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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks for the pm... try to reply some comment ... will help you get
more readers...and increase your activity

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yes surely will do. thanks
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CHAPTER 4
Its a long day
ZOYA's POV:

We were in our teacher's house chatting happily and catching up with our school days, while our teacher was bringing some snacks for us.
Ayaan came in after sometime. He went and sat beside humeira which a seat between the arm of the sofa and her. It was very narrow seat. there were many free seats but why would he sit in that small narrow seat. a suspicion started nagging my mind.' why was he sitting near humeira and that too that close?' 'and why is he so concious sitting beside her but still having a happy and content face'. humeira was leaning back and laughing to a joke cracked by nuzhat, she was a little bit tilted towards ayaan which made him grow more concious and he had a feared as well as a soft expression on his face.humeira was practically glued to him. i was confused as to what was happening to this man. what happened to his cheerful nature and why is he so silent now. then our teacher came with some snacks and told us to have it.
T: so, how are you all? and why this sudden visit?
N1: we are all fine ma'am , actually ma'am we are all planning to move to france...
T: what??
N2: yes ma'am you know very well about us and that our eldest brother resides there
T: yes but why do you want to move in there?
N3: yeah ma'am we actually want to be as a family together.
T: oh that's a good decision.and zoya.. what are you and humeira going to do?
H: ma'am you know very well that its zoya baaji's dream to go and study in france, then what's the doubt? and as for me , i will do whatever my baaji orders me.
Humeira did a salute towards me and said " waiting for your command madam."
T: oh yeah yeah i know..
And everyone started giggling and i too joined them eventually.
Tanveer: ma'am wont you ask about me?
T: oh sorry tanveer, but anyways what's the use in asking, you too are going with them to france.
Tan: ma'am you are a genius. how do you know about my decision?
T: its obvious that you wont even be a minute without your friends and you always stick to their decisions and moreover the main reason for you to go to france is that you can do you modelling in a large scale over there, right?

Everyone had hearty laugh at this and in this chatting we all forgot to address the only male present here, who was a silent audience. so i just took the useless honour to address ayaan.
Me: ma'am this is ayaan ahmed khan the second elder brother of the triple N s.
A: hello! ma'am its great to meet you.
T: hello ayaan. its great to meet you too. and how are you, what do you do?
A: iam fine ma'am and iam a racer.
T: oh thats good, i see you have some guts in you to race.
Ayaan smiled and then we all started chatting and talking about our school days. i noticed that ayaan was stealing glances at humeira and growing concious whenever she leaned onto him while laughing. and my oh so innocent sister was totally oblivious to it. i just brushed it off of my mind as i had more to concentrate than this ayaan thingy.

After some hearty moments with out teacher, we bid goodbye to her. we all had tears in our eyes which was treathening to fall in any instant. she was a good and jovial person and we liked and respected her very much.she blessed us and sent us off.
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* location- paris*
Narrator's POV:

Asad was in his office. he looked very worried and stressed.he took out his mobile and dialled his friend's number.
A: hello ryan, what is this new project? how can i go to delhi now? and that too at the same day when my family arrives?
R:sorry asad what to do? its really i?
mportant to attend that meeting in delhi?
A: ha ha what an irony that when they arrive france from india i will be going to india from france. wow! wow!
R: sorry dude what to do?
A: dont ask me what to do. do what is needed!!!!
R: please asad try to understand. even that poor fellow rahim is trying to convince our client.
A: urghhh!! dont give me excuses...please ryan pleeeaaase i beg you. do something.
R: sorry man... i'll try to do my best.
A: okay...i'll hang up now...
Asad hung up and sighed out of frustation.'should this happen now only' he thought.

