|AsYa TS| It has to be You! ~ (Being Reworked)

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#471

aww this was so sweet.

so beautiful. Asad fell for her on the first time itself. my fav line was by Asad: "Are you a serial killer?"

just so so beautiful & romantic too.

Do write more on AsYa.

Love.

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#472

awesome..very well written..really nice...😊

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Pooja

@pooja_shineStar

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#473

beautiful ending of a beautiful story!:)

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#474

tis is fabulous...

very beautifull...

luv it...

superb...

asya are too cute...

thx fr the pm...

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aman

@aman93

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#475

oh awsome... just loved it... vry nice concept

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#476

Lovely response it has got

😳

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MeLuvsMiam

@MeLuvsMiam

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#477

For part 2:
Superb update di 👏

Loved the way they both are getting attached to each other 😃

Mahima is right.. Zoya should forget Zaroon & move on in her life with Asad 😉

Their food choices are also same 😎

Awww.. They both are thinking about each other

Zoya's dialogue was just fab 😊
"Aaj main
itni khush kyun hoon? Aur itna
smile kyun kar rahi hoon? Shayad
pagal ho gayi hoon!!! Nahi nahi!
Pakka paagal ho gayi hoon!"

Hayee Khuda jaane It's one of my favourite song of RK 😳

Loved their conversation about Love & Love at first sight 😳

Edited by -Mohhena- - 11 years ago

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MeLuvsMiam

@MeLuvsMiam

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#478

Gosh.. Last update was too good di 😃

Awww.. Loved their hot & passionate dance 😳

Btw your song choice is really good 👍🏼

Serial killer Zoya 🤣

Omg..!!! Asad was going to call her sexy 😲 but then he changed by calling her stunning 😆

3 months & they didn't told each other their feelings 😲😆

Dhoodhwala 🤣

Finally Asad said those 3 magical words to Zoya

Zoya wanted him to propose her for marriage 😳

Awww.. Asad proposed her in his own style Finally 😆

Their desperate kiss ☺️

Asad's dialogue was mindblowing 👍🏼
"From the day I laid my eyes
on you, I knew It has to be You, whom I would fall head over heels
in love with.

& then they happily lived after 😉

I'm feeling sad that it ended 😭 But i know you will surely come with new story 😉

Thnx for PM 🤗