AsYa SS ~ Vaada ~ Updated on PG 116 ~ 04/08 - Page 18

Nyc continue...lved it bt plz ab asya ko seperate mt krna plz...update soon nd pm me nd thnx for d pm

Hey the last part was really sad & upsetting. It's been all unfair to Zoe, all have been. they never thought for taking her opinion just once, after all it was her who was being traded for the life of their sister, but no one gave it a thought. I'm glad Zoe left them all & that too without a message for Asad, he deserves it. how could he leave her there, all alone, and never once question the reasons that lead her to the masjid & this dreading incident.

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unres.
wow it's been a long time since reserved!
sorry been busy with school and y'know...life, basically.

anyways I've always loved ur stories and this one is no less! I really wish they kept Zoya's character the same as she was in the beginning like how u did. I think Zoya leaving makes the most sense in this track at the moment. I would say continue soon but u have part 4 up already 😃
I'll comment on that sooner than this.
btw amazing update, I just loved it and can't wait to see what's gonna happen next!

So the last comment was from Teddyyy but now it's Simba here! Haha different person! This better count, pleaseee?! So as Simba, I feel you are a marvelous writer and you are killing us with all the cliffy's and like dude, I NEED to know what happens next. I hope you go with Ayaan solving this himself because that would perhaps show character growth and show that these three months weren't completely useless. He's promised both Asad and Zoya that he would reunite them one day and the day has come. Lets see if he's capable enough to do so! I'd love to see where she's hiding this time haha and how he makes it up to her and convinces her! (:

My real name is Sumbul- first time mentioning that on the forum! ALL FOR YOUR UPDATE! Okey, I just found it to be a big deal loool. Anyways, this is a new comment and I wanted to heighten how you did a beautiful job of having the qazi own up to his mistakes. Despite being a religious figure, he is a human and he can be at fault and he accepted that. He couldn't do anything for Zoya but at least he gave her the knowledge that she never failed with marriage. She was still unmarried and wouldn't have to know in the future that she got divorced- it's a big deal in my opinion. Therefore, although this cause issues in Asya's relationship, it opened Zoya's eyes and allowed for Ayaan to redeem himself and fix this issue and two broken hearts.

Teddyyy you sneaky little thing!

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I don't know who I am this time but I'm someone. And this someone is still angry that Asad bb didn't get a letter. LIKE NO FAIR ZOYA DAS JUST MEAN LIKE EVEN AYAAN GOT ONE! Psh, this girl.

Originally posted by: teddyyy

I don't know who I am this time but I'm someone. And this someone is still angry that Asad bb didn't get a letter. LIKE NO FAIR ZOYA DAS JUST MEAN LIKE EVEN AYAAN GOT ONE! Psh, this girl.

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I shouldn't post again but I couldn't help it.

Well Zoya is mad. But not thaaat mad.

Thats all I'll say 😉

i really liked it

jaldi update karo yaaar...thjis is freakingly amazing...cant wait long for the next part...