Asya SS: Muqaddar Updated Epilogue - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

asad as armaan in dmg

awesome update


I was trying to do same... Like that Tent wala scene...
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Amazing update! Poor Zoya! Can't wait for the next part!
Thanks for the pm!
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Originally posted by: chibi_deea

Amazing update! Poor Zoya! Can't wait for the next part!

Thanks for the pm!


Thank u and ur welcome...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 6:

Asad - Mein ek baar unse baat karna chahta hoon...

Simran - Mujhe nahi lagta hai ki woh aapse abhi baat karna chahegi...

Asad - pata hai... but sham ko aap garden mein leke aaiye... mein waha unse milta hoon...

Simran - teekhe...

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Evening:

Simran - Chalo na Zoya...

Zoya - Tum mujhe kaha leke jaa rahi ho...

Simran - yaha khade raho, mein abhi aati hoon...

Zoya - par tum jaa kaha rahe ho...

Zoya stood there for few minutes waiting for Simran... She shook her head and turned to leave... Before taking a step she stopped for a second... She felt Asad's presence there around... She held her breathe for a second...

Asad - Zoya...!!!

Zoya eyes were moist... Zoya didn't dare to turn... Zoya took a step but stopped hearing Asad...

Asad - Zoya rukho... ek baar meri baat suno... Please...

Zoya closed her eyes and turned... Her heart stopped beating for few seconds seeing Asad in tears... He is infront of her eyes jut few steps away from him after three years... She is able to see him after three long years... They stood for few minutes in silence...

Asad - Mujhe maaf kardo Zoya ...

Zoya didn't reply...

Asad - Mujhe pata hai, mein ne jo kiya woh maafi ke layak nahi hai... Mujhe pata hai meine aapka bharosa thoda hai... Mujhe ek aur chance dijiye... Mein kabhi aapka saath nahi chodunga...

Tears rolled down her cheeks...

Asad - Mein aapke saath aapki chavi bankar rehna chahta hoon... Aapke bina mera zindagi adhoora hai Zoya... Aapke bina mein sirf saase le raha hoon, par zinda nahi hoon... Kya aap har janam mein mere saath denge...??? Kya aap apne naam ke saath mera naam jodenge...??

Asad stood with a hope but that hope is hopeless of Zoya's yes... Because Asad knew that it is not simple... After whatever he did, it is not easy for her to forgive him... She took deep breathe, gulping lump in her throat...

Zoya - Mein ek aise insaan ke saath apna naam kaise jodu, jo meri mooh se kud ka naam nahi suna chahta tha...??? Jo insaan meri chavi se bhi door rehna chahta tha, jo uss hawa se saas lena badd kismati samajhta tha, jiss hawa mein meri saase sama hua hai.. uss insaan ko har janam mein, mein saath kaise doon...???

Tears flowed down her eyes, same reflected Asad's... Everyone question was slap to Asad...

Asad - Maanta hoon, mera galti hai... manta hoon ki mein ne aapke bharosa na karke mere zindagi ki sabse badi galti kiya hai... Mujhe sirf ek mauka dijiye, mein humara har sapna pura karna chahta hoon...

Zoya - Jo sapne mein ne aapke saath sajaya woh inn teen salo mein, meri aasu mein behgaye...

Asad was distraught... He has nothing more to say... Zoya dragged herself away from him... Zoya and her shadow left him in darkness...

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Asad and Zoya couldn't sleep whole night with the felings digging her heart... Memories of past occupied there mind, questions about present happenings didn't leave there heart... There life was on a thin line waiting for decision to be made... They didn't understand to live the second chance or to remember the never forgetting painful memories...

Same old sun rose high in the sky but with new hope of life... Asad pacing in his room with coffee cup in his hand... He is confused what to do...??? He didn't understand how to approach Zoya, after there painful but heartful talk... Asad's phone buzzed disturbing his thoughts... Ayaan's name displayed on phone made Asad to answer the call, because he decided not to answer any call from anyone until he solve his life...

Phone Conversation:

Asad - ha.. bolo Ayaan...

Ayaan - mein kya bolungi bhai jaan... bolna toh aapko hai... Aapne Mona se mila... Kya reaction tha unka...??

Asad - Bina haath ki thapad maardiya unhone...

Ayaan - Hua kya tha...???

Asad narrated him whatever happened from the time he is in Shimla and till this morning...

Ayaan - Mona ne issa react kiya hai...???

Asad - Ha... Abb mein kya karoon mujhe kuch samajh nahi aaraha hai...

Ayaan - Aapko bhelna aata hai bhai jaan...???

Asad - yeh kaisa sawaal hai Ayaan...???

Ayaan - Aapko bhelna aata hai ki nahi...??

Asad - teekh se nahi aata hai... kyun..???

Ayaan - Bhelna seek lijiye bhai jaan... kyun ki Mona ko waapass lane ke liye aapko bahot sare papad belne padenge...

Asad - Pata hai, par abb mein kya karoon...??

Ayaan - Aap abb kaha reh rahe hai...??

Asad - It's a stupid question Ayaan..??? of course hotel mein...

Ayaan - Aap ek kaam kijiye... Aap Zoya ki ghar ke saamne tent banakar wahi rehiye... har din aapko dekhegi toh toda sa zidd pigal jaye...

Asad - Ayaan yeh film nahi hai... mein kisi film ya serial ka hero nahi hoon ki unki ghar ke saamne tent banake bass jau... Police aur Muncipality ko pata chalo toh agla din jail mein ghar basana padega...