Asad drove aimlessly towards his house and as soon as he reached his room, he slumped on the bed. he was deeply upset at having to go to india. if he went there now then he would only return after 3 months.he wanted to spend atleast one day with them before going to india. he'll be nearly taking a whole tour if he goes to india. but this client is very important for his company. but what to do if that client is a world traveller. ' iam going to be around the world in 90 days!!. wow wow what a nice movie would it make' he thought sarcastically. he then drifted off without even changing.
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Narrator's POV:
Zoya and others went and visited some friends and some people known to them.Everything was normal after their long trip. humeira was feeling better now and tanveer was far away from that tragetic. everyone wanted to head home and have a nice dinner prepeared by their lovely zeenat aapi/miey and have a long chat about their day with their pops/jiju.
While having their dinner everyone shared their day's adventure. They felt concerned for tanveer and told her to take care.
Ze: what zoya u fought with that arbaaz. what if something happened to you. they were goons.Ya allah!!! what am i going to do with this girl?
Z: today was the best day i guess.i gave a great exercise to my muscles. and miey please dont worry iam perfectly fine and you know that iam great at fighting. so whats the big deal?
Ze: but zoya what if...
Z: no buts and ifs miey. please you continue with serving your lovely hand made food with your lovely hands.
With that she put on her best puppy face and zeenat couldnt resist anymore and shook her smilingly.
A: yes zoya i wanted to ask this for a long time. how do you fight???
Z: with my arms and legs and sometimes with my head, you know i have a strong head.
She said sarcastically.
A: arre yaar, i dint mean like that. how do you know to fight?
N3: bhaijaan she doesnt just know to fight, she knows many other things...
And she went on listing out the things. ayaan was amazed on hearing all the things.
A: so mona knows mostly everything in the world.
T: yes yes then what friend of the super T na, should know all these things.
A: oho i see. but how did you learn to drive plane and copter.
N2: well she never sleeps, you know she always keeps her occupied with something or the other.
T: and she learnt to drive by her all the great pops who provided her a personnel tutor to teach her driving.and so on so on so on...
A: wow!!!!
N1: bhaijaan, there's more to know about her. dont get amused by this okay.
They all had a hearty laugh and continued their dinner. then suddenly najma squealed excited and everyone looked at her confused.
N2: Heyyy!!! we are going to meet asad bhaijaan after a long time. iam so excited to see him.
N1: yes yes me too. i am really upset with him for not visiting us
N3: yes yes me too
A: oye oye dont do anything to my bhai
H: oye mr. he is tha bhaijaan for all of you okay, dont you dare take him away from his sisters
A: okay okay humeria begum as you say.
H: what! iam not your begum idiot.
A: even i dont want someone like you to be my begum
Both of them stuck their tongue out and turned away from eachother. Throughout this conversation there was soul who was struck at the mention of the name 'asad'. Zoya was feeling new emotions in her. she loved that feeling and was wondering what that was but then brushed it off. she smiled seeing the Triple Ns happy chatting about their brother. she loved the love they shared eventhough they were distant from him.they finished off and the khans bid goodbyes and went off to their house, tanveer too went with them. now the farooquis too went to their rooms and drifted off to a peaceful slumber. zoya in her room, smiled when she recalled his name and drifted to a deep sleep.
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Asad woke up sweating all over. he felt restlessness settle inside him.he called his brother who was sleeping soundly like a pig. ayaan dint answer his phone so he took a cold shower and decided to checkout all his childhood pics with his siblings. he looked at the clock and it was 8.30 so it must be nearly 11 in india. he sighed and took out all the photos he had and smiled seeing each photo. his eyes teared up when he came across the pic of him and his mom. quickly recovered from it and kept the photo aside. when he looked into other pics he came across the a strange photo and the sight in it made his eyes widen...he suddenly clutched the pendant his mom gave him and held it tightly...
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Hi guys and sorry sorry and thousand times sorry for this late as well as boring as well as small update but what to do my school has started after the vacations and iam really busy and moreover i promise that i will update on weekends...till then bye...

Edited by ashrina - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Zoya notice... ayaan trying to get closer with humeira..

so everyone's destiny is france

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Posted: 11 years ago
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But asad.. is coming to india.. coz of work
and will be away for 3 months...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for reading and commenting on this part. And yeah asad would be taking a long tour. I know that I am boring you all without asya meeting but I just want you to be comfortable with.zoya's lifestyle that's why I am giving you all chapter without their meeting. And moreover about asad's lifestyle we all know that is very cozy. I am concentrating more on zoya because this story mostly revolves around her,without her nothing moves forward in this story just like in the serial. This is a special story for me because it is somewhat related to me. I know that I am not a good author or a good writer but I do know that I have to write this story. I have a good story of asya meeting cooking up in my mind but I don't know whether you all will like it or not but anyways I will write it down. And also I want asad and zoya to develop a feeling of warmth with each other without even their jnowledge and without even seeing eachother not even for once. So once again thanks and please bear with my torture. Bye. Love you all
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Posted: 11 years ago
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why this dreamy look linsie??:) :)😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashrina

