FAASLE IV: END/EPILOGUE Pg 130 Nov 30

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Mehvish Fatima

@MissSparkling

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

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OMG its so painful update

Poor FAmily

Awww i hate this Ayaan man he is soo cheap..sirf apni family ko protect kar raha h.. hmm was thinking wht if he is up 2 smthg 😆

wow zoya calls her Abbu finally

hmm its was so nice update do cont nd update ASAP😃

Edited by Missvishtoofani - 11 years ago

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-khaleesi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#172

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Another heart wrenching update!! 👏 👏 👏

Once again you teared me up.

I absolutely love Zoya-helping-a-distraught-Asad kinda scenes.

I can't wait too see more interactions between Ghafoor and Zoya. I am jonesing for them in QH. 😔

Is Anwar gonna do something?

So Ayaan's gonna say yes now? He is gonna have a fate worse than Rashid soon enough. Who is his real father bdw? 😕

You really need to update soon Sangeeta Ji. If this FF was a novel I would have read it in one sitting, still would have wanted more.

Please please please update soon.

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anushreemishra

@anushreemishra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#173

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So i had a great sunday mainly because i had my favorite pasta for dinner😃and i thought the day couldn't become any better but it did it did because you updated😃I was not expecting an update today but wow unexpected pleasures are even better😃Now will sleep very very peacefully tonight😃

and aj to aapne kafi jaldi bhi update kar diya mujhe zyada der tak jagan bhi nahi pada😆

this was the best thing that could have happened before me going off to bed makes up for me not eating sweet too😆

Well now coming to the update it was really really really very emotional😭😭😭

i felt like crying😭😭😭

I think this is the first time that asad has actually cried infront of zoya and i am so glad she is there for him at this hard time

I can't believe that even after receiving teh news of his father's death ayaan didn't return to bid him a final goodbye...no matter how much a parent has ignored you he deserves to a final goodbye from his children and yahan par to Rashid fulfilled all his duties as a parent even though he wasn't ayaan's real dad😕yes he could never love ayaan the way ayaan has alwayes wanted him to but still...i feel really sorry for Rashid and although i can understand why ayaan did what he did and he must be feeling really bad for not being able to meet rashid for one last time but i am still very disappointed and angry with him😡he is running away from his responsibilty.Fate gives him lot of chances to redeem himself but he just keeps on rejecting them

I can't believe that Shireen is actually such a woman...her husband just died and instead of going and seeing him and crying she is shouting and badmouthing dilshad🤢she is a disgusting woman.Aise waqt mein to koi bhi sab kuch bhula kar sirf deceased person pe dhyan deta hai...I can see that you really hate shireen di😆

Waah shireen waah you couldn't get your husband to love you and you are blaming dilshad for that...some people can never see their faults can they?😡

"Shireen, jis rishte ki neev zabardasti ya saazish se bani ho, us rishte ki deewarein kabhie na kabhie waqt se pehle gir hi jaati hain. Kaash tumne Rashid ke saath mohabbat ka rishta joda hota, kam se kam wo waqt se pehle aise tadap tadap ke jaate tho nahin. Mujhey afsos nahin hai ki maine Rashid ko kho diya tha, afsos yeh hai ki unhone 22 saal bilkul tanhaa aur pareshani mein guzaare. Mujh par ungli uthaane se pehle, apne girahbaan mein bhi jhaank lo Shireen."

👏Waah kya jawaab that dilshad momma ka ...loved it...mujhe walima wali sherni momma ki yaad aa gayi jiska sirf ek hi waar kafi hai

Good to see asad so quick on his feet even during such times and ordering seal on all exits..

he must be a damn good navy officer...i have to ask to you have a thing for military men?😉

OMG shireen told everyone that ayaan is not Rashid's son😲chalo finally sach bahar aa gaya..i feel bad for Dilshad she must be feeling so guilty for not fighting for her love especially when her love was innocent all along

i am glad to see asad taking responsibilty.

Najma called Karan...so this was asad nd karan's first meeting right?

Di can we please have some light scenes with the whole family including karan at the end of the story😳and i hope you remember my other request too

I loved asya convo...very pure and touching😳

Mujhey aaj ehsaas hua ki main apne abbu se kitni mohabbat karta tha.

