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Come on guys guess that person who gave a shock to zoya
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Chapter 1
Its a new day I feel (part B)
Zoya's POV:

Anyways i put on a smile and turned around and got the shock of my life...it was...ayaannn... IT WAS AYAAN!!!!
'OMG!! it was Ayaan.it was the Triple N's brother ayaan' i was dying to meet him for years, after i knew that he was a car racer...A CAR RACER!!!
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AYAAN AHMED KHAN:
Nickname: Zingo doll, super flirt.
Age: 22
Height: 5'6
Weight: 150 pounds
Eye colour: black
Skin colour: pale with golden tan
Skills: slight fighting, racing, driving, sing, dance, plays some games and sports and some musical instruments,etc.
Features: handsome with teenager like features, curly haired with a childish smile, lean but muscled but not a body builder.
Nature: cheerful and an exact carbon copy of zoya's bubbly nature, blurts out everything before thinking but composes if serious. manages well
with everything but not so intelligent like his bro in understanding matters.Mordern and Flirtarous.

Residence: Was in california because of his career and has shifted to many places because of the racing career and mostly goes to france for his races and stays at the khan mansion there with his bro and that is why very close to him. came to india just two days back.

His story:

He is a racer and is the most talented racer in the current years' affairs. He is the joker among the 5 siblings.he has got my wounds due to his career and once was wounded very badly as his car went crashing to the side board near the audience but successfully won the race.he was admitted in the hospital and was declared to be in coma. he was is coma for 2 months and by that time their parents passed away.The already devastated family with ayaan's state was evenmore crumbled with their parents death. Luckily he did not have any memory loss because of his coma state.After learning about his parents death he went into a mental trauma for a few weeks but with the strong help of his family and his cheerful nature did not extent that trauma any longer.But still he rash drived to give out the grief of losing his parents whenever he was in the race field and he did it till today.he is a dreamer and is waiting for his dream girl.
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I let myself to drop my jaw wide for a little while and then composed myself. i smiled and then got up and then got up and walked towards the door. i greeted the four ladies with a hug and slight nod addressed towards ayaan and said a barely audible " come in" to them.they came in and nikhat spoke first saying that " this is ayaan our bhaijaan and he is a car racer and we have already told you about him and so you wouldnt need much introduction about him" i nodded again.

Then i went in and called everyone into the drawing room eventhough they could see the main door clearly from the kitchen counters,but humeira remained inside. it was weird because she was always excited to see the guests who have now come in the early morning, well except for ayaan. but as we were coming out of the kitchen, i saw them making their way towards the kitchen and could hear N2's(najma) grumbling about how she was starving.

I gave them a questioning look and then N1(nikhat) cleared it saying
N1: actually we dint have our breakfast so thought of having it here.
Miey just smiled and went off to the kitchen. i again gave them a questioning look moving my eyes from ayaan to them, now N3(nuzhat) cleared it by saying
N3: No, he doesnt have a problem and he too dint have his food. and when we said about appi's cooking skills he definitely decided to wait.
and she just went on her rant when N3 stopped her and said
N3: ok ok stop it. now lets go have food iam starving here.
I just smiled and motioned them to follow me and pops. pops went and sat on the corner and humeira was nowhere to be seen.i got a little worried but then brushed it of thinking that she would have gone into the kitchen storeroom to get some food items.
Again N1 spoke the same lines which was spoken to me about ayaan to miey and pops.they just smiled and said " good"

I could see ayaan whispering something into nikhat's ear. when i raised my eyebrows at her she said
N1: Bhaijaan, asked whether you dont eat in the dining room, because you came to the kitchen straightaway...
she trailed off.then suddenly out of nowhere T(tanveer) jumped in and cleared it off saying
T: its actually their family sort of thing to have breakfasts and dusktiffins in the kitchen rather than going to their oldy boldy victorian dining table. and that is why they have a big and lengthy counter...
saying this she beamed at him and he smiled childishly while ruffling his hair. ' so now these had already befriended eachother' i thought.
miey turned and smiled at him and said " make yourself comfortable and now your a part of the family and be casual with us like how your sisters and tanveer are" .He smiled gratefully at her and said " thanks appi" . i was amazed by how he mended into my family. i turned to see the emotional expression in miey's face and yeah there it was with a slight bead of tear in her eyes. this always happens whenever someone calls her by some relation rather than madam or ji. she turned around and went on with cooking

