the kids nicknames! Chintu aur Bunty!! That was unexpected but super duper cute! I burst out laughing when I read it!! How apt!! F32 would surely appreciate that!!


Aur Asad ne initials A and Z decide kiye!! Aww!! How cute!! (Cute - How many times have I used that word in this post?!)

"Ek part edit karna padhega." He whispered into her lips.

"Kya?" She whispered back.

"Yeh." He bent down and brushed his lips against hers. A faint touch soon melted into a passionate lip lock, their first kiss as man and wife- as Mr. and Mrs. Khan."


Who said stories had to be PG18 to be hot??!! That one scene had a higher heat quotient than some explicit scenes I have read!


You are a terrific all round writer: emotions, comedy, drama, suspense, thriller and romance! A beautiful blend of all emotions. Bravo!!



Edited by webuser7 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG so romantic, really amazing chapter.. I am so😳 I have no words.. I am so glad they are married now, perfect wedding.. Thanks for this beautiful update, 🤗looking forward to next update, hope Zoe gets better soon and both can share beautiful moments together, they have been through a lot, they deserve happiness in their lives.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautifuly written part. I just loved the way Asad requests a no intrusion night. That was so out of his character.

Please update soon n pm me for it please.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesum updae...ww...finly dey r married..thnks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OHk i am back...hope i can make it worth your while and give you ladoos😆😆
OMG OMG OMG di you have made me so so so happy with this update😃i typed half my update i the afternoon but phir lapi shut down ho gaya😭😭😭and then i wasn't feeling well😭😭😭
I was waiting so long for this update and when you told me yesterday that you were half way done through the update you made me the happiest person on earth😳so as a good girl i went to bed early so that i could wake up around 3-4 to see if you have updated my faasle yet and i did but you were still at the office so i had to wait for the morning but the wait was totally worth it😳😳😳
And i am glad you updated it late coz had i read the update earlier i don't think i could have slept through the night😆😆😆
Ohk so enough of my blabbering and now let us come back to the update😳😳
"Tum ne yaad kiya aur hum sab aa gaye."
as i read this line i was imagining everyone signig "tumne pukara aur hum chale aye"😆😆😆
I loved zoya gaffur convo😳😳very touching and emotional and i am so happy to see gaffur trying to make it upto zoya for everything and well Dilshad has forgiven him too now i guess for zoya nd also because he has paid for his mistakes...so i am happy that everything is well at the end😃😃
"Tumney apni mohabbat se na jaane kitne faasle door kar diye. Wo faasle jo humne sirf nafrat se paida kiye the
Beautiful lines di👏👏
"jaise tum ziddi ho, Asad bhi koi kam nahin hai Zoya. This time he is very determined. Waise bhi nikaah se pehle tum usey dekh nahin sakti."
These two ziddis are made for each other😳😳I feel a little sad for zoya bechari she couldn't have her dream wedding but i guess when you are marrying the love of your life nothing else matters😳😳
"lagta hai tum ab bilkul theek ho gayi ho."
🤣🤣inka chikhan chillana is back😆😆
Loved the little convo between asad nd karan...i guess this was on audience demand

"Zoya, there is nothing like a perfect moment for a nikaah," Zeenat added, "jab mohabbat dastakhat de, usey qubool kar lena chaahiye. Asad has gone through so much in the past few days. That man needs some happiness in his life. Can't you be happy for him?"

i guess this is the biggest truth of life...there is nothing like the perfect moment or perfect wedding...loved zeenat's advice to zoya...good to see that she is present for her sister's wedding and isn't MIA like serial


Zoya sighed and then lowered her eyes, "jaanti hoon. Betaab tho main bhi hoon Mr. Khan se nikaah karne ke liye. Agar wo yahi chaahte hain, tho mujhey manzoor hai. Unki khushi mein hi meri khushi hai. And Najma, Mr. Khan se keh dena ki mujhey agar qubool nahin hai bolna hota tho unse nikaah hi kyun karna chaahti? Aisi baa two soch bhi kaise sakte hain? I am really angry at him for this."

Aww this was so sweet😳

Are you a fan of jaipuri quilt too?everyone in my family is too😆😆😆

Zoya's qubool hai' chants were music to his ears. Asad was in seventh heaven. His museebat was now his permanent museebat- for life and he was ready for that challenge.

Asad miyan ki jaan mein jaan ayi hogi after finally hearing zoya say qubool hai after all bahut intezaar kiya hai to make that musibat forever his 😳😳😳

aww they are finally married...nikaah mubarak ho di😳

Asad's jaw dropped. He couldn't believe she had deceived him once again.Ambidextrous?