Kehte hain na ki kissi bhi cheez ya insaan ki ehmiyat ka ehsaas tabhi hota hai jab wo humse door ho jata hai

i loved how they stopped each other from blaming themselves..they have surely come a very very long way😳

Zoya, let's promise that we will never repeat the mistakes of our parents. Hum kabhie ek doosre ke beech mein kisi aur ko nahin aane denge. No matter what, we will always trust each other. Hamare beech koi bhi faasla hum dono ke yakeen aur mohabbat se badha nahin hoga

loved these lines very very beautiful especially teh italisized part😳

Meri zimmedari mere usoolon se kahin zyaada ehmiyat rakhti hai.

wow i am proud of zoya kya baat kahi hai

So zoya calls her abbu...i guess more than telling him about Rashid she wanted to start mending her realtions with him lest it be too late..i guess seeing asad yearing for her father made her crave for her own.But i loved that she asked Gaffur to apologize to dilshad...i loved when she called herself a part of dilshad's family...yes she was talking to her dad but she didn't forget that she was her phoopi's daughter too😳'

How i wish to see a dilshad zoya hug soon and asad smiling seeing them together😭but i guess that will have to wait😭

We need to find that Istanbul connection

The istanbul connection..hmm i guess the climax is coming real soon😉

OMG razia is pure evil..she doesn't even love humeira and farhanhow easily she said that she will kill ayaan if he couldn't complete his task?did she even think what will happen to humeira nd farhan if something happened to ayaan?how selfish is she?🤢

So Razia asks ayaan to get her zoya whether dead or alive...oh mangalpuria asad on its way..yaaay

It will be just asya nd family at the end na...ayaan will never become a part of thsi family is my guess and i think i am right?😉

Love you loads di🤗

Edited by anushreemishra - 11 years ago

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webuser7

@webuser7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#174

Oh wow! Sunday treat! Let me res my spot and join the bandwagon!

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What an amazing surprise for a lazy Sunday afternoon! I was actually getting bored and needed a reason to postpone a task that I need to do. Lo behold! An update of my fave FF!! All the more sweeter as it was unexpected!! 😃

You truly are a gifted writer!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Yet another tear-jerker update! But it was needed to move the story along. Rather than go scene by scene, I'd like to mention by character(s).

Rashid: Poor, misguided bloke finally got to RIP. His only son, the one he craved for all the years they were separated, got to perform the final rites. While his "adopted" stepson was missing in action. Poetic justice. You didn't mention Shireen in the KV for the prayer ceremony. So I am guessing she was OK with Dilshad's family performing everything and chose not participate in it? That's too bitter! Why didn't they divorce each other years ago? Rashid himself had developed underworld contacts, so there was no reason to fear Razia and her targeting his first family. Or may be there was! What a colossal waste! But, it was better he departed this way, instead of going to jail! 😭

Ayaan: I'll say this again. He is your most complicated character IMO. Right when I feel sorry for him, he pulls another fast one. I kinda can understand him running away to protect his family. Even not returning for Rashid's funeral. But what's this? Is he gonna trade Zoya for his family? I think he is quite capable. The one who could pull a gun on Zoya and squeeze her neck, can surely plan to kill her. Unless, of course the author chooses to redeem his character too!! 😉

Razia: not worth mentioning. Pure evil. Truly a heartless and despicable woman.

Shireen: No words for this woman. 😡 She didn't hate Rashid but was probably bitter for not "winning his love". But, yeh kya? She wasn't part of the final rites and prayer? She is truly Razia's sister! Now, I hate pointing it out. But, did you miss a tiny fact in this almost flawless update? Ayaan did not tell Shireen that AK is Asad, so her reaction at seeing him with Dilshad was a bit amiss. Shouldn't she have questioned what he was doing there and then figure out he was indeed Asad. Did I miss anything? With us fans pointing out possible loopholes, you now know how the CVs, who have to churn out daily updates, feel!!😆 But then I really can't compare this masterpiece to the current illogical crapfest.