He plopped himself on the counter which amazed me and i could hear the giggles of the ladies in here. he looked at them with a strange look and they all said in unison that " this is zoya's habit of sitting on counter and eating and get scolded by appi "
Miey: but i wont scold you ayaan.
came miey's voice still with her back towards us.pops came to my support and said
pops: but this is unfair, why only zoya should get scoldings for sitting on the counter and why not ayaan? no offence ayaan but...
miey suddenly piped in and said " No zoya too wont get scolding hereafter because she seated herself in a chair like a good girl before i could say anything and so both of them are allowed to sit on the counter hereafter" i had a smile plastered on my face after miey said this and ayaan just chuckled shaking his head. ' what? did he just chuckle at my hard work of getting miey to give me this consent? i am gonna give him nicely. i will not leave him.' i mentally threw daggers at him. then i heard two victory squeal and hurray.It was N2 and pops
N2 & pops: i saw zoya's dimples in the morning. yes!! today's gonna be the best day. yes yes yesss!!!!!
" argh these two. never gonna change. carbon copies in words" i muttered to myself. i dont know how but they both said the same dialogues at the sametime mostly everytime and that too when it concerns me. then everyone said me to show my dimples and i flashed them a irritated smile.suddenly out of nowhere ayaan said " you have a nice smile and dimples too." " flirt" is said immediately shocked and everyone burst out laughing.
N1: exactly he is very flirtarous and his nickname itself is super flirt. zoya i dont know how you find out things easily and iam impressed.
saying this she bowed down in front of me and everyone laughed again including me and ayaan felt embarassed. Suddenly it hit me that i

behaved a little bit normal with him. Ayaan jumped out of his place and came near me and in an SRK pose and style he recited some lines " i ayaan AK asking your hand in to be with me forever and ever in the land far faraway with the love and care you share, i know you're a beauty and i can see that in you sweety, i know iam a flirt but iam not gonna give you hurt,i know you can smile but it remains vaguely for a while, dont take me as a stranger because iam gonna be your power ranger..., so with all this i am concluding that will you be my just a friend and best a friend? will you give your hand in for a true friendship?" and held his hands for a shake. i was shocked to hear his words initially but
then smiled at his cute proposal of friendship. i readily accepted his friendship by shaking his hands and pulled him for a hug and whispered
" friends" .
Everyone smiled at us and i could see the happiness in my meiy and pops eyes as now their little zoya has found a new friend. ' where was this humeira when all of this was going on? she would be so happy'
Me: so friend i really say you are a super flirt
A: Nah!! i am a super duper flirt
Me: i can see that u damage yourself in front of everyone.
everyone chuckled and giggled at our nok-jhok. and then we had our food and then chatted away our breakfast and inspite of this humeira was still missing.

' omg i have a great task to do today'
Me: miey and pops we all have a great task to do today.
Triple N's and T : yesss!!!
M and P and A: and what is it?
Me: we have visit the ashram and then have giveaway our goodbyes to our friends and teachers as now we are all going to france and settle there.
P: okay go get on with your work
Me: uffo look at my outfit how will i ride my bike in salwar, stupid me,i'll go get changed then we will all go.
Miey: no zoya meeting your teachers in jeans wouldnt be nice.
Me: but miey how can i drive my bike in this?
Triple N's : come with us in bhaijaan's new range rover, its so cool!!
A: yes zoe come with us
Me: ok then i'll go get my hair dried first.
Miey: what???? you havent dried your hair. this girl na??
She started chasing me towards the staircase and i said " miey dont chase me, you are already old and you are gonna trip and fall" and i could pops burst out laughing and other followed giggling. 'now pops is gonna be in big trouble' i went to my room and barged into my closet then into my dressing room. i dried my hair and brushed it a few times and let my hair loose. i wore the earings my mom gave me. while doing so i caught a glimpse of that half incomplete pendant chain. i took it out and held it in front of me while memories of the past rushed over me.

* flashback*
It was my mom's funeral and my dad was nowhere to be seen and i dont know why . everyone where crying and silently mourning. my lil sis and big sis were also crying. i saw a car pull up in the driveway and a couple with two boys and three girls got down. one of the boy was around 9 and the other was around 7 and three girls were at my age . the couple came closer to me and the women took me and humeira in her arms and cried with us while consoling us too. i dont know why but i felt a warmth around her like i felt with my mom. she introduced herself to be my mom's friend and their phoophie. she introduced her name as dilshad and her husband's as rashid and her daughters' and nikhat, najma, nuzhat and her second son as ayaan and her first son as asad... that name immediately brought a smile to my face. she was a very loving and caring women and i liked her very much. While returning to her home she gave me this pendant saying that " this a half incomplete pendant and the other half would be with your souls other half. keep this safe and destiny will bring your happiness in your life" ...