Thanks for reading and commenting on this part. And yeah asad would be taking a long tour. I know that I am boring you all without asya meeting but I just want you to be comfortable with.zoya's lifestyle that's why I am giving you all chapter without their meeting. And moreover about asad's lifestyle we all know that is very cozy. I am concentrating more on zoya because this story mostly revolves around her,without her nothing moves forward in this story just like in the serial. This is a special story for me because it is somewhat related to me. I know that I am not a good author or a good writer but I do know that I have to write this story. I have a good story of asya meeting cooking up in my mind but I don't know whether you all will like it or not but anyways I will write it down. And also I want asad and zoya to develop a feeling of warmth with each other without even their jnowledge and without even seeing eachother not even for once. So once again thanks and please bear with my torture. Bye. Love you all



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continue.. writing what you have planned
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CHAPTER 5
No Need to be Afraid
ASAD's POV:

I clutched my pendant tightly and again raised my eyes to look at the picture. it was of a small girl with curly hair, chubby face and a cute smile adorned her face. she was sitting with a girl who was likely to be her age and there was another girl standing behind both the younger girls. she looked much elder than the two girls for atleast about 10 years and she was standing with a elderly woman by her side. the woman looked like the girl with curly hair. i could make out some matchings between the woman and the girl.eventhough the photo was old and was starting to have some patches too, but i could still clealy see the content in the picture. i felt an array of emotions stand erect in me. i dint know what that was. it was of restlessness and some yearning and some other feelings too. my eyes began to concentrate only on that curly haired girl. i felt as if i knew her for very long. i couldnt get my eyes to move anywhere except the girl in the photo. i closed my eyes not knowing what to do.suddenly warmth settled over me. i slowly opened my eyes to look at the girl. when i looked at the picture i felt as if i was engulfed in a warm embrace. the atmosphere around me changed and all i felt was warmth, love and care. i dint feel any loneliness now. and the suddenly out of nowhere i blurted out " zoya" looking at the girl in the photo. i smiled hearing her name from my mouth.
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Narrater's POV:
* 8 days later*
Nearly two weeks have passed by and all that zoya was hearing from morning to evening was the squeals of exictement from the triple Ns and tanveer. she, humeira, zeenat and anwar were silent prisoners to their list of lists for 'the paris settling programme' as they called it. T being the supermodel wanted to shop and that was what they have been doing past three days. they visited some more friends and teachers and enjoyed their life in india to the fullest. ayaan was always dragged by humeira, who had grown a great liking to the 'monkey man' like humeira called him. ayaan too liked her and soon they were good friends but still argued over petty things like children. all of them had a gala time in their home that is india. anwar was making all the arrangements for their departure from india and arrival to paris. zeenat being over protective and worried was making everyone to do all their packing in front of her eyes, so that they wouldnt miss out anything and wouldnt do any masti with that. zoya was lucky enought to hear the name 'asad' sometimes when they had their friends time. she always smiled whenever they used to talk nonstop about the epic story of their bhaijaan.she started to develop a feeling of warmth around her whenever she heard that particular name. she noticed the growing liking of ayaan towards humeira everytime he looked at her. she couldnt understand anything as she herself was just a teenager. eventhough ayaan was very much elder to them, he dint have a problem with them calling him by his name. she was loving this love and care shared by her friends and her only laadli humeira.
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*Paris*
Asad had been very busy preparing for his world tour. he had informed ayaan about it and was now facing the wrath of his siblings. they were very disappointed with him and ayaan was the only one who understood asad's problem as he himself was a world traveller because of his career.