Dilshad: Poor woman. Finally realized that whatever happened years ago was not entirely Rashid's fault. He had not betrayed her love. Imagine finding out that Ayaan was not Rashid's son. Too late for their relationship but at least she now knows that he always loved her. I am going to say another thing yet again: what a waste! But she is a strong woman of substance and character. Hence can hold her head up high!!

Najma: lost her Abbu yet again. Didn't get any chance to bond with him. She didn't have much to do in this update!!

KW: not worth mentioning. 🤣

Zeenat: is back with a guest appearance! Oh, how I miss her and Jeeju in the show!! I can't wait to see her reaction when she finds out Anwar's truth! Oh boy, that track is pending too!!

Ghafoor: Zoya is indeed the light of this egotistical man's life. Rashid protected Zoya the last 5yrs and Ghafoor saved Asad's life. The Istanbul connection!! He still has a long way to go to redeem his sins! Why do I feel that will happen with the Mangalpuri scene when his favorite daughter is in danger? Is death his redemption too? Else either he has to go to jail or turn into state witness! I had wondered how Asad will figure out where Ayaan is and who the head of the unit was. I guess the Istanbul connection will help with the reveal! Yeah, yeah, I know the drill by now! Wait and watch!! 😉 😆

Asad: Aww, poor sweetheart. He was so broken to find out the truth about his father. He finally acknowledged that he loved his Abbu! At least, he got his due as a son and got to perform the final rites. Like his mother, he is a man of substance and character and does not shy away from his responsibilities!

Zoya: My true BraveHeart!! (Told you I was a tad bit biased about Zoya 😉 ) Not only does she support her new family, finally decided to do the right thing and spoke to her Abbu. She gave him the bad news and asked him to apologize to Dilshad and family. Sometimes kids have to tell their parents how to correct a wrong!! 👏 My kind of a girl!

Asad-Zoya: Yup, they are one unit and deserve a special mention. The highlight of the update for me was their scene after Asad comes back home after Rashid's burial. While they are not legally married, Zoya is mentally, emotionally and spiritually Asad's better half! She laid out his clothes for a shower and comforted him in his time of grief. I loved Asad realizing that Zoya's love and trust was more powerful than even his Ammi's love for his Abbu. Loved their promise to each other to forever trust each other.

Mangalpur on its way!! Yippee!! Looks like you are gonna wrap this up in a few more updates!! How many more remaining and when is the next one??!!

Once again 👏 👏 for a brilliant, emotional yet fast moving update! Story is approaching the climax!

Edited by webuser7 - 11 years ago

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@metoyou

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Posted: 11 years ago

#175

Sundays for me is: Family time, chilling around (if duty is not calling) and of course Faasle update. Let me share a funny story with you:

RK Mom and I were chatting with each other by PM and one of her PMs was: There is an update of Faasle, go and reserve your spot! 😆

See Di, that is one of the many jhalaks of your crazy fans 😆

At the hospital

It was an irony that the day she had gotten engaged was the day he bid goodbye to the world. He was no longer the caretaker to his son's amaanat (As if, The Almighty, wanted to wait for that engagement day; Giving Zoya back to Asad so that Rashid could leave this world in peace and relief)

Family waiting room

Mujh se zyaada," Asad's voice cracked, "uska haq hai abbu par."

Ship

"I-I am sorry abbu. Main aapko aakhiri alvida bhi nahin keh sakaa."

The elder son, who has hated his abbu for the most of his life is all broken that he has lost his father, in fact his abbu took his last breath before his eyes.

The other son, who actually is not Rashid's son. left the country and was not even there to bid farewell to his abbu. The one who has the poora haq is there and the one who was supposed to be there, is not...what a contrast in scenes and characters. Amazing! 👏

Family waiting room

Mujhey afsos nahin hai ki maine Rashid ko kho diya tha, afsos yeh hai ki unhone 22 saal bilkul tanhaa aur pareshani mein guzaare (The true essence and significance of pure love. Thinking and caring more about the other than yourself)

Abbu ka janazah main le jaaunga ammi (👍🏼)

Asad's house

I am sure Rashid uncle's soul is resting in peace after he knows you have all forgiven him (He waited for Asad to come back to Zoya and to come back to him as the son he craved for in all those years)

Hamare beech koi bhi faasla hum dono ke yakeen aur mohabbat se badha nahin hoga (Very well said)