* end of flashback*
I clutched the pendant thightly and wore it around my neck . i checked myself once more in the long floor length mirror and headed out to greet my new day with a new friend.

Location: france

somewhere in france, someone stirred in sleep and scratch the neck and the hand found the pendant around the neck and clutched it tightly and slept again peacefully...

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okay guys how was it and comment please. i thought someone would guess who it was but no one did. and the next part would be mostly the character sketches and it will definetely have asad atleast a little.
okay see you sooon byeee
Edited by ashrina - 11 years ago
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I am shock 😲 😲 ayaan car racer... perfect fit
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Grt update ...love it ...continue soon 😃
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DO THE INDEX... SO THAT CAN FOLLOW... EVERY CHAPTER
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who else going to hold the other half... of ASAD!!
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YES ayaan is a car racer. because i personally like racing with my brother and dad. there are more car races on the way of this FF
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Chapter 2
Is today for real?
Narrater's POV:

Zoya got dressed and headed out to greet her new day with new friend. She came down to see everyone waiting for her except humeira. she was saddened as well as worried and nobody seemed to notice her missing even her miey and pops.
Zoe: pops where is humeira? she is nowhere to be seen.
P: oh! she is in her room. she is a kinda unwell...
Z: what?why dint you say me pops. oh god!!!
with that she sprinted up the stairs to humeira's room.Everyone were worried about her health but let pass off from their mind as there was zoya to take care of humeira. everyone trusted zoya with taking care of everyone whether they were in pain, hurt or wounded or illness, zoya did her best to bring them out of that state. she was everyone's trusted mentor while she herself dint have one.
Here down there was a soul who was amazed by the name'humeira'. ayaan here was thinking about humeira, after her learnt that named humeira was living in this house.'oh my! such a nice but poor girl is unwell' he thought. ' what would have happened to her' ' should i go check on her. yes i should, maybe my lovely shayaris would make her feel better. ' how was she related to them' and then there was a list of question running in his pea sized brain.'mm... humeria-ayaan, wouldnt that be nice?' ' what the hell! ayaan how could you think like that' ' but then you were getting some strange feelings since you stepped into this house, what does that mean?' ' and now this name thing, come on just go and see her for once then you would know what she means to you' and then he was brought out of his dreamland by N3
N3: bhaijaan! where are you lost? you are looking as though the world as broken down in front of you.
with that she started giggling. without thinking he just blurted out
A: nothing nuzhat. its just, can i go upstairs so as to meet that new friend?
T: oye super flirt, better keep away from humeira, orelse your life is at risk zoya would eat you up alive.
A: oho iam not gonna flirt with her. i just want to befriend and that poor girl is also unwell...
saying this he put on his best childish eyes which made all to roll their eyes and say" dramebaaz" . Zeenat smiled and said " of course you can go ayaan." He muttered a quick thanks and went upstairs.

Zoya reaced the first floor and barged into humeira's room which was opposite to miey's and pops' room to see her condition. her heart crunched up to see her lying in the bed with the sheets totally wrapped around her.she went near her, removed the sheets partially till her chest and placed the back of her hand on her forehead to check the temperature and 'OMG!! its so high, no its burning.'. she heard some foot steps and it stopped near the door. without turning she threw her phone towards that person and said" call the doctor" . she rushed to the washroom and took a small bucket and filled it with cold water and then took a washcloth and came back to the room. she noticed that it was ayaan who had come to the room.
Ayaan dialed the doctor's number which was saved in the phone and told him to come here at once, good thing is that the doctor was free at that time.