Zoya is actually ambidextrous😲😲i thought she was just joking around that day...if so why didn't she complete his portrait earlier or will this be included in post nikaah fun...some paint romance☺️

OMG OMG asad miyan kitne naughty ho gaye hain😆😆😆he asked for no intrusion😳😳

Aap log agar hamare room mein aaye tho aap sabko hi sharminda hona padhega. I have nothing to be ashamed of. I am legally married now. Agar aap sabko yeh qubool hai tho aap log shauk se room mein aaiyega warna yeh mithai enjoy kariyega.

☺️☺️☺️Mr.AAk did not just say that😲😲hayyee i want to sing the song"pyaar hume kis mod pe le aya"for asad miyan right now😆😆😆i seriously couldn't believe that asad said this i had to re read it to make sure i wasn't reading it wrong😆😆

JUST MARRIED! ENTER AT YOUR OWN RISK!

"Jee Mrs. Khan. Do you realize that this is supposed to be our suhaag raat? Shareef log suhaag raat par apne darwaaze bandh hi rakhte hain. Agar aap chaahein tho main khol sakta hoon."

Hayyee mr.kahn tussi bade naughty ho...this reminded me of the time when zoya saw asad undressing and then she says ki decent log darwaza band karke kapde badalte hain😆😆😆

Yeh raat na aap bhoolengi na main bhoolunga

I honestly thought they will do ahem ahem tonight but ya i guess zoya isn't well yet😆😆😆Lol zoya is so uncomfotable she changes the topic and asks him to remove her jewellery

Di the jewellery removing was so hawtt☺️☺️☺️

a question...log apni shaadi pe itni sari jewellery isiliye pehente hain kya?so that they can romance while taking it off😳😳😳

Only you have the ability to make even a simple hug look so passionate😳😳

Jaanta hoon. You know we are a unique couple. Even our grandchildren will hear stories about our suhaag raat."

"Grandchildren?" She chuckled.

"Hmm," he murmured, "U rated suhaag raat.

" You mean rated PG rated?"

Yes. Grandpa held grandma in his arms all night on their suhaagraat."

"Editing ki bhi zaroorat nahin padhegi." She laughed.\

🤣🤣This convo was so so so adorable di...you are right you asya have a unique talent of roamancing through tehir words rather than action although we wouldn't mind some action either😉

Oh di you are just amazing👏👏how can you give us such sweet,simple and adorable convo that makes me go aww every single time...and i don't believe that you aren't like this in your real life😆😆

OMG the vignity talk was so funny😆😆😆

Chintu and bunty😆😆😆cute names😳😳aww baby talks so adorable😳😳😳

i guess i need a mr.khan in my life to really understand all this but i am blushing like an idiot and my cheeks are tomato red☺️☺️

"Pehle sirf Zoya Farooqui ya Zoya Siddiqui ko dekha tha lekin aaj pehli baar Mrs. Zoya Khan ko dekh raha hoon."

i love your dialogues di...never fail to make me go aww😳

"Ek part edit karna padhega." He whispered into her lips.

"Kya?" She whispered back.

"Yeh." He bent down and brushed his lips against hers. A faint touch soon melted into a passionate lip lock, their first kiss as man and wife- as Mr. and Mrs. Khan.

☺️

What an adorable chapter di..yes that is how i will descibe this one in one word adorable😳😳i was awwing throughout smiling and grinning like an idiot and lost in my asya lala land

P.S-agar U rated suhaagraat aisi this to PG rated kaisi hogi☺️☺️

P.P.S-You made my day with this one...did i already say that?well no problem i will say it again...i haope i made yours too and gave you ladoos😆😆😆

P.P.P.S-i want to dedicate a very romantic song to you time time for a very romantic update "tumse milke aisa laga tumse milke armaan hue pure dil ke"😳

Love you loads di❤️

loads of hug and kisses


Edited by anushreemishra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was the best and awesome update...I was grinning like paagal in my col bus.AsYa hospital nikaah and their cute SR...Col aagayi hai.wil comment later!
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update and i loved the way asad requested no intrusions on his sr. nd thanks for bringing some scenes with karan.
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Posted: 11 years ago
a beautiful and romantic update!!!
I loved it !😃

amazing suhaagrat😆😆

continue soon😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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a unique nikaah and suhagraat indeed.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sangi - been long since I have posted a comment. Sorry. But I am usually reading your FF first thing in the morning on my cell phone. By the time I am on the computer, I forget. What to do...brain cells are slowly giving up.
Amazing progression of the story. The pace and writing keeps me hooked.
I am kind of sad that Ayaan did not get a chance to bond with Asad, but then his death was needed. And Asad did get a chance to know him.

So now they are married. fantastic. Will they all live like one big happy family? They could very well do that. Loved the PG SR. I did not expect Asad to talk to the nurses the way he did or even put up the notice on the door. But then love make u do crazy things and he was high on it...being newly married and all.

Lovely.👏

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