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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you so much for the appreciative comments! 🤗

I'm really overwhelmed with such an amazing response! 😳


Mrina
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Thank you so much for the appreciative comments! 🤗


I'm really overwhelmed with such an amazing response! 😳


Mrina


I love the heart and your words

So first time I will gracefully accept a Thanks All reply

❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh this was sooo good!! 👏 The way they find out they're neighbors after so long! Love the concept and their light-hearted convo's 😳 A great read 👍🏼

But you killed Zaroon! How will I ever bring myself to forgive you?! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesumly fab and beautiful story...loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Oh this was sooo good!! 👏 The way they find out they're neighbors after so long! Love the concept and their light-hearted convo's 😳 A great read 👍🏼

But you killed Zaroon! How will I ever bring myself to forgive you?! 😆


Hahaha.. I didn't want to but I had to! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the PM. Loved the update. So romantic and nice proposal.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow that was an amazing update
I loved it !
You write so well
Awesome TS :D <3
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-


Hahaha.. I didn't want to but I had to! 😆


I told Mina di the same thing (but in a different way)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update as usual!! It was super se bhi oopar wala long update!!

Loved the song sequence!! It suited them perfectly!!❤️
Jaage jaage armaan hain, jaage jaage hum, oh
Jaage jaage armaan hain, jaage jaage hum

Loved Asad's serial killer line!!😉😆

Asad's confession was cute...in an unexpected way!! Zoya was all shy all the time and then when she said 'Mujhe chup karana aata hai' my eyes popped out while reading!!😲😆

Wow!! Asad got an Audi!!😎😎

The end was so romantic...Asad proposed and both confessed their love for each other ❤️❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago


First of all...I wanna cry...why did this end??? 😭Such a cute little story this was...but as they say All Great Things Come to An End...and so this beautiful story also had too...

The last part was brilliant as usual.👏...There were so many elements which made me go AWW!!!

The dance was just too cute!😳 (And the song choice...Whoaaa!👍🏼)

Asad comes from behind and holds her by her waist. A current runs through her body.

Asad and Zoya stayed in the embrace feeling each other. Zoya feeling his hot breathe on her neck and Asad feeling the warmth of her body! (Hot Hot Hot!😳)

Uff!! and the fun doesn't end here...we also have Barish making its way!

Asad: "Kya tum serial killer ho?"

Zoya: "WHAT?"

Asad: "Mujhe maarne ka iraada hai kya????"

Zoya: "Nahi to..."

Asad: "To phir itni beautiful or s... (about to say sexy) stunning lagne ka reason?"

Zoya blushes.

Asad and his cheesy (but Cuteee) Lines!!!😆

Asad: "Main tumhe doodh wala bhaiya lagta hoon kya?"

Hahaha Doodhwala Asad!🤣

Zoya: "You can come in anytime! I would love making coffee for you!" (Oh my!😳)

I just loved Asad's I love You' and their cute little bickerings...

My favourite part-

She gently opened her eyes and saw Asad down on his knees looking up at her with a velvet box in hand.

She looked stunned, happy, surprised..

Asad: "Zoya! Will you marry me and be mine forever and ever?"

Zoya smiled, then blushed and nodded in a 'yes'.

Okay so I just love the guy an one knee concept...really really do...so this was a treat for me!😃

Asad: "From the day I laid my eyes on you, I knew It has to be You, whom I would fall head over heels in love with.

Zoya: "Yup! But when last month she provoked me, I knew It has to be You!"

Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Sometimes the heart sees what is invisible to the eye and that's when it's called, Love at First Sight!⭐️

The above lines are too beautiful to be described...👏...

I just loved this story!

Great writing Mina Di! 👍🏼Your stories are so fresh...they alway bring a smile on my face!😃

Keep writing coz I am a BIG BIG fan of your works!

Loads and Loads of Love!!❤️🤗

Edited by McdreamyKSG - 11 years ago

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