You make me, me- An AsYa OS - Page 11

Originally posted by: Zanutix

Yes you did!

*still waiting*

Originally posted by: Zanutix

Nigga, this was beautiful. Even my thug self is feeling heavy with emotions.
So, this was written during ZoYaan?
Well, I realized that after I'd read it.

It went perfectly in flow even without a theme, you know?

And the best part was, if you overlook the theme, you can assume anyone to be anyone (Am I making sense to you?).

It could be the Man in agony and the Woman in crime or even the vice versa!

I LOVED it. I mean, really, I WOOFED it.

So in love I am.

My favorite parts ~

You make me live. You make me, me. And I love you for that. And for you, I've become a lover.You're real. You're a dream. You're serene. You're my travelling companion, on this journey towards paradise.

👏

You should really let your inner poet break free. No kidding. Because, this, dawg, is so good that I find my vocabulary inadequate.

Oh, how I need to be in your arms right now while you tell me that everything is going to be alright. Or rather, how I'd like you to be in my arms, while I tell you the same.

It perfectly expresses their longing - to be with each other, it tells how broken and helpless they are without their better half.

Nigga!!!!!!!

It's quite the opposite, actually, I'm your fan.

WRITE. I WANT MORE. THAT'S AN ORDER.

This was amazing dawg! 🤗

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Before reading Countdown, I would have easily accepted that. No. Not after. You don't get to be my fan. Way out of your league. Not even close.

No. There shall be no arguments on this.

Moving on.

You have favourite parts?

I'm the one with the heavy emotions.

And yes, this part was most definitely posted during Zoyaan, but who's to say when it was initially written?

And yes. It could be the woman in crime. It could.

You quoted the line yourself. In your arms, or better, you in mine.

Thank you so so much for such kind and heartfelt appreciation to my humble piece of work. You have no idea how happily emotional you've made me tonight. You have no idea.

Nothing gay here. I love you, for all. And for none.

And what inner poet. This is not me. It is you. Lakh main rokhu, par am overflown with emotions reading you.

Feeling so loved.

*Seriously what IS wrong with me tonight?*

Originally posted by: Zanutix

Bu..but I am your fan! 😳

Well, I'm glad you loved my feedback, but the DOES NOT mean that you cry about it!

If this comment makes you so 'heavy' (hehe), then you shall not read it again!

Believe me dawg, you do have an inner poet! Let it break free!

*Wondering what's wrong with nigga*

PS - Aunt Flow makin' a visit?! 😆

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Funny. 'Coz Aunt Flow has been around, time to go me thinks. So why today? Why not earlier?

I read it again. Your comment.

What I cannot read again (not yet, anyway) is Countdown. That would make me heavy-er (no hehe here)..babe. That was beautiful.

No inner poet, just real awesome people I'm acquainted with (read:YOU)

Originally posted by: Zanutix

Tell me about Aunt Flow. -__-
Knows how to destroy your trip to a Water Park. -______-

Reading Countdown again is a challenge in itself. Because it is AWKWARDLY LONG!

BUT, I'm not acquainted to such flattery! So tone it down dawg! Imma gonna burst!

You ARE a poet. End of story. BAS! KEH DIYA NA!

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Bold and underlined- Now you are. So get yourself used to it.

Yeh lal ishq...

Originally posted by: Zanutix

NO.

Shit just got real!

Nigga! Stop being so serious, will ya? I ain't no likin' it!

You've got me so 'heavy' that I'm listening to my favorite sad song on repeat.

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

What's your favourite sad song?

Yep. Shit just got real.

Originally posted by: Zanutix

I am very much into Golden Era songs - many don't like 'em. 😳

This one's my favorite sad song (I don't know if you'll like it though) -

Din Dhal Jaye - Guide

Enjoy! 😊

PS - Every song's better off WITHOUT a video. So please cooperate!