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wow already 21 days... 😒
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ash Ki bachi ek update toh de yaar
i know study load is much but still try to update just one chapter😉
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ash Ki bachi ek update toh de yaar

i know study load is much but still try to update just one chapter😉


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Chapter 13
Came closer the Soulmates:

Narrator's POV:

It was time for zoya to join her job and the others to join for the french courses.

The whole khan and farooqui was buzzing around preparing for their work at hand.

Zoya and asad together had been giving a few speech training to the girls, while ayaan and anwar-zeenat felt like they were talking alien language.

The french training mightn't have been much helpful in training the girls but it proved to be helpful in stiching a few stiches in the relationship of two soulmates.

It had brought the two soulmates closer.

They slowly and steadily began to understand each other,even though it wasn't anything much deep to their lives still they got on the simpler things of them.

Asad was mesmerized by her strong yet gentle attitude and strange desires. And zoya was loving his determined and free living nature.

They both supported each other and defended each other.

The zoya who was afraid to come out of her shell was regretting for even building such a shell around her which was preventing her from being the old zoya.

She lost her determination of making asad prove himself trustworthy when he was around her.

They felt that their miserable life was shaping up in a good way.

In the days he noticed a glint of love in her eyes for him as well as her siblings. It was a unique one...so pure and so very powerful.She showered them and spoilt them with that love which he had been terribly missing for many years .

Yes, It was the same love that he had felt when around his mom. It was the same love that he had seen in his mom's eyes for him,years back. It was the love which he was yearning for.

The love she showered them was the unique, pure, powerful love ...the motherly love. The love of a mother towards her children.

He started respecting her for the compassion she showed to her loved ones which included him too. He knew she loved him too,because he could feel the love emanating from her which he was yearning for so long - motherly love.

' They say that no one can replace the love of a mother but for me, she does it. She proved that someone special can do replace the love of a mother.and that special someone is none other than you zoya.' this is what he would always think of her.

Even though she was very young in age,her maturity is shown in the way her mind and heart always worked together.

But he confused as hell with one thing, which is - why would she love them all this much,but still wouldnt let herself enjoy the world?

'There must be some reason' he always thought to himself.

Now with anwar-zeenat had gone back to India,zoya is the one who must take care of everyone which also included the little baby asad. Asad might be the eldest of all the youngsters there but he just turned into a fussy little kid with zoya.
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Asad's POV:

I heard some noise coming from kaka's room. I asked ayaan and the girls who were sitting along with me having their breakfast.

Me: guys do you hear some noise from kaka's room?

Ayaan nodded his head in a yes, while the others shook in a no with a very doubtful innocent expression. I narrowed my eyes and said in a stern tone

Me: single answer!

N2: its actually bhaijaan...zoya is ...is urging kaka to go to doctor today...as its high time he gets is treatment done...he is not in a good shape that you know...but...

N3: ...but what to do...he is not all complying ...always stubborn that he won't come.

I sighed .

Me: let me try.

With that I stood up from the chair and went towards his room. I saw zoya trying very hard yet gentle in pulling kaka out of the bed,while he stayed in a firm position.I smiled at her care to not hurt kaka.

Z: kaka!... please get up...you have to come with me to the doctor...please!!!

K: no way beta..!! I won't ...I am fine...see...I don't need any any treatment.

Z: of course kaka...I can see that you are fine...by you are not in a good health ...so it is must for you to consult a doctor.

K: oho! Zoya...iam really happy..i have no worries..my heart is at peace...iam sure i will live a long happy life till a 100 years...

Z: oh yeah! Kaka! You will definitely hit a century like sachin. But for that wouldn't you need a little help from the medicines! So stop this sentimental talks and GET UP!!!!!...

She yelled. I silently went and stood behind and whispered in her ear

Me: shall I?

She looked at me startled and then smirked and said in a mock tone

Z: you??hmm..

She gestured me to try.

Me: kaka...

Kaka turned his head away.I kept my hand under his chin and made him look at me.