Ayaan - Bhai jaan, aap mohobbat mein itna practical kaise ho sakte hai... Khair chodiye.. aapne toh mera plan ki band baja diya hai... abb kya karenge...???

Asad - Ek idea hai...!!!

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Zoya and Simran's House:

Simran - Tum Asad ji ko aur ek mauka nahi de sakti ho..???

Zoya - Pata nahi Simran, mujhe kuch samajh nai aarahi hai...

Zoya and Simran were disturbed fro there conversation with noisy crow infront of there house... Zoya and Simran peeped out of Zoya's balcony into there garden...

Zoya - Yeh yaha kya kar rahe hai...???

Simran (To herself) - Good going Asad ji... Kya plan hai...!!! Actually Kitna cute plan hai...

Asad stood there with some children infront him... All the children are having Placards in there hands with one letter... Asa Zoya peeped out, Asad asked children to turn the cards... All the letters together says "I-A-M-S-O-R-R-Y... P-L-E-A-S-E-C-O-M-E-B-A-C-K"..

Zoya came down and Simran followed her... Zoya came and stood infront of him...

Zoya - Aapko kya lagta hai...??? Aap yeh sabb karne se mein Bhopal waapass chalungi...???

Asad - nahi... par mein apna taraf se koi kasar chodna nahi chahta hoon aapko mana ne ke liye...

Zoya - Mr. Kh...

Zoya stopped there before spelling his name... She remembered him saying Aapki mooh se mein apna naam bhi nahi suna chahta hoon' ... Asad is waiting to hear his name from her mouth but again he failed...

Zoya - Aap kuch bhi kar lijiye, mein waapass nahi aarahi hoon...

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Ayaan and Asad Phone conversation:

Asad - woh toh apni mooh se mera naam bhi nahi lena chati hai...

Ayaan - Ha.. naraz toh hogi na... aapne itne bade bade baat jo kiya hai... (Imitating Asad) mein aapke mooh se mera naam bhi suna nahi chahta hoon... Mein aapke saath saas nahi lena chahte hoon...

Asad - Ayaan...!!!

Ayaan - Aur nahi toh kya bhai jaan...

Asad - manta hoon galti hua hai... sudarna bhi chahta hoon... par mein karoon bhi toh kya karoon...???

Ayaan - aap abb mein jo kahunga wahi kijiye...

Ayaan explained him full plan...

Asad - Tum pagal hogaye ho Ayaan...

Ayaan - Try karke dekhiye bhai jaan...

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Crowd - Aana padega.. aana padega... Zoya ko Asad ke pass waapass aana padega...

Zoya and Simran came out and was shocked seeing the crowd infornt of the house screaming her and Asad's name... Asad didn't see Zoya and Simran coming out of the house who is busy closing his ears and getting irritated with noisy group... Ignorant of Zoya's presence, Asad went to leading person...

Asad - Aap logh itna zor se chilla kyun rahe hai...??

Person - Strike karenge toh aise hi chillayenge na sir...

Asad - Itna zor se chillane ki zaroorat nahi hai, isse noise pollution hota hai...

Person - Aapko shayad pata nahi hai, par strike isse hi kiya jata hai... bhai loghaur zor se chillayiye... AANA PADEGA, AANA PADEGA... ZOYA KO ASAD KE PASS WAAPASS ANA PADEGA...

Asad already irritated with noisy crowd came across some people throwing tissues and water bottles around...

Asad - Aap loghyeh kya kar rahe hai...??? Tissues aur waste bottles dustbin mein fakiye... neeche nahi...

Person - Hum yaha strike kare ya yeh sabb fake ne ke liye dustbin doonde...???

Asad - Phir bhi, itna gandha kaise kar sakte hai...???

Zoya standing there couldn't stop herself from smiling looking at Asad whose OCD didn't stop working even in his plan... Simran's face was spread with a surprised expression looking smiling Zoya... In few more minutes Zoya's smile convered into laugh looking at bickering Asad about cleanliness... Simran surprise grew seeing Zoya laughing hearfully... In these last three years she didn't see her laughing...

Hearing loud laugh Asad turned to see who it is... A wide smile spread on his face looking at laugig Zoya... There is a different sparkle in her laugh... Her eyes got a different shine... Zoya was laughing looking at the happening... Zoya controlled her laughter realizing the eyes of Asad and Simran which were stick on her in surprise... She was back to angry face...

Zoya - Yeh sabb kya ho raha hai...???

Asad who was lost in her laughter came back to world realizing that she is back to her anger and irritated mode...

Asad - Kya ho raha hai...???

Zoya - Anjan banaki zaroorat nahi hai... yeh sabb kya chal raha hai...??? Ghar ke same tamasha kyun kar rahe hai...???

Asad - Mein kar raha hoon ya aap kar rahe hai...??? Agar aap mere saath waapass ajayenge koi bhi tamasha karne ki zaroorat nahi padegi...

Zoya - Mein sapne mein bhi aapke saath nahi chalungi...

Zoya turned to leave, but stopped at one step and turned back...

Zoya - Aur ek baat, Ayaan se yeh sabb bakwaas ideas lena band kijiye... Agar kudki dimaag hai toh woh use kijiye...

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Phone Conversation:

Asad - Plan flop hogaya hai Ayaan...!!!

Ayaan - Plan flop hogaya hai aur aap iss ke liye kush ho rahