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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: me2you

Green ji...I will be back...soon, very soon...

Let me eat first 😆



Hahaha alright!! I'm waiting (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

OMG i am so sorry i am so so so late but i was a little busy today and i wanted to read nd comment when i was free and this story had my undivided attention so I am here now😃

Bechara asad zoya ne najma and dilshad ke sath milke kitna pareshan kiya mere baby ko😆
aur asad apna saara gussa employees pe nikaal raha hai😆so Mr.khan ghar nahi jana chahte zoya se bachne ke liye and zoya knows he is just trying to hide from her i guess they do know each other pretty well after all they are made for each other😳
Zoya doesn't have the patience to clear level 130 typical zoya...i love how you show the character traits so well in your stories by little actions😃
"Zoya... main... main office mein hoon... please... mujhe..."
I knew it mujhe yahin pata chal gaya that ki asad is playing a prank on zoya nd when he said ki ammi aur najma ko mat batana tab to main aur bhi sure ho gayi...nice going Mr.khan nehle pe dehla😆
Aww poor zoya..though i was laughing here but i felt bad for her😆zoya acting like that reminded me of mangalpuri asad a little...
"Horrible scare isse kehte hai Miss Farooqui," Oh i have missed asad talking like this
So zoya got the taste of her own medicine...i loved how asad asked zoya 'ki jaan nikal gayi thi aapki"i can totally see his smirk😳ooh ooh zoya said yes i didn't expect that...good going zoya ab asad ahmed khan ko unhi ka move bhari pad gaya😆ab Kya karenge mr.khan?
Oh i loved how he held her wrist and pinned against the door😳so she gave the signal she lifted her chin😳the kiss was so hawwt...i love how you manage to give us an amazing kiss everytime...
Tomato ketchup and asad licked her fingers haawwwt😳awww the caressing of lips😳
"You know, I think I don't mind celebrating Halloween in the house this year,"
So zoya can finally have her halloween...aww and she kissed him😳
Loved it loved it loved it...i hope we get another FF very soon...coz how much ever i read its not enough and i want more...yes i am greedy coz you are that good😃





Hi Anushree (: Yeah I like to bring in normal stuff that people do hahaha like play Candy Crush :p I'm glad you liked it haha, I had a lot of fun writing it for sure (: About another FF, no promises coz i haven't thought of anything yet haha. But maybe I will one fine day haha.
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Posted: 11 years ago
😆 😆 I loved it. He got his revenge and something else he didn't bargain for, Zoya's feelings exposed! Great TS!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goingreen



Hi Anushree (: Yeah I like to bring in normal stuff that people do hahaha like play Candy Crush :p I'm glad you liked it haha, I had a lot of fun writing it for sure (: About another FF, no promises coz i haven't thought of anything yet haha. But maybe I will one fine day haha.

i will be waiting for that "one fine day"😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome awesome awesome
u r just too good . update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cclove

😆 😆 I loved it. He got his revenge and something else he didn't bargain for, Zoya's feelings exposed! Great TS!



Haha I've always wanted Zoya to be the one to express herself first :p Glad you liked it!! (:
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Posted: 11 years ago
I died laughing!! Then I died blushing! 😆
Awesome TS!! Loved it!!
Please write more. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goingreen



Haha well I don't know, I don't live in India. So that's why I decided to play on the safe side and just say it isn't celebrated in Asad's house, coz I don't know about the rest of India hahaha.

I don't live India either. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
@goingreen Isse kahatye hain mischief-wala two-shot 😆

Mr Khan- chupa rustom likle 😆 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
And here I am again... Loaded with energy to give you some nice comments (hopefully)

Candy Crush on her iPad for a while (Nooo, please no Candy Crush...) Okay sorry if I hurt anyone's feelings, but no me don't like Candy Crush 🤢

Asad's broken voice came through (To be very honest, I knew he had something in his mind) I guess, we watch and read way too many serials and stories 😆

"Horrible scare isse kehte hai Miss Farooqui," Asad whispered (Scary it was for sure, what a revenge plan! And please...the whispering...that is irresistible)

"Jaan nikal gayi thi aapka?" (Agar aapko kuch jata toh, I would have gone crazy!)

pressing his body against hers, sandwiching her between the door and himself (Ahum, ahum...yaha kya ho raha hai...???) 😳

Zoya felt Asad's lips on hers seconds after she had closed her eyes (Well...yeh ho raha hai...) ☺️

"You know, I think I don't mind celebrating Halloween in the house this year," (And I don't mind reading such Halloween stories every year) 😊

Who says Halloween is only for horror stories? (I did not complaint) 😊

Green ji! Me being so happy today and you are one of those reasons 😃 Thanks for making Halloween an AsYa-leen 😳😆
Mr. Khan's revenge plan was 'scary' but it turned out to be a sweet revenge, because the end was surely sweet and romantic.

Thank you!!! And please...stay around and bring us some more zabardast stories 😃










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