Walaikum Salaam beti (You know what I mean, right?) 👍🏼

"Unhein wo bimaari thi jo sirf ek dost de sakta tha. It's called heartbreak abbu." (Wow...that bemari was even worse than his drinking problem)

Hum bhi bahut pashemaan hain (👍🏼)

The love and understanding between Asad and Zoya is something we all can learn from. They do not want to make the same mistakes like Rashid and Dilshaad. Zoya has become very samajdar, of course she will stay there with her Mr. Khan. Also, very good of her to call her abbu and tell him about Rashid's death. It's not that she wanted to give him the bad news, but its because she wants her abbu to apology to Dilshaad and her family because like she said; she belongs to that family and they are here responsibility also.

Very nice portrayal of the growth in Zoya's character 👏

Dubai

Ayaan fell on her feet (Damn, he begged her?!) 😲

Shireen's and Dilshaad's face off was very nice. Finally the a part of the truth came out.

Ghafoor is coming to Mumbai means more things will be clarified.

How did I not think about the whole janazah before... The previous chapter made me speechless to such an extent that I totally forgot to think about the Rashid's last rites...

Asad is already pissed off with Ayaan for not showing up and now this is just adding fuel to that fire.

Ayaan...what will he do? I know his family means a lot for him, therefore I won't be surprised if he takes Razia's side. But, Dilshaad's family is the only 'family' he has now. I mean, his relationship with Shireen was never that good and by taking Asad's side he can probably live a good and secure life after all those years of crime.

I can see a big face off between the two brothers and honestly, I think Ayaan's story is also coming to and end soon. Why do I think that? Because, Farhaan needs AsYa as parents 😊

Oh God, lots of things happening here. Ek dum real daily soap ke tarah...

You did it again, Di...you made my cry again. It was indeed a heavy dose of emotions...

Before I forget, a special mention to you for using the words like 'janazah' and 'pashemaan', true Urdu words and that makes the story and its dialogues so much more realistic. Great job!👏👍🏼

Thank you Di for this fantastic update. The real drama starts now...

Today, I will give you a star. Not because this chapter deserves just one star but because you are a star ⭐️

Edited by me2you - 11 years ago

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shikaDD

@shikaDD

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#176

oh god!! poor ayan
nyc update
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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani
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OMG its so painful update

Poor FAmily

Awww i hate this Ayaan man he is soo cheap..sirf apni family ko protect kar raha h.. hmm was thinking wht if he is up 2 smthg 😆

wow zoya calls her Abbu finally

hmm its was so nice update do cont nd update ASAP😃

thanks dear...the family needed to mourn and find out the truth...all secrets are gradually coming out

Let's see what happens next...Mangalpur on the way??😉

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manognasai

@manognasai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#178

Very emotional update...I was crying reading this!😭I cry really fast...Asad and his family came to knw that Ayan is not Rashid's son!I feel so bad for Asad...he is so guilty for hating Rashid so much.Zoya called her abbu...so he wil com n ask for Dilshad's forgiveness.Im sure wen they com to knw that Gaffur only released Asad,they wil forgive him!This Ayan ka kuch nahi hosakta..he is so selfish that he dint even attend his abbu's funeral!In this part bahut saare faasle door hogaye hai...!waiting for nxt update:)

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#179

Hey nice update...was very imotional. Hope Asad n Gaffour are able to protect Zoya from Razia n Aayan.
Why is this aayan so evil. I hate him. Though i dont like him in the actual show either.

Please update soon n pm me for the next part.

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Nisha

@nisha150

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Posted: 11 years ago

#180

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firstly soryyy for the late comment was really busy with the relatives at home and then my assignments...i m sorry!!

now coming to the update it was full of emotionss...😭😭

i loved the whole updateee

AYAN ASAD ka bahi NAHII hai😲

shrieen the uglyy stupidd women😡😡

asya convo was very nice...loved the way dey promised eacother to trust them😃

zoya n ghafoor convo and dilshad n zoya convo was all way emotionall

so razia is back with her actions...she want zoya...she may do anythng but she wont get zoya did she forget about Commander asad and Ghaffor the protectors...😉

in all it was a perfect update👍🏼

update nxt prt soon...😳

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