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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: KulfiBai

Soup you finally updated! Don't take too long next time please 😆


Zoe's plight saddens me D; Well so does Asad's but Zoe's more so. I loved that line you wrote about her spirit and how the man was demanding and how she couldn't take it.

I kinda wish your story plays out in the show but alas we'll have to settle for watching Zoe be a hero again 😆

Great update! (:


Hmmm..

I had badly wanteda Zoya like this😳...but I was pretty sure when I started off that Gul wouldn't give this... her Zoya is an Iron Woman...and her Asad has pursued her actively.😉 Can't blame Zoya for being the hero!😆

I am not complaining because they gave us those hugs that showed them progressing thru the track...😳

Thanks a lot...🤗


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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
wonderful dear😛
cont soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: chicksoup

I was pretty sure when I started off that Gul wouldn't give this... her Zoya is an Iron Woman...and her Asad has pursued her actively.😉Can't blame Zoya for being the hero!😆[/DIV]

I am not complaining because they gave us those hugs that showed them progressing thru the track...😳

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The main reason why my karruu says Asad is a heroine huhahahahahahahaha 😃 😆 😆 😳

Night night snuggle singgle 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Soup it is awesome 👏the way u explained zoya feelings and her pain is jus wow...update it soon..gud nyt soup
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Hi,
Read all the 3 parts in one go.. It is just wonderful... The pain of Zoya has been expressed very well... Waiting for the next part..😊 Good luck !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Awesome update!!

This reminds me of the song "Pi Jaaun" from Farhan Saeed. The lyrics, from Asad's point of view, completely suit this situation.

Bhulaaun Kaise, Woh pal jo mere bin hai tu beeta chuka...
Lautaun Kaise... Jo aansun meri yaad me baha chuka...

Bujhaun kaise... Ye aag tere dil me jo laga chuka...
Sunaun kaise... Wo siskiyaan jo dil me hun daba chuka..

Mar me jaaun... Fanna ho jaaun.. Kahin main jaake doob jaaun
Nazar milaun... To ye chahun... Ke teri aankon se...

Pi jaaun... ye gham.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
loved the update...
but u really made us wait long for it, but truly worth the wait😃
loved the way u put across Zoya's fears and doubts...
waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Brilliant update Soup... Beautifully written..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
Beautiful update soupy..
Da way u showed zoya confusion. .z jst wao...

AMazing dear..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Ahh! This was absolutely beautiful 👏
You have a way with words 😳

I loved every word of it. How I wish Gul had shown us Zoya's plight the way you have described but I know its not possible 😆 Ye show ke muqaddar mein nahi hai 😆



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