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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

very nice ...
dont say it garbage ...

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

cute..

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SANYA

@cutiesanya

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Don't indulge in self criticism, it is
Nice work, short, simple , sweet

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Nitika

@nuts_22

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

First of all it's not garbage😆

Its a Brilliant Piece of work that is beautifully written😊

Their Emotions are depicted so beautifully😳

Just Loved It!!!

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Hey tis is lovely...
Its superb...
The emotion u display is amazing...
Thx fr the pm...

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McdreamyKSG

@McdreamyKSG

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Heyy!! Thanks a lot for the PM!😊

This was so beautifully written! The way you have explained their emotions is FANTASTIC and heart melting!❤️

You are a fab writer! 👏The last lines really got to me!😳

PS. can you PM me your other works too? Pretty please????😊

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Archana

@mysticlover

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

It was definitely not garbage...
It was beautiful...
I loved the way you showed Zoya's emotional turmoil n then how easily Asad calmed her down...

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

who told you that this is garbage?? Its flippin' awesome!!

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snehasya

@snehasya

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

don't think what you wrote is garbage it is the finest thing and the equation which they share I just loved it no reasons to fight, no grudges he knows only he can handle her and she knows she is the only one where he fill find solace. thanks for pm and please update soon the slumber party I am damn excited about that .