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Posted: 11 years ago
when will u update?? 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
today is Monday... here is the update... THANK YOU ALL FOR READING AND COMMENTING...
Part 23:

As he pulled inside the home,both zoya and asya were deeply in sleep.asad shaked zoya lightly, but she was in a blissfull sleep. He opened the door, and came the other side and carried zoya in his arms, and dilshad was carrying asya. He paused in the hall, then took zoya to his room and put her in his bed, and dilshad placed asya next to zoya. As dishad was removing asya shoe, asad nodded a no. D smiled at A and excused herself and left the room. ASAD sat next to asya, removed her shoes, and also her dress and using a wet tissue, he cleaned her face and hands. Then he took a pair of asya night dress and put it to her. Then he removed zoya slippers, and then covered his princess with the blanket.

He took his prayer mat, and spread them in the floor, and sat down to thank the almighty, for giving him happiness, after a long time. He got his zoya back after a long time, the bubbly, charming, childish and ofcourse stupid...too. after saying his prayer. He went to zoya room and picked up a set of dress for her and kept them in his bath room. He came to kitchen and was searching for something. D came down and noticed asad in kitchen and asked him what he is looking for.

A: milk

D: it will be in the fridge..

A: no ammi ... I checked..

D: did u check the chiller tray...

A: chiller tray...?

D comes and shows him, and asad smiles sheepishly.

D: u sit, I will boil the milk, do u want coffee..

A: yeah ammi...

D makes black coffee, and came and sat next to him in the dining table.

D:.. Asad.. after a long gap... happiness has finally made it way to our home...

A: yeah ammi...

D: mai bahut kush ho asad... my house has once again became a home... my daughter and grand daughter .. returned to me... I pray to allah.. that this last long... throught out our lives.

A: me too ammi... Says it shakingly.

D: asad r u ok... what is wrong...

A: ammi.. I am scared...

D: asad...

D comes closer to asad... asad keeps his face on his mother waist, hugs and tears flow down...

D caress his hair... and soothes him... and wait for asad to speak...

A:... ammi... I am scared to be happy ... Though I put a strong face in front of zoya... whatever zoya fears... I fear too... what something goes wrong with as once again... ammi... I cant afford to lose them... again... I wont survive...one more loss...ammi... when I look at the peacefull sleeping face of asya and zoya... It bring solace...to my heart... All my life I have struggled ammi... I never complained... My struggle has led me to my destination... my family... my love... My daughter... today.. after a long time... We all were happy... I could see my zoya back... For the first time in the last 3 years... .. I want to keep her smiling... I want her to be the childish zoya...always... never to worry... bcoz all her worries will be mine...and I want to promise her that...but whenever I promised that... I have broken them... whatever the reason... ammi... Please pray that I have the strength...this time... to fulfill it...

D:asad ...do u know...god gives pain to a person... bcoz that person has the capacity to bear it... when he gives u the pain... He gives u the strength to bear it too... I know ur life... dear... It has been struggle from the age of 8... but u stood up to the challenge... u never complained... u faced life head on... with ur relation with zoya... ur insecurities played a big role... but u overcame... that too... then u were betrayed by a person..whom u considered as u r friend... at the very end... Destiny played a cruel game...but now... everything is different...life has given ur chance... Don't loose... it... learn from the past... donot repeat the mistake...i am sure... ur life will be filled with happiness... Life is a circle of good and bad... U have suffered enough... For a lifetime...now it is the turn for good... this goes for zoya too... She had her share of pain too... now it is time... u both let ur past go by and look forward to the future...

Asad realized the truth in his mom words... And gained strength from them... he will be happy... He will keep his family happy.. too... he may have to face pain in the future... but as long as zoya stays by his side... He was ready to face the world head on... and D comes down and places a kiss on his forehead..

D: asad one more thing...

A: yeah ammi...tell me...

D: it is about ur marriage...

A: ammi... zoya...?

D: I know zoya is scared to think about marriage now... but in the long run... What is in ur mind...

A:.. ammi I don't know ... I am taking things as they come... slowly she is coming out of her shell... she will go back to her shell... Once again if I say the word marriage...

D: I know... I don't want any pressure on zoya... She is daughter in law and my daughter...for me... as zoya said.. u both are married the day u guys conceived asya... I care a damn about the society... looking back... I am so happy that u both committed that mistake that day... look it brought as asya into our lives... because of asya... Zoya came back to our life... too... I know you would felt guilty for past 3 years... for that one night... now look... that has brought... the precious thing of ur life...I may sound greedy too... Asad... I want to see my grandson afzal too... If u both want to marry some time later... or u want to lead ur life like now... You know what I am trying to say... Don't u... I am here to support u both... fully... In whatever direction u want to take ur relationship...ok... I love to see u both married... but as long as u two are together...i am happy ... And it will be zoya choice...ok

A: yes ammi...

