Asya FF : Asya Remarriage cha.1b pg 8 24/10/2013 Pms later - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shishirareddyp

hey very well written

pm me wen u write the next part


Thank you
Will surely Pm you
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Am so sorry for the delay,i jst need time to sort some things out which is why i didnt update the day i promised.

Recap[/B]
Why doesnt Ammi undstnd,going to shopping always bring me painful memories ever since that incident.How i wish Tanveer...(he stopped mid way)

Chapter 1b

If Tanveer is alive today,i would have more happy buh whenever i saw my kids i feel Tanveer is with us.

Flashback
Tanveer was dressing up for Khadijah while Sumaiyah was in her Abbu's arms both are smiling at Khadijah who was busy making faces at her Ammi.They all were going for shopping that day.

Tanveer: Asad this how to dress up a kid nt like the way you did before.(She burst out laughing

Asad: (pretended to be angry) U knw what its really useless trying to help you cuz you'd end up making fun of someone 😔

Tanveer: Aww someone is angry with me,am sorry

Asad: Noo..,u must do something to pacify me jst like always

Tanveer:(feigning ignorance) I dnt knw what you...(suddenly an idea came up to her mind) Okay close ur eyes.
She whisper something in the kids ear and they nod their head in agreement

Asad: Tanveer whats keeping you waiting,i'll open my...he suddenly felt some little fingers tickling him,when he open his eyes he saw Tanveer laughing at him while the kids continue their job he burst out laughing when he was unable to stop them.Soon the trio were rolling on the floor laughing their hearts out 🤣 while Tanveer was luking at the sight before her
Tanveer:(In her mind) Ya Allah always keep them happy and protect them,i dnt even knw what will happen in future.$he luks contented seeing her family happy,she quickly wipe a tear which go unnotice by Asad bt he saw her thinking

Asad: Tanveer what happen? Where are u lost?

Tanveer: Actually i wasnt thinking abt anything,i was jst lost in ur laughter

Asad: Are u sure (he's nt convinced)

Tanveer: Yes...Asad i want u to promise me that you will always keep our kids happy

Asad: Yes we will keep them happy (he hugs her before the kids join them)
Flashback ends
He was jolted bck to present by a lady's voice,he quickly step out of the car

Asad: Am really sorry,hope u are nt hurt?
Zoya:(he looks decent,i dnt think he's one of those men) Its okay,mistake do happen
Asad: Thank you (he thought she will pick up a fight)
Shaddad: Are u a hero?
Asad: No
Shaddad: You luk like those heroes in a movie,can i call u hero uncle?
Asad:(smiles at him) Yes
Shaddad: Bye
Asad: (While getting into his car) Bye
After he left Zoya reprimand Shaddad for talking too much.They finally find an auto and they head home

Wajid's Residence
During dinner,Shaddad narrates abt his encounter with hero uncle to his Badi Ammi n Badi Abbu while they listen attentively
Maryam: Am glad none of you are hurt.
Shaddad: Ammi is my Abbu also like hero uncle??
The question shocked Zoya because she didnt expect it.It was Wajid that answer Shaddad
Wajid: Yes Shaddad ur Abbu is like hero uncle.And witi that they close the chapter of hero uncle


Khan's Residence
In the evening when Asad returned home,he met an empty house witi a note on the table frm his Ammi
Najma and I are taking the kids for shopping since they are tired of waiting for you.
He went to his room so as to fresh up before they come back.
After a while they were all back frm shopping.The kids went to their Abbu's room since they knw he's at home now.

Asad was sittng on his couch when they came inside and he took them into his embrace
Sumaiyah: Abbu we waited for you bt u ddnt come.
Khadijah: Badi Ammi told us that you were busy thats why u didnt come
Asad: Am so sorry next time i'll come with you okay?
Khadija and Sumaiyah: Okay Abbu
Asad was really happy since his kids understand hm and he hugged them again.
He asked them abt their shopping while they narrates everything to him,he keep laughing at their antics.He spent more than an hour with them and he doesnt even realise.
Najma who came to call them for dinner was happy to see them together.
Najma: Bhaijaan, Khadijah and Sumaiyah Ammi is calling you all dinner is ready.
Asad: Okay Tamatar,we are coming
Sumaiya and Khadija repeat the name Tamatar before they laugh out
Najma:(became conscious since the kids are there) Bhaijaan my name is Najma
Asad:(whisper in a low tone) bt the name tamatar suits you most jst look at ur cheeks.He left the room with the kids following him in tow
Najma was really happy its been long since her brother called her Tamatar.Since Tanveer's demise her bhaijaan has turned to a more reserve person which is a shadow of his former self. I hope Bhaijaan get a woman that will love him so much.
From the dinning table,both Khadija and Sumaiya squeal together: Tamatar Phoophi we are waiting for you.
This breaks Najma out of her thought before she join them at the table.

After dinner,they all were sitting in the garden eating their pastry jst like their daily routine while Asad is drinking his black coffee.
A while later Najma went to put the kids to sleep while Asad and Dilshad sat down on the bench to talk.

Precap: [B]

Dilshad and Asad's Discussion


Phew am through with chapter one,i hope this is worth waiting
Thank you all for being patient with me. Pms will be sent out tomorrow

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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
nice continue soon...


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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
lovely part
plzzz pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Linsie

nice continue soon...




Thnx
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting and something different

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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Very nice udapte continue soon please 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
liked ur FF.👏 hope we get more and more ASYA scenes😛
please pm me when u update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Asad..remembering about tanveer... the time they spent together as
family...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Asad is still tanveer's memory...

zoya in hers...

waiting how you going to move this story...

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