Me: kaka! I know you will live a 100 years, but you know what I want you to live a double century so that you could see me getting married and then see my kids and then bring them up and then get them married. Dont you want to see those wonderful times,mm...?
Kaka eyes glistened with happiness and he slightly nodded a yes.
K: let's go beta!
I looked at zoya and wiggled my eyebrows at her.
She looked at me with her jaws hung open touching the ground. She glared at kaka. I helped him to sit down on his wheel chair and started wheeling him out of the room.

Z: kaka!!!! How can you do this? For how long have I been urging you to come with me, but you wouldn't budge...but then when your ladla handsome prince comes and orders you to come then you silently comply...your so bad!

K: oho!! Its not that...come here I will tell you the reason.

She went near him and he whispered something in her ear to which they both giggled.

Z: but kaka..this doesn't just explain much about your doing...

She saw kaka with narrowed eyes. He chuckled and signalled her to come near him again. I stopped and she kneeled in front of him. He lovingly patted her head saying

K: he may be my handsome prince but you are always my beautiful golden fairy who spreads happiness all over my world.

She smiled brightly at him,showcasting her beautiful dimples.' Oh how much I want to caress those dimples' I thought smiling.

Z: aww...kaka...only in your world...???

Kaka chuckled and said

K: in everyone's...

Again she put her dimples on display with a sunshine of a smile and hopped on her feet and fleeted her way happily across the hallway to the drawing room, where everyone was waiting with a shocked expression.
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(after kaka's check up)

Doc: bonjour mr.khan!

ME: bonjour.

I said in a tensed tone.

D: woah! pas besoin d'tre tendu. tout va bien avec lui.
(woah! no need to be tensed. everything is all right with him.)

K: see! i told you iam fine.

i rolled my eyes at him while zoya glared at him.

D:euh ... laissez-moi vous envoie vous envoyez pour le massage des jambes .
(er...let me send you send you for a leg massage.)

He called the nurse and told her to take him.

D:euh ... mr.khan .. je me suis trouv en face de votre oncle et je suis sorry.his sant se dtriore peu peu. Je sens qu'il est trs heureux pour une raison et c'est pourquoi il estime qu'il est trs bien. mais il n'est pas. il n'a pas de maladie, sauf pour son oldage. Je sais qu'il est juste soixante et il ya des gens qui sont bons dans cet ge. mais il est une sorte de problme avec lui et .. il est commun pour les personnes ges, nous ne pouvons rien faire ce sujet. iam ne dis pas qu'il a seulement quelques jours gauche avec lui, non, ce n'est pas prdits par nous. il peut mme avoir quelques annes aussi.
je sais tre un mdecin je ne devrais pas dire cela, mais la situation me fait.
mr.khan, je peux tre un mdecin, mais je suis un tre humain aussi, et je crois vraiment en Dieu.
je pense que maintenant Dieu veut passer du temps avec vous oncle et c'est pourquoi il l'appelle bientt. tt ou tard, chaque tre humain doit y aller. si, de son mieux nous gardons lui toujours heureux comme a jusqu' ce que son temps arrive.
Je peux sentir qu'il est trs heureux, oui, il est allum. donc, tout ce que je ferais et je peux dire, c'est que s'il vous plat garder heureux et je suis sr qu'il va rester avec nous plus longtemps.
(umm...mr.khan..i lied in front of your uncle and i am sorry.his health is deteriorating bit by bit. i feel that he is very happy for a reason and that is why he feels that he is fine. but he isn't. he doesn't have any disease except for his oldage. i know he is just sixty and there are people who are good in this age. but there is some kind of problem with him and..it is common for old people, we can't do anything about it. iam not saying that he just has a few days left with him, no, its not predicted by us. he may even have a few years too.
i know being a doctor i shouldn't say this, but situation makes me to.
mr.khan, i may be a doctor, but still i am a human too and i definitely believe in god.
i think that now god wants to spend some time with you uncle and that is why he calling him up soon. sooner or later every human has to go there. so, its better we keep him always happy like this till his time comes.
i can feel he is very happy,yes, he is glowing. so, all i would and i can say is that please keep him happy and i am sure he will stay with us longer.)