Zoya dipped the cloth in water and placed it on humeira's forehead so as to bring down the temperature.
Humeira woke up with a start as she felt something cold on her forehead. she could see her baaji sitting beside her and a stranger near the door talking to someone on the phone.
Ayaan hadnt been able to see humeira as zoya was blocking his view from the door and at the sametime he was busy with the doctor on phone.
Zoya hugged her sis lightly as soon as she saw her open her eyes.
Z: what happened humeira? how did you get sick?
Humeira with a weak voice tried to answer but couldnt. she tried to get up and with the help and zoya, she succeeded in it.
Ayaan could see humeira clearly now as she was sitting on the bed. he was mesmerized by her simple, soft yet strong features.
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HUMEIRA FAROOQUI:
Nickname: laadli
Age: turned 17 two months back
Height: 5'4
Weight: mere 115 pounds like 110 -115 pounds
Eyecolour: black
Skin colour: pale with sheer olive:
Features:Round shaped face with high cheek bones.skinny yet elegant body. long, straight yet wavy hair till the beginning of thigh.
Nature: soft spoken yet argues if she is angered, but with teasing nature at times. does everything to make her sisters smile. funloving nature at

times. takes up everything boldly and bravely.
Skills: dance, sing, plays games, sports and instruments, drives two wheeler. very far away from driving four wheelers.

Her story:
She is the lil sis of zoya and zeenat and the youngest farooqui for now.she loves her sisters and bro in law very much and would do anything for their happiness. she is just 6 months younger than zoya which is really a miracle as well as an uncovered truth. her sis and bro in law know about truth but wouldnt say them. when both of them questioned about their age difference to their sis and bro in law, they just said that humeira was conceived just a week after zoya's birth and she was born prematurely in 6 months. Eventhough humeira and zoya felt it was a weird explanation, they just believed that their miey and pops would never lie to them.she is the exact opposite of zoya and does everything in a girly manner. she is a dreamy girl waiting for her prince charming but she is mature enough to know that she is not legally in the right age to get married but will wait till she finds her prince at the right time and the right age. she values relations verymuchand for her relationships comes first before anything.she gets angry if anyone talks bad about relations and doesnt respect it. she is an experimenting head.
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Ayaan was dumbstruck on seeing humeira. ' why do i feel like she is someone related to me? why do i have a deja-vu feeling?why does it bother me to see her sick?' ' argh!! ayaan shutup you just saw her and you are fascinating about her.Foolish khan!!' 'well then ayaan put on your flirtarous mode' he smirked and went near them. Suddenly humeira started coughing due to dry throat while trying to tell her sis about her illness. ayaan swiftly poured some water in a glass and held it in front of her. humeira dint see who was in front of her and just took the water and drank it. after drinking she lifted her eyes to see the stranger and thank the person for giving her water but as soon as she did lift her eyes, they narrowed and held a questioning gaze.

Ayaan understood the meaning of that gaze and said
A: hi iam ayaan the car racer, the second brother of your triple N's, the second of the khan siblings and...
H: yeah yeah, i know that your ayaan the car racer, the second brother of your triple N's, the second of the khan siblings and blah blah blah...
she said it without missing the sequence.
A: oh my you have very good memory power, i see miss pretty .
H: Flirt
Zoya chuckled to see the conversation between her sis and ayaan. and how her sis too repeated the same word she had used earlier to ayaan.
H: wait wait...you ayaan AK have the audacity to say than you are a car racer before saying the you are the bro of triple Ns. how could you?
A: career comes first my lady
H: excuse me iam not your lady
A: oh then if you are not a lady. what are you? a gentleman? or a hom...
H: dont you dare say that?
A: of course i dare and what can you do to me. you're just a sick old lady.
H: do i look like a sick old lady to you????
A: oh yeah now it dawns upon me. they told that you were sick and now you are just pouncing as if you are running in a marathon race.
Throughout this conversation ayaan was smirking which made humeira angrier and now she was boiling with anger. but her weak body couldnt take anymore and gaveup. she fainted and collapsed on the bed. ayaan was boggled and rushed to her.zoya too was shocked and came to her side.
Zoya sprinkled some water on humeira's face. Ayaan blamed himself for her state.
Z: humeira wake up. oh god what happened?!!
A: humeira come on my lady strong get up.
Then slowly humeira opened her eyes. zoya and ayaan had a smile plastered on their faces.humeira too smiled slightly.
A: iam so sorry humeira. i shouldnt have spoke like that to you. that too in this condition.
H: come on, its ok anyways dint you just call me your lady strong, then why are you acting as if iam a stack of grass.
Ayaan smirked and said
A: so lady strong too has some sense of humour.
All of them laughed at this and then ayaan asked
A: Mona, how is she related to you all?
Z: well she is my lil sis and my laadli...wait, who is this mona? and why did you call me with that?
A: oh that, mona is you and it just came off my mouth. i myself dont know how i called you with that...dont you like it??
He asked expectantly
Z: of course i like it and so now onwards i may call you raabert. are you fine with it?
A: of course iam fine with whatever a beautiful girl like you calls me ?? but i would have been happier if you had called me by dear or darling...