Asad was on his way in the airport to check in and board, while talking to ayaan on the phone.
AY: hey bhaijaan!! have you reached the airport
A: uhh... yeah.
AY: come on bhai dont be so sad. you are coming to india. after a long time you are coming back to you home town.
A: yeah i know that ayaan but why should it be this time, the time when you all are coming to paris.
AY: mmm... but its okay na bhai dont worry everything would be fine.
A: ayaan nothing would be fine, i really want to meet my sisters
AY: the tripleNs are absolutely fine. i will take care of them. dont fret
A: what tripleNs?? who are they?
AY: dont tell me bhai. you dont know? nikhat, najma, nuzhat the triple Ns. bhai! how can you forget such a nice nickname!??
A: how can i forget when i dont even know about that nickname?
AY: i havent told you?
A: no
AY: oho sorry bhai i just overreacted i guess
A: mmm... let it be. and who kept that name, its kinda nice.
AY: oh come on admit it, its not kinda nice, its very very nice
A: ok ok its very nice
AY: zoya, zoya kept the nickname!!!!!!
Asad smiled at the mention of her name and dint speak for a long time
AY: bhai bhai!!!!!
A: yes ayaan.
AY: where are you lot??
A: umm.. nothing ayaan, just... ok ayaan iam checking in. i will call you later, bye...
AY: bye bhaijaan..takecare...
Asad hung up and checked in.
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Zoya' POV:
i sighed as i thought about leaving india and leaving for france, leaving meiy and pops here. i was happy but still i dint want to leave without my miey and pops. 'i am leaving india tomorrow in the evening flight to france' i thought. i have to do something useful today other than lazily sitting here all day. we were having our friendly time at morning, it was nearing 9am. i spoke out
ME: hey! listen i want to do something really useful today.
T: what is it zoya?
Me: well i heard about a blood donating camp going on near the ashram
H: and you want to donate blood
Me: great humi you know about me very well. thats why you are my laadli
Pops: thats good you guys go and do something useful for this nation
" ok then lets all go and donate some blood to show that we love this nation with our blood" ayaan said coming in through the door after talking to someone on the phone.i jumped from my seat and said " lets go"

Narrater's POV:
They went to the blood camp through the route they took for the ashram. while passing by the ashram ayaan got clicked of something in his mind and asked zoya
A: zoe why did the kids in the ashram call you mumma??
Z: well lets say that they just want a mom's love for them so they call me like that.
H: well thats not it. she loves the kids like her own children and moreover we too dont have parents and they too dont have parents so she is just providing them with all the love and care like a mother.
Ayaan was impressed by the way she looks at everyone and loves everyone.
A: so the tigress too has some soft part in her.

They all reached the camp and did all the formalities to donate blood. when it was time for the donation, ayaan refused to come.
A: no iam not coming, look at the syringe how big it is,no i wont come
H: so the monkey man is scared of syringes huh??
A: no no who said i am not scared.iam ayaan the great. why would i be? its just...
H: its just... what?? haha you are scared of injection
Everyone started giggling and ayaan was embarassed to the core.
N2: oh come on bhaijaan please its just a small syringe
A: no najma its not look at it. how huge it is!!!
N3: please bhai dont make fun of yourself please come
Z: okay ayaan just look at how i do.
The nurse came and pricked the syringe in zoya's nerve and turned the roller in the tube down so that the blood can flow from zoya to the plastic bag attached to the tube.
Z: see thats it, i dint even pain a bit
Ayaan who was watching the blood flow was feeling nauseous. his face became green and he wanted to throw up. he rushed out of the place and ran away and threw up whatever he ate in the morning. humeira ran behind him and gave him water when he was finished throwing up. she brought him back and by now everyone had syringes attached to the hands. humeira too went and gave her hand to the nurse . she hissed when the syringe was pricked into her hand. ayaan shook his whole body when he heard her hiss.humeira assured him with her eyes and all the fear of syringe in ayaan flew out of the window. he too confidently came forward and gave his to the nurse. the nurse made him sit and pricked him with the syringe. ayaan closed his eyes when he felt a mosquito bit like pain in his hand. he opened his eyes to see the blood flow from his hands to the plastic bag.
A: ya allah!! my precious blood is getting out of my hands
Z: oh really precious is it??
Everyone laughed at the mona raabert antics.
H: you know what ayaan baaji has the rare blood group : bombay phenotype/ hh
A: really?? even our bhaijaan has that blood group only. wow you two have the same blood group!!!
T: she got this from her mother.
A: bhaijaan got this from our dad's mom
N2: cool !!!