He said it all at once. he said everything. i dint have anymore doubts or anything to ask. he is right. no one can question the god's decision. so i just nodded and thanked him and left with zoya following me.
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I directly went to the massage room and stood outside lacking the strength of going inside and facing him.

I felt a sting in my eyes and the next second i was tearing. I felt zoya hands cover mine. It was warm and provided all the comfort that needed to me, no words spoken.

I looked at her with my eyes still blood shot and tears running down. I know i must be the one who should have held myself strong, but sadly no, i cant. I wont be able to and I know that.

Her eyes bore into mine and I could the tears in her eyes too,but she dint spill them. Unlike me. I was in awe at this girl standing infront of me. She is holding back herself just so that I can let my emotions flow.

'shhh...' she calmed me down.

Z: nothing will happen to him, i promise.

She smiled which made a small smile form itself on my lips. But still this overflowing dam wouldnt stop. I felt like a emotional women and I cant help it.

She slowly pulled me close to her and I, without thinking for a second hugged her with all my force and buried my face deep into the crook of her neck, wetting her skin with my tears.

'thanks...' i mumbled relishing her warmth.

She rubbed my back and pulled me even closer if that was even possible. It looked as though she too was drawing strength from me.

She provided me all the strength and support i needed. She slowly pulled me out after i had run out of tears and gestured me to look at him.

We both looked at him through the glass window still in eachothers arms,to see him teasing and laughing with the nurse while as well enjoying his massage.

Z: such a flirt, just like you.

I turned towards her with narrowed eyes and an innocent expression and we both laughed.
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okay guys...i know you all wanna kill me for this bakwas update and as well a late one but i cant help it. i was busy with my studies. iam sorry to the power of infinity. but pls do read and comment.i worked day and night to come up this update...i really dint get any idea as to what to do in the chap 13 and finally here i have written something and posted it. iam not all good with emotional scenes so sorry...iam basically the emotionally challenged asad who was once ruling qh.
i wish you can forgive me...okay now bye and love u all...thanks in advance.
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Posted: 11 years ago
note for chapt 13
hey guys! its me once again... i know iam bothering you all but one thing i want to clear...
i guess many of you will be wondering why i made asad a cry cry person in this part..usually the man comforts the woman right? but its different or maybe weird here...but thats in the story...its like zoya is the mother figure and she is comforting asad...
all you have to do is read behind the lines...i have hid many reasons and justifications behind this cry cry asad...
well, if you cant or dint...let me tell you...its actually like
zoya had built a shell around her ...this you all know...so she is happy with her present but has not thrown away her past, but blocked it with that shell, thats it...she isnt expecting any love and she is morethan happy with all the love she is getting from her family and friends.
but here asad, he still wants to live his past, he is craving for love. he had always lived a lonely life.he had missed it for years...and now when he is now surrounded by his loved ones..he cant help but expect more and more. after years he has met his family and is now swimming in the pool of love...suddenly when losing someone of his loved ones will be like draining a few litres of water from the pool of love.all he had always wished for was to be with his loved ones...but now fate is taking someone who had been the father figure for him the last few years...he had missed so much in his life and now he is not willing to let go of anything now...and thats why he let his emotions flow...
and zoya being the strong women she has always been just supported her best friend thats all but that doesnt mean that she wont face her past and a day will come when she would be vulnerable...she will definitely face such a day...but thats comes later in the story so for that you simple have to wait and watch...oopsi sorry sorry, you have to wait and read...but as of now its only the happy days.
Just think of this part as the day when asad was comforted by zoya when he found out that his own father was the culprit of his mother in the show...eventhough not by hugs but by words..but here its opposite...its my hug and barely by words.
okay again now bye...love u all...for again reading my stupid ramblings.

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yeh im first finally after soo much hardwork im first yiipppeee

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