he said with a puppy face. zoya smacked his forehead and giggled with her sis. by this time the doctor had reached the farooqui villa and came into humeira's room.
Doc: what happened humeira?
H: i had nauseous spell in the morning. i dint even have my breakfast.i came to my room and threw up the little water i had in the morning. when i resigned back from the washroom, i slightly felt like fainting and slept on the bed.
She said all this in one breath. the doctor smiled and said
Doc:let me check you up
She did she check up and said
Doc: i think this is just stomach flu. what did you have for dinner last night humeira.
Z: she dint have anything. she said she dint feel like eating.
H: no that is not the truth. i did have dinner last night.
Z: but i dint see you eating anything. did you eat something secretly in your room.
H: uhhh...no baaji. i actually...h-had-d some of--ff actually the b-bird fo--ood...
Z and Doc: what ??
Ayaan burst out laughing but controlled himself when he saw two pairs of eyes glaring at him, one of zoya's and other one was the doctor's.
Z: what is this humeira? how could you eat bird's food? why did you eat it in the first place?
H: actually baaji i was experimenting whether bird food would be acceptable to human body.
Z: and the result?
H: i was proved wrong
she said sheepishly
Doc: now if you have finished with it. can i prescribe her some medicines and i'll give her and antibody and vomiting injection for now.
Z: yes doctor.
Doc: and dont lock her in this room. she has to go out in the fresh air so that she wont have vomiting spell.
Z: but shouldnt she rest, she is weak
Doc: its ok i will give her a injection for energy along with the antibody and that would do and this is just a stomach flu,nothing to worry about, it will be gone by two to three days.
Z: and her diet for these three days?
Doc: just give her some lite food like bread and some fresh juice, that will be fine.
Z: yes doctor
Doctor gave humeira the injections and took her leave. they decided to take grab the medicines prescribed while on their way to ashram.
Z: now humeira would do the honour of explaining me the insensible act of yours
By this time everyone came up to humeira's room and was asking about her health.
H: actually...
Z: stop this actually and say it now
Ayaan came to her rescue and said
A:mona leave her na? she is just a kid. kids do stupid things
H: hey mr.buttery flattery iam not a kid.
Z: stop it both of you!!!
Pops: what just happened her? what is the matter
Z: pops humeira ate bird food last night and that is why she is ill
Everyone started laughing and humeira was embarassed to the core and soon anger took over embarassement
H: stop it everyone. i was just experimenting. what is there to laugh about it? you know about my nature right? i like to experiment with things...Then what????
she said this with tears in her eyes and sobbed . zoya went to her and took her in a embrace
Z: shhh... its okay, iam sorry.we are all sorry. its just you made yourself sick.
and then ayaan came to her side and said
A:Come on you shouldnt get angry for this. its just a good family time. you too should laught at yourself. just think about it and you yourself will laugh.
Humeira gave a thought about it and chuckled at her stupidity
H: you're right
Humeira smiled looking at him and a smile found its way to ayaan's face seeing her happy.
T: so now that everything is solved. shall we go? its already late
Z: oh yeah humeira lets go. ummmh are you ready?
H: ofcourse mumma!!
A: mumma!!!??? i thought she was your sis
Z: oh foolish khan she just calls me mumma whenever she is in a playful mood or whenever i boss her around
A: ohh ok then lets go.
They all went down and zoya packed some food for humeira. they got in the car and waved byes to zeenat and anwar. they got the medicines and gave it to humeira while on the car itself. they chatted their way to the ashram. Once they entered the ashram they were surrounded by many kids. zoya picked up one kid and led the others to the nearby tree and started chatting with them.
Kid1: mumma why dint you come to see us yesterday? you dint remember rohan's birthday?
Kid 2 : yes mumma why dint you come??
and then all the kids started pestering her about yesterday. she just smiled and said
Z: yesterday na, i had so much of work and the boss dint leave me to come. he told me to do all work in the office... mmm...
Kid 3: mumma who is that boss? i will go and give him one nicely so that he doesnt disturb you.
Zoya chuckled and looked around to find someone and that is when she saw ayaan busy on the phone with someone. she pointed out to ayaan that he was her boss.
Suddenly three to four boys ran to ayaan while all the girls remained with zoya.
Ayaan was so busy that he dint even care about the world and the tragic incident that is gonna happen to him in a few minutes. all the four boys gathered around him and waited for him to turn and see them. when ayaan turned and saw there were four boys around him and he shaked his head in 'what' manner. then suddenly one of the boys kicked him in the leg and the other boy gave a kick on the other leg which made ayaan crouch a little. another boy gave a kick on his groin which made ayaan fall to his knees with an ' aaah' sound. another gave a good slap on the cheek.
Ayaan dint know what to do and was very confused with what was happening. here zoya and the other kids were enjoying the scene taking place.ayaan called one the boys and asked in a meek girly voice
A: why did you do this? who are you guys?
kid: we did this because you made our mumma work too much
A: who is you mumma?
kid: she is our mumma
the kid pointed towards zoya who the second she saw the kid pointing towards her, ran for he rdear life.
Ayaan: zoyaa...
he said in disbelief .Ayaan still with that meek voice said to the person on phone
A: bhaij-jaan, i will talk-k to you later. bye.
Ayaan gathered up his strength and ran the way zoya ran to teach her a lesson.
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Location:Paris, france