Their blood was packed and it was sealed to sent it to delhi main hospital.
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* next morning*
asad landed in the delhi airport. he made his way to the formalities with the immigration officer. and he was now out to his homeland. he sent a quick prayer to the almightly and made his way to the hotel he was to be staying for a few weeks. he called ayaan and informed him. ayaan wanted to see him as both of them were in the same country but asad refused as he had pack up and board the evening flight to france. ayaan had sent a car to asad so that he doesnt have to take a taxi all the time to go somewhere. asad checked-in in his room and got freshened up and left to do the work as soon as possible. whiled on his way to the office where he was to meet his client, he was met with an accident because of a ruthless lorry driver who was drinking in the morning

Asad's POV:

i was driving in the SUV that ayaan had sent for me to the aiport. road was very jammed and i couldnt get get through it . i was at the far back of the jammed road as i just now came to the place. i have always loved this city for its traffic jammed and busy roads. this city has changed so much since i left this place a nice 8 years back. i was still marvelled at this city and was in my own dream land when i felt my car jerk in the most worst way possible. i flung forward and got hit on the steering wheel. i could feel the blood oozing out and then a sharp pain in my shoulder as a big glass piece struck me. and the the front glass got shattered as my car hit the vehicle in the front and all the pieces got struck to my body. i was injured and now the car has got to a normal position. i tried opening the door but couldnt. i could see many people hovering around my car. i was feeling suffocated and then i punched and hit the door as much as possible. i broke the glass window with my left hand to let some air get in, while doing so i got cut in the wrist of my left hand and i could feel the pain of the wound. i was starting to get unconsicous. the last thing i remeber is someone opening the door and me falling out the door before blackness came in.
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Narrater's POV:
Asad was admitted in the delhi main hospital and he had lost much amount of blood. ayaan was informed about this because they called the last dialled number in asad's mobile. ayaan cancelled his france ticket and booked an urgent ticket to delhi. only zeenat and anwar were informed about this accident and ayaan gave the girls some excuses of helping bhaijaan in work and he is in delhi now. the girls readily agreed and permitted him to go to delhi. the girls got ready for their beautiful yet sad day and then they all went to the khan residence to get their ayub kaka ready. when they were finished they all got back to the farooqui villa with their kaka.

Zoya was clicked of something in her mind and then she went to her miey and asked about the photo which she was having when she was a small girl. she had always had it with her and lost the photo when her mother died. her miey just smiled sadly and said
Ze: sorry zoya but you know you have lost that photo long back.
Z: but miey that photo had always been with me and i just lost it. what am i going to do without. all these years i had you and pops for support but what will happen in france. i will be all alone.
Ze: no zoya you wont be. your sister and friends and kaka are with you na
Z: its just...hhhmmm.. i am lost miey.
Ze: zoya beta everything will turn out to be fine.
zoya smiled and clutched the pendant her phoophie had given her and touched the earings her mom had given her when her ears were pierced. she had always had it and never wanted it lose it. so she rarely wore it fearing that it might get lost. she joined the girls and kaka to leave for the airport and all the girls in said in unison " heyo france, here we come " all of them squealed and went out happily.
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its been a few hours and ayaan had just reached the hospital and was enquiring about asad ahmed khan. when shown the way to the ICU he just cringed to see his brother's condition. asad had lost a lot of blood and the doctors were waiting for the blood supply to arrive. as he had a rare type of blood. Luckily asad was out of danger except for the lose of blood.
The blood arrived and the doctors without checking and filling the details of the donor and all, just went with the package as the patient direly needed it . asad was injected with the blood and flow of blood was smoothly carried out. the nurses and doctors were amazed with the response of his body to the blood. he reacted swiftly as if on instinct to the outside blood. ayaan was relieved that his bro was out of danger and the doctors had said that he will be discharged within two days.
the doctors now thought of doing the paperwork of the blood donor. they looked the donor's name and it was
ZOYA FAROOQUI.
ayaan was shocked would be an understatement when he learned about the donor's name.
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here restlessnes settled over zoya as she replayed the memory of ayaan telling them that he has to go to delhi. he sounded tensed yet managed to make it sound it less tensing. they reached the airport and was in with the migration officer. they went on with the formalities. zoya was moving out of the office as her paperwork was finished first. while doing so the chain of the pendant got stuck in the nail which was protruding out of the pane of the door. as the hook of the chain was loose it came out easily when zoya moved. zoya panicked as she could feel the loosening of the chain and saw it was about to fall on the ground, she made and quick move and catched it before it fell and wore it around her neck tightly this time.

Zoya clutched the pendant and rubbed and said " i will never let anything happen to you" and kissed the pendant. ---------Asad opened his eyes with a small gasp.
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okay thats for now. comment on how it was guys. i know it was boring but please do tell me if it was boring also.
See you all with next chapter bye...
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awsm...
please continue soon...
and i want asya to meet...please...😉

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