OS: Broken Promise

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Something I put together out of total boredom, based on current track. Hope you like it, please leave a comment if u get a chance.

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OS: BrokenPromise

'When the lamps are burning low and the moon is shining bright, the echoes of the wind will follow you behind, when you are so unsure of everything in life know that I am here right by your side'.

Zoya read and re read the message Asad had sent her not so long ago, a time when she felt she stood alone to face life's cruelties. She couldn't helping smiling, the mere thought of her Akdu writing poetry was enough to make anyone die of utter shock if not laughter caused by it. One year, four months and thirteen days is what it took for Asad and Zoya to finally breakdown the layers of hate, anger, frustration, arrogance and stubbornness that stood between them. A relationship that started on an emotion so negative today stood upon a ground that knew nothing but love.

Asad and Zoya's relationship was undefinable it went beyond the conventional notions that the term love harboured. From the moment they realised their true feelings for one another, from the minute they united as one everything about them truly synchronised, as cliched as it sounded they really were two bodies one soul.

It was only him and him alone that she depended on when all else failed her, but where was he now? When she needed him more than anything else, possibly more than the need for air, as without Asad breathing would not have a purpose.

Zoya stood rooted to the spot Asad had asked her to wait for her, it had been almost three hours and still there was no sign of him, she called him over and over again only to be met by his voicemail. Zoya clutched at her heart she knew there was something wrong Asad would never break his promise to her, if he said he would come to take her away then he meant it. 'Zoya please come back inside, bhaijaan won't come...' Zoya held her hand up to stop him 'I don't want to hear it Ayaan, if Mr Khan said he is going to come for me then he will...please just leave me alone'. Ayaan raked his fingers through his hair, he didn't know what to do, the whole nikah fiasco had turned their lives upside down.

Asad has accepted that this was a mistake, that there was no way this could be deemed valid in anyway. He was going to bring his Zoya back no matter what and with that he had called Zoya asking her to wait for him. Ayaan had called Asad begging him to allow Zoya to stay on to continue this facade for another two weeks, just until their sister got married. Asad truly found himself torn, he was standing between a rock and a hard place, no matter which way he turned people he loved were going to get hurt. Zoya had been living with Ayaan for the last week and only she knew how difficult it was, she didn't belong here and she will never be able to be a part of this household, her only place in life was with Asad in his arms and under his roof.

Zoya fell to the floor crying out loud, she felt suffocated 'where are you...please don't leave me here any longer...please Mr Khan please come and take me away. As much as she cried and called out, as much as she waited standing outside by the door she knew that Ayaan was right Asad wasn't going to come. For reasons that may have stood valid and ones that should be understood, Zoya was far from wanting to hear or understand anything, there was no seeing logic or the severity of the circumstances that both Asad and Ayaan felt.

People would sacrifice everything and anything for the one they loved but here Asad sacrificed the one he loved for all else. Ayaan attempted to bring Zoya in but nothing moved her 'Zoya...please, I beg you...bhaijaan will come and he will fulfill his promise to you...don't blame him Zoya I asked him...it was for...' Zoya stood up lifelessly, her swollen eyes and deshelved state pained Ayaan, Asad asked him of one thing and that was for him to take care of her, and he was failing. 'You two took away my right to decide anything about my life...you used me for your own gain and not once did you think to ask if I am ok with any of it...you lied and kept on lying Ayaan and today...today for the first time Mr Khan broke his promise to me...what did I do to deserve this...tell me Ayaan what am I being punished for' Ayaan's eyes over flowed with tears he couldn't bear to see Zoya in so much pain. 'Zoya please calm down...I promise you just two more weeks and then I will take you to bhaijaan myself...' 'Your promises mean nothing...you hear me nothing'. Picking up her bag Zoya stormed back into Ayaan's room she looked up 'Ya Allah, how many more hardships do I have to face, how much more pain and suffering do I have to endure...Ya Allah, please font test me beyond my ability to cope...please give me back my Mr Khan'.

An inspirational thought by me :-) 'The sorrows of today will surely fade, if only you believe that the joys of tomorrow will be forever yours'. Saima

This was so beautiful. It was poignant, but necessary. It was so well done. Ayaan deserves all of Zoya's anger.

I want to see Humeira get angry with him in the show as well.

But I love this. Their pain is just. AHHH.

Loved it. Can't say that enough. So sad...

Great OS!

This was so heart-breaking!! Beautifully written!

Agreed! 👏

I really cant thank you you for such a beautiful compliment. thank you 😊🤗