D got up and filled milk in asya sipper , and also mixed a hot chocolate in a cup for zoya. She gave them to his son, and after wishing him a good night, she went to her room for a blissful sleep. Asad came and sat next to asya and made asya drank the milk... And after she finished it, he moved closer to his sleeping beauty.. he admired her for sometime.. he dipped his finger in the milk, and applied them on her lips... Zoya tasted them.. and she was craving for more... asad slowly kept the cup close to her to let her sip... as she sipped... he removed it...

Zoya opened her eyes... And stared at him with his sleepy eyes...

A: change ur dress... and then sleep... Is nt jean uncomfortable...

Z:,, chocolate milk please...

A: I will give... but should promise u will change..

Z: I have to go to my room to change,

A: no.. ur dress In my bathroom.. so ..please...

Zoya pouts and nods... and sips her chocalte to content, and in a sleepy state goes and changes...

Asad takes cup and sipper back to the kitchen. He comes back to the room, and takes his pillow... and makes his bed in the couch... as zoya comes out.. she sees it..

Z: asad...

Asad looks up at her...

Z: sleep with us...

Asad looks at zoya... And then nods his head, and shifts back to his bed...he kisses asya on the forehead, and repeats the same on zoya...with asya in between, the whole family went to sleep... a routine they plan to follow henceworth.

Note: slow chapter...asad-dilshad conv is much needed for the story to move.. just like d-z conv.. D approval is the only thing that matters to A-Z... I promised kiss and dance... Kiss happened... dance is still on the way.. in another 2 parts... I guess.

NEXT UPDATE... for sure by thrusday or before...

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Edited by kals82 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Asya_Obsession

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND PLZZ PM ME!!

Loveddd this update!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved the concept! i REALLY hope that Asad and Zoya will go to a carnival and enjoy like this

thank you for reading... I am not able to send u pm... it is showing some error... can u send a buddy request... I will be easy for me to send for all the next updates...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hot chocolate i luv it... i can imagine zoya with tht hot chocolate on her lips coz i hav thm too whenever i have hot chocolate 😆 thnks for the PM waitin till thursday n AsYa dance
Edited by niyati789 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
AWESOME DEAR...I WAS READING CHAPTER 15 AND I GOT UR PM OF UPDATE...THANK U SO MUCH...THIS IS THE 10TH TIME I AM RE-READING THIS FF...I LOVE IT...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aksasya

AWESOME DEAR...I WAS READING CHAPTER 15 AND I GOT UR PM OF UPDATE...THANK U SO MUCH...THIS IS THE 10TH TIME I AM RE-READING THIS FF...I LOVE IT...

thank you so much... for reading it... it was suppose to be my frustration of zoyaan track and felt so bad for zoya... started writing this story... but all ur comments and love made this into a ff...
thank you once again for reading... and especially for commenting too... it inspires to write better...😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
WOW gr8 part loved it asad and dilshad convo is beautiful
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon
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Originally posted by: kals82

thank you so much... for reading it... it was suppose to be my frustration of zoyaan track and felt so bad for zoya... started writing this story... but all ur comments and love made this into a ff...

thank you once again for reading... and especially for commenting too... it inspires to write better...😛


LET ME TELL U SOMETHING DEAR...YOU ARE AN EXCELLENT WRITER...👏KEEP IT UP DEAR...AND PLS DON'T END THIS FF SO SOON...AND TRY TO WRITE AN FF REGARDING THE LATEST MOHABBAT KA JEET...😊ITS A KIND REQUEST FROM UR FAN...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
good update...i liked asad-dilshad convo...zoya is so cute!!!
waiting for dance...continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aksasya


LET ME TELL U SOMETHING DEAR...YOU ARE AN EXCELLENT WRITER...👏KEEP IT UP DEAR...AND PLS DON'T END THIS FF SO SOON...AND TRY TO WRITE AN FF REGARDING THE LATEST MOHABBAT KA JEET...😊ITS A KIND REQUEST FROM UR FAN...😉

thank you ... this ff...is here to stay I guess... I am suppose to finish it long back around part 10... but I am nowhere close to the wedding even at 23... I am sure of 4- 5 parts... as the thoughts come I put them into words...
regarding another...ff... once I finish this... I will write the next one... hope so...
love ur feedbacks...

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