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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

sadie its wao dear...

so perfect...

cnt gv u da section i love da most..love da whole os...

bigggyyy huggg frm my side🤗

loads of love..

shreya

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Super awesome OS! I absolutely loved the billi (coming between AsYa) and Jammy innuendos!!

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madhvi4gurti

@madhvi4gurti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

im speechless!!! this was sooo perfect!!!..im crying!🤗

i had the whole thing playing in my mind and trust me it was PERFECT!!!!👍🏼...

"Because I didn't give birth to a cat." -zoya!!!🤣

"Grumpy you dumb cat. Humare romance main yeh billi humesha kyun aati hai?" Asad🤣

u r an awesome writer dr!!!! fabulous!👏

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Sohini Dasgupta

@.SoHu.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

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Simi

@saida.m

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Hayee! I loved it!

A big thank you for writing this piece! I needed a well deserved break from my research and viola! I have this amazing post waiting for me!!!

🤗let me give you some sugar!!!!!!!!!

Great story!

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RAJ

@RAJLUVRIYA

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Very nice story. Love it. What a family yaar. Totaly mad

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Res!

On my phone!
But i have to say: "Haw, Besharam Ahmed Khan"

🤣

So this is looong overdue. But seriously, when do I do things fast? 🤣

On to the OS

This was ridiculously sweet! I love the concept of brunch, so I was really happy that you made it he main theme of the OS. Family brunches was something I missed out on as a kid, because my parents lived in South America, and my whole extended family, in India.

Asad and Zoya waking up was so cute. And seriously! "BESHARAM AHMED KHAN!" had me ROFL! Too good!

And OMG GRUMPY!!! 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 That is all. I have no more words for that cat.

But I did love Asad's line about it not getting it on with anyone and therefore depriving his own sex drive! 🤣 🤣 🤣

The kids are ADORABLE!!!! I love them!!!! Exactly how I picture our beloved Asya's children to be Hayeee. Zaid's retort! 😆 Totally Zoya's kid 😆 And awww Naira is so adorable I want to eat her up! So cute!!!!

And LMFAO Ayaan and his orange pants. Sigh. Somethings never change. I like that they are living together. I really want this to happen in the show. Them getting along. And I really liked that you DIDN'T get Dilshad back with Rashid. She deserves better than a spineless cheater like him.

Najma visiting with Nikhat and Farhan and Imraan was a nice addition too. Although I hate Imraan right now, and Farhan is getting on my nerves with his suspicious behaviour, I like that you added them as the whole family of the siblings.

D'AWWW the baby is sooo cute! And Naira wanting to hold her reminded me of myself with my baby cousin when he was just 3 months old. God that was scary. That's when could kind of hold his head up, but still had that soft spot on the top of this head? So I was fascinated by it but had to keep reminding myself not to push it cause it was a person not a doll! 🤣

AND! Naira's comment about "No I was born big!" Gosh! Your story is bringing back SOOO many memories! So I didn't know about how babies happened until I was 11. And until then, I would think the stork brought me to my parents. (I know, right? 😳) In the 6th grade, all my friends are laughing, going, you know your parents had you by having sex right? I WAS MORTIFIED!! 🤣

AND 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 JAMMY!!! I loved how Zoya got so IRRITATED by that nickname!!! 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

It was a beautiful OS. So nice and light and the history was so well done. I really wish Shireen would die for real. I love that Ayaan and Humeira moved out of the SM, but that the families still get along and Ghazia is out of the picture

Loved it hun!!!

Edited by mochhug - 11 years ago

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rads73937

@rads73937

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

BEAUTIFUL OS.

THANX FOR THE PM. TAKE CARE.

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Oh Sadie!! 🤗

This has to be the most adorable OS I have ever read!! Enjoyed reading this to the core 😊

Loved Asad Zoya passionate moments😳 and her Besharam Ahmed Khan line😉😆

Loved how Asad huffed the Grumpy cat when it disturbed their romance!😆

"Grumpy, khud toh khush nahi rehta dusro ko bhi khush nahi rehne deta."

Loved Naira and Zaid's cute fight! and also loved Daddy Ahmed Khan!!😃
Ayaan and his hideous worn-out orange pants also made into your OS🤣
And Jammy-James-Jamie part cracked me up really bad 🤣🤣

And the bachcha party was so so adorable Naira, Zaid, Amrin, Ali and Ayra!! 😊 *My name - happy dance!*

Zoya and her best dialogue of this OS was 🤣🤣...

Zoya -Zaid don't eat the cat food.

Zaid - "But why can't I have the cat food?"

Zoya - "Because I didn't give birth to a cat."

Billi ki to poori tarah se lag gayi idhar!

Sunday brunches at Khan Villa are super entertaining now😃

Ayaan's line was really funny!

"Ok mera ek bhai, bohot sari beheno, ek begum, ek bhabhi, badi ammi, aur..."

"Ayaan please come to the point." Asad said while pinching the bridge of his nose.

Thank you for writing this...Dil khush kar ditta 🤗

This OS was just P.E.R.F.E.C.T

Edited by -HoneyBunch- - 11 years ago