AsYa SS ~ Vaada ~ Updated on PG 116 ~ 04/08 - Page 23

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mochhug


Sadly I'm used to it I send out 250+ PM's and get this many likes or maybe 90 normally 😕 And even less comments. Unless someone spams or a convo happens 😆

😭..
Why don't you skim your list then? It will save you the trouble of sending so many pms?? Put up a notice in your next pm😃.. I have seen some other writers do it!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

😭..
Why don't you skim your list then? It will save you the trouble of sending so many pms?? Put up a notice in your next pm😃.. I have seen some other writers do it!


I know a lot of people have told me to do that, but I feel bad haha. I feel I'm being mean deleting them 😆 Plus it's such a hassle. But hmm maybe I should.
Posted: 12 years ago
This is SO sad. 😭 😭 My poor Zoe! 🥺 But SO beautiful. I love it so far, please continue soon! 😳 Oh and BTW, I LOVE your siggy! ❤️
-Fari 😳 ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago


😆 Still 14 likes to go 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mochhug



😆 Still 14 likes to go 😛


Ab kya main 14 MIDs banau like karne ke liye? 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ab update kar bhi de yaara!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Monicaaa, oh my darlinggg!!! 😃
First of all, a big SORRY for not giving my comments for the first part. I can't remember reserving a spot (since you did not spam me about it) 😆 but now I am here and fully focused on your SS.

These days, quite a few writers are getting inspired by this new Ayaan-Zoya wala track lekin I have to say, yours does stand out and is something really different.

Lots of question marks that need an answer. Where did Zoya go? I guess, she wants to settle on her own... Good that she did not go back to Mr. Khan. Let him win her heart all over again...
Waise, when is he coming into the picture? Eagerly waiting for the confrontation between AsYa. And I know you won't disappoint us!!!

He had thought he was entering a qabbarstan, not the home of a newly wedded couple (Very well said)

How I wish the Qazi's in the show were intelligent and smart like this one... Thank God for writers like you who do see the logic of a story 😆

Update soon, phir se ghayab mat hona!


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Posted: 12 years ago
So beautiful! please do not end it here, get Zoe and Asad together. and I feel even in real QH something like this is going to happen, Qazi will come back later and make their Nikaah invalid for sure..Thank you for such a beautiful write up..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fanraya

So beautiful! please do not end it here, get Zoe and Asad together. and I feel even in real QH something like this is going to happen, Qazi will come back later and make their Nikaah invalid for sure..Thank you for such a beautiful write up..


Haha don't worry. There are about 3 more parts at least to this. I just don't know if I'll end it in 5 or 6. Depends on what I come up with. The next part is written. I'm just waiting for the likes haha. Read the note on page 26 you'll understand 😳

And I really hope you're right. I hope this happens in the show. It would be amazing. Otherwise, how the hell is Ayaan gonna take Zoya back after Nikhat's nikaah? I mean they would still be technically married right? So how can she live in the KV? 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
Monica, beautifully written! Very poignant! You are the queen of emotional scenes! You have an awesome knack for putting emotional thoughts on paper. 👏 👏 👏

So, it was the Qazi at the door. I knew it wasn't Asad. There had to be a reason she left. Where did she go? Back to the Madrasa? I would like to see a strong, independent and working Zoya!! Time to wipe those tears and take control of her life!

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