A Note from Zoya to Asad with a short reply from Asad :( - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: aksasya

Wow THAT WAS AWESOME DEAR...I REALLY WANT THIS IN QH...FOR ASAD TO REALIZE HIS MISTAKE...

Thank you so much !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: tsering2013

This will surely Kill Asad Zillion Death if Happens by any means...🤢

P.S You are Awesome👏


Thank you !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
This is too good though very painful
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
So Today I refuse to let you be my priority , for you made me just an option.


^That line, right there, is very, very good.

Great piece of writing! 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: rendezvousvin

Beautifully written Amber... You made me cry dear... Would love to see Zoya doing the same in the show too...

She has started moving in the right direction !
Thank you !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Amber...meri jaan🤗
This is such a fantastic piece.I am in love with it.This is honestly what I expected to happen in the given scenario. This is keeping in mind Zoya's feelings about marriage and her getting upset about how she was treated.

The line about priorities and options is fantastic.

However, in real life, how many women have to go through this priorities and option situation. Not what Asad did...but u know the day to day life. Work or family. Overtime or outings. Etc.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
You have written it beautifully.👏
If this was the actual response from Zoya then Asad wouldn't have guts to talk or face Zoya ever again out of his guilt.😒
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
my god ..dat was just sooo painful...:'(:-( ...
but u ve written it to excellance
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
you added asad pov..touchy..
he will now feel all is lost..with the return of the ring. .
was holding onto his semblance. .little hope..
wanted the lipstick to be smudged..but the mascara got undone!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
this was amazing. .so painful

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