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Chapter 6
Life of months(part-A)

Narrater's POV:

Doctors were shocked to see asad with eyes open and looking around the room confused but still with a normal expression in his face as if nothing happened to him. he looked at the various tubes in his hands and some tubes connected to his chest. 'why am i bare chested?' he could see some young women dressed in white gawking at his bare body. he could hear them giggling and whispering to themselves. thanks for his eagle ears that he could hear them even when they were a little away from him. then slowly did he realise that he was in a hospital. and the nurses there were drooling at him.' well i am used to this drooling, but why am i in a hospital?' he could see some bandages all over his body.he saw a doctor approach him with a suprised look in his face.
DOC: how are you feeling now mr.asad?
A: doctor, why am i in hospital?
he asked in a hoarse voice, which was the only sound his health supported.
D:well, you got into an accident and then ended up here?
A: what?? accident?? no way...i dont feel any pain...
D: you are under morphine effect.dont worry.

After the doctor left ayaan came in and looked at his bro with a tint of tears in his eyes.
Ay: how are you now bhaijaan?
Asad slightly nodded in response.
Ay: okay you rest now i will come back
With that he left the room and went outside to call his sisters.

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ZOYA's POV:

We boarded the flight finally. we were seated in our places. i took one last long look at the place i grew up. Dehradun, my city,the place where i was brought up, where i met the most generous triple Ns, the place where i designed my house a year back, the place of calmness, the place of beauty. for me dehradun is the most beautiful place in the whole world. i may be an origin of bombay which is why i got this bombay phenotype blood group.my ancestors are from bombay,well that is what i heard from meiy. and that my mom settled in bhopal and after that tragedic incident we moved to dehradun. eventhough we just lived in the outskirts of dehradun, i feel so connected to this city."how am i gonna live without the familiarity of this place.i love this place."

i was seated in the window seat and next to me was nikhat and next to her was tanveer.at the back of us was najma who fought for the window seat and successfully got it. and humeira in the middle and nuzhat in the last.suddenly nikhat's phone started ringing and she was off to the washroom with tannu. i picked it up and the id was of ayaan's

Me: hello!! raabert
A: mona hi. have you boarded the flight?
Me: yes yes we are in the plane?
A: good then safe journey and take care. do you have the adresses of your houses there.
Me: ofcourse. dont fret.
Then the air hostess came and said me the switch off the phone and fasten my seat belt.
Me: okay okay ayaan i'll keep the phone now. its time to take off. bye
A: okay bye be careful
I kept the phone and then N1 and T joined me.then after a series of turns in the runway the flight took off leaving the ground of the place i lived." this is going to be fine"
I looked at the scenary which was breathtaking. the big and vast city was now so small. i found it cute.everyone enjoyed our time taking to some french people and other indians who are from dehradun." good thing we are in economic class or else no one would be so jovial and friendly with us in a business class."
After a lot of persuasion from me and the others and even meiy did pops allow us to travel in a economic class.i really missed ayaan now. i just met him a nice two weeks back but really had grown familiar with him. he was like the brother i didnt have. we shared a special sis-bro bond. for him, i was just like his other sisters.

After sometime I dozed off in the plane.when i woke up it was nearly 2am so i just took out my ipad and started to listen songs in it as the movies the flight people provided were very boring.i took out my phone and dialled ayaan as he hadnt called us back after this much time.
Me: raabert...why dint you call us even after so much time?
A: its nothing zoya just held up at work and why are you up so late, it must be 2 in the morning in arabia, right?
Me: well just now got up from sleep so decided to call you. and how do you know its 2am and how do you know we are in arabia???
A: well well zoe iam ayaan.a.k na. i know everything in this world.
Just then an annonuncement came that the flight is going to land in abu daabi to refill the requirements, so we are allowed to roam around and get something if we need anything in the airport. we were givent the time amount of 3 hrs.
Me: wow iam going to see abu daabi now!!!
A: okay mona dont shout i cant bear!!
Me: oho ayaan!!! get lost. okay now iam going to wake all your sisters and my sister and the world's best model the "T"
A: hahaha okay okay carry on i'll keep the phone
Me: ayaan i miss you badly
A: me too mona. dont spoil your mood and just go enjoy now sister
Me: bye brother
I smiled and disconnected the call and then woke up everyone and said them about the announcement.they were all as excited as me.
We went to the door of the plane which connected to the first floor hallway. we went in and came to the main airport. we for some shopping. midnight shopping was cool. we enjoyed verymuch and now that it was time we hurried back to our plane.

