AsYa SS ~ Vaada ~ Updated on PG 116 ~ 04/08 - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago
do lafzo ki hai, dil ki kahaani
yaa hai mohabbat, yaa hai javaani

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

res..

doorbell kharab hone wali thi!! 🤣
Unres


Thank you so much for dedicating this update to me sweetheart 🤗
You're welcome love! Seriously so sweet of you to spam AND send out PM's 😳😳😳

Damn!! It was the Qazi at the door!! Asad kahan reh gaya?😡
So Qazi finally realizes his folly and finally its out that the nikah is not legit. I wonder if the Qazi comes clean in the show though!

😆 Asad apni duniya mein khoya wah hai. Abhi aayega 😆

Loved how you portrayed Zoya's hurt,confusion and turmoil when she learns the truth and these lines were bang on!!
A nikaah is a paak relationship for me. I don't consider it a game. And for that reason, I can't pretend I have not committed a sin, and disrespected my own values and beliefs by going along with this, this whole time.


Thanks! I'm glad! I was trying to show that her own beliefs were intact, but her purity is now shattered, her innocence and her ever forgiving nature is deeply compromised by this 😭


She is so hurt that she left no letter for Asad😭 I know... but kya karein. He was the one who made her stay there, so how can she go back? And what would she say to him? She may be mad, but she's still not one to rub salt on wounds. So nothing is better than that 😭

What will Ayaan do? Probably run to his bhaijaan as always!!😆..and Zoya will surely be in bhopal somewhere ...no orphanage this time please..😕

🤣 Probably. But he has to do more than that, I mean it is his fault too, right? He's the reason Asad hurt her, and pushed her away. Ugh I hate this track. Dunno why I'm writing this 😆

OH yeah. You guys

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Posted: 11 years ago
Mona Darling yeh update chhoti thi...😆...Well if you give us updates this often, then i would not mind...😉
Pheeww!!! It was Qazi only...we had thought of every single person who had been a part of Qubool Hai ever...since the starting...be it Akram or the attacker Raju(i hope that was his name only)😆😆😆

Awesome update...good that Zoya took this step...all i hope is that she should be successful in making the Khans and Siddiques realise their mistake...they should be guilty...way to go Girl...Good luck Zoe...
Update sooon...if you still have some conditions jaldi baatado...we'll start working on them...hahahahah😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goingreen

Res (:

Monica, this is the first time I have ever bothered to reserve a spot on anyone's thread :p

Such a beautifully written part!! Oh my it was so heart-wrenching, I was literally hanging onto every word. So so so sad to see such a broken and defeated Zoya. And forget going back to Asad, she didn't even leave him a note!! Okay please excuse me as I go sit in a corner and cry now ):


Aww don't cry 😭

I was so happy when you resed. Even I've never seen you do that.

But Now I feel bad for making you cry. Okay, maybe I don't. 😆 It was what I was trying to convey. But aww don't just sit and cry. 🤗

Thanks for the heartfelt reply 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesum update monica ...luvd it ...so emotional n heart wrenching ...
plzzz update soon ...cant wait for d nxt update ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Now this is really interesting.
You managed to hook me up with this!!
Beautifully written! 👏 I wonder where is Zoya and how the story will shape up now.
Please continue soon Monica!! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg...it was d qazi , asad kaha gaya???
Ab yeh zoya kaha chali gayiii??
Aur ab ayan kaha gaya??
Its a big cliff hanger
Updateee nxt prt soonnn plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow !!!! It was awesome ... Continue soon plsss 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG OMG OMG!!! Moni.. This was BEAUTIFUL! 👏

I totally loved the way you have portrayed Zoya's character! ❤️

'Woh nikaah jaiz nahin hai...'

Well.. I'm glad I get to read it in your story, 😃 rather than watching that crap on Zee TV! 😡

Beautifully written!

The BEST dialogue was:

So I'm leaving. I am not going back to Mr. Khan. I can't. You two brothers, decided my fate without my say. Without even asking me how I felt about it. And for what? It was all in vain. There was no need for it. I cannot go back and pretend that the last three months did not happen.

BEYOND FLAWLESSNESS! 😳

Continue soon! 🤗

I'm waiting! Love you! ❤️

Mrina
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Super duper mind lasting update...why do alwYs leave us hanging getting anxious to know what happens next

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