A guy who as handsome as a person from heaven looking like a greek god was getting ready for daily routine of going to office. he was
searching for his tie and was mentally cursing himself for his immature nature.'where did that tie go?' he heard his mobile ringing and went to attend it. it was his beloved bro ayaan.
Guy: hello bro. how are you?
A: fine bhaijaan. and you?
Guy: fine. how are the triplets?
A: oh they are super fine.
guy: by the way when are you guys coming here?
A: by next week bhaijaan. they are saying that they have to visit some friends and their teachers before leaving.
guy: so next week it is? i'll arrange everything for you guys
A: thanks bhaijaan you are the best.By the way bhai, have you found any bhabhi for me in france? you must've found someone.
guy: ayaan!!...
A: dont worry bhai ayub kaka will not say anything even if she is a french girl. i will help you too.
Guy: ayaan would you shut up yourself or do you want me to shut you up??
A: oh come on bhaijaan dont show me that lion fist of yours to frighten me because iam here in india and you cant punch me.
ayaan said gleefully
Guy: and yeah how is kaka? is he alright? how is his health?
A: he is doing great bhai, dont worry he is a strong man.
guy: he is our only parental support after mom and dad. i cant afford to lose him now.
the guy said with a tint of tears in his eyes.
A: come on bhai. why this lion is now being emotional? its not only you bhaijaan, we all cant afford to lose him...
A: * silent*
A: aaahhh
guy: ayaan!!! what's happening???
A: * silent*
guy: ayaan? ayaan!!!!
A: why did you do this? who are you?
guy: ayaan who did what?
A:*silent*
the other side(kid): * some mumbling*
A: who is you mumma?
guy: what mumma?
the other side: * some mumbling*
Ayaan: zoyaa...
Guy: zoya...
the guy felt a rush of emotions and feelings run through his body. he smiled unknowingly hearing that name come out of his mouth.' who is zoya?' ' why do i feel connected to her? is she my relative of friend?' ' i have already heard this name once. and how does ayaan know her??' there was series of questions running in his mind but he had to come out of his dreamland now as his brother was in danger. he disheartedly pushed those questions aside and that is when he heard ayaan speak
A: bhaij-jaan, i will talk-k to you later. bye.
Guy:ok bye take care.

The guy dint know what to do and just sat there thinking about ayaan and the girl named zoya.he took out his diary and wrote down today's incident .
' today i spoke to ayaan and some commotion had happened there. he shouted suddenly and spoke to third person about 'mumma' and all. and today a beautiful thing happened to me. i heard the name 'zoya' for the second time. first time was when i was kid but i dont remember about it much. its a beautiful name which means full of life. i wish she is full of life. i' ll continue afterwards till then bye.' while writing this he had small smile playing in his lips. he kept the diary open and went to his office without bothering about the tie, a happy and content smile was plastered on his face.
The pages of the open diary turned swiftly because of the breeze coming through the window. it rested on the first page which read " ASAD AHMED KHAN"
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okay that's for now guys.please comment about this update. and about the children calling zoya as mumma will be revealed in the next chapter. and next chapter may contain character sketches.
see you all in next chapter. till then bye...
Edited by ashrina - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update..


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