The flight took off and now finally i can reach france.
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ASAD'S POV:

I woke up sometime after ayaan had first come in. i was in a different room now. it dint look like the first one which had many moniters and things all over.i looked at the clocked in the dim light and it was 11pm.this one was more like a common room with just some drips and oxygen and vaccum pumps near the bed.ayaan was nowhere to be found."ayaan" i called out in the room. my voice was clear and i dint feel any strain in speaking so i called again a little more loudly"AYAAN!" and within a fraction of second he came in and was near me.
Ay: yes bhaijaan. how are you now?
Me: much better
Ay: good to know. do you need something?
Me: no its ok.
Ay:okay bhai. and you'll get discharged in two days or so.
Me: but what about work how am i gonna convince them. they must be angry with me.
Ay: dont fret bhai i took care of it all
Me: hmmmphn...but...
Ayaan sat down near me and held my hands and spoke softly with a sigh
Ay: please bhai dont strain yourself. you know how much scared i was when i saw in the bed of the ICU. you scared the hell out of me bhai.
He had tears in eyes when he spoke those words.i couldnt help but feel for the poor soul crying for the better health of his own bro. ofcourse he loves me to have concern for me.he is my bro. but shouldnt i be the one to takecare of my younger siblings but here iam in a bad condition with my younger bro to take care of me." my life is just great."
Me: ayaan do you know anything about my accident?
Ay: no bhaijaan,but thank god you got blood on time, orelse...
Me: who was the donor?
Ay: oh that bhai, she is the one who...its zoeaa...

"Mr.Khan" and nurse barged and we both answered"yes" in unison.
She looked confused hearing a yes from both of us.Ayaan chuckled at our unison but i was in no mood to laugh so i just stayed silent. she then stutterd a little and said" Mr. Ayaan"
This time ayaan answered and then he was escorted by the nurse for something regarding me. i just laid back comfily and closed my eyes and wandered to somewhere.
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Z's POV:


We woke up to the announcement made that we are landing in france in 10 minutes. i saw the city of paris from the height of 10,000 km in the sky. i could see the faint glint of sun in the morning. "my day is gonna be good". it was so beautiful and small. i loved the scenary. i quickly got up and went to brush and freshen up before we reach paris.
I came back and saw all the sleeping beauties with their eyes wide open gawking at the scenary below. i smiled at them and then one by one went and freshened up and came back.
We were told to fasten our seatbelt as the plane was descending. and finally after a few minutes we could see the runway of the airport. the flight landed with a little bump which made humeira and T shreik with fear. i rolled my eyes and continued staring and the long and elegant french airport which was coming into view.

We boarded off the plane and collected our baggages and then went to the immigration office room.after done with the formalities we headed to the main gate of the airport.i came out and cool weather in the morning of paris hit me. i smiled with content and loved this place at the first sight. i saw many cabs there. All the girls pushed me forward and said
" go talk to the cab drivers to take us to our destination."
Me: why should i only go? you too can go and talk to them na?
H: arrey zoe baji, you are the one who is fluent in french, we are still learing puppets, no go!!
I went and spoke to one of the cab drivers
Me:Je vais prendre un taxi s'il vous plat, excusez-moi deux cabines, parce que nous sommes nombreux
( will i get a cab please, sorry two cabs because we are many)
Cabdriver:Bien sr madame, o est la destination?
( ofcourse madam,where is the destination?)
Me:aa..it..s...Attendez un moment, je vais vrifier et vous le dire
( wait a moment, i will check and say it to you)
I called ayaan and asked him for the address
Me: ayaan what is the address of the place you wanted us to stay in
A: hi! have you landed safely?how are you all good ?
Me: that was not an answer for the question i asked and i the question first so answer me first
A: oh..that wait i will send you a message.
Me: and why do you and meiy-pops want us to stay in a guest house in the outskirts of paris, why not in our houses which we own here?
A: comeon zoe please understand we just want to give you all a surprise.
Me: what surprise is in this?
A: just wait and watch. i dont think this surprise will be up to all of your expectations but anyways this is a surprise and it should be kept secret.
Me: please ayaan say na
A: no way mona...just for two weeks and i will join you all.then after you all get into you colleges you will be joined with aapi and jiju and then we all can go to our own houses. till then stay tuned...
And with he disconnected the call and then a beeping sound came from my mobile.it was the address and i went near the cab driver and gave him the address - *03 des rues,75003,paris.*
The cab driver nodded and called for one more cab and we all kept of luggages in one and travelled in the other.i told them about our stay in a guest house for a few months.
N2: zoe, why are we staying in a guest house?
Me: go ask that stupid bhaijaan of yours
N3: why, what did he do?
Me: he was the one who told us to stay in a guest house and that he will join us after two weeks and that we will move to our house when miey and pops come here.
All the of them 'oohed' together.
T: till then what are we gonna do?
Me: well we are gonna make ourselves comfortable in this new place, do some shopping and sight seeing and get into our colleges. and yeah you could do some modelling too T...
T: oh yeah that's a great idea.
N2&N3&H: yay!! shopping and sight seeing!!
Then we all stared out of the window and were marvelled at the sight of the city. huge building and sky scrappers were there.victorian buildings and french era building were still there.
N1: we have to visit all these places. we must visit every nook and corner of this city.
" you are right!" we all said together.
As we went on through the road, the business areas were vanishing and residential areas were coming up. the houses were very well built and very cozy. then the residential areas went off and the rural places and came up.
The cab suddenly stopped with a jerk and i turned around to find myself staring at magnificent building.
Cabdriver: c'est l'endroit de votre madame de destination
( this is place of your destination madam)
Me: merci monsieur
( thankyou sir/mister)
We got down and took out our baggages from the other cab and prepared ourselves to greet the new place which is our home for a few months.I looked at the building one more time and was perplexed at it.
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NARRATER'sPOV:

Ayaan had been watching his bro without sleeping.he dint even call to ask about his sisters. he dint even speak with them. the onlly person who he spoke to was zoya.
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Zoya looked down at the pendant and said " be ready to greet your new place, jaan" and with she smiled kissing it and hugging it to and face.
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Asad opened his eyes slightly when he felt a sheet of warmth covering him, he felt so loved and yearned. he smiled widely and opened his eyes wide and started touching his neck to find something. when he dint find what he wanted he started to panic and started searching it on the table beside his bed while in the process pushing all the medicines to the ground.
Ayaan who was watching this crazy activity of his bro called out to him and asked
Ay: what happened bhai?
A: ayaan where is the chain around my neck? where the pendant in it?
Ay: that.. bhai...
A: where is it ayaan??
Asad started getting up but again floped on the bed. ayaan was sacred and tried calming him down
Ay: its safe bhai its in you bag i have it. the doctors told to remove it when you were in ICU
A: get that to me now. i need it!!!fast
Ay: okay okay just a minute
Ayaan brought that pendantchain and gave it to asad who relaxed after seeing. " thanks" he said softly and clutched it to his heart and slept off peacefully with a smile on his face.
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Okay that's for now. i know its a boring update but i couldnt get anything in my mind so just wrote whatever came to me at that time. kill me for not giving much aysa scenes in it but what to do my mind is not functioning properly nowadays.its always dumb.anyways i appreacite all you comments. encourage me to continue this story. i will see you all in the next chapter...
bye...see you





Edited by ashrina - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsm...
but please make asya meet soon...
and wat about the pendant?? They both have it...
eagerly waiting...
please continue soon...😉
Edited by rockstar_16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice...



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update please update soon!
Edited by Asya_Obsession - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is just awesome... Waiting for them to meet.. Please update next part soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice part
plz pm me for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was awesome 👏
Great work ...continue soon 😃
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thanks for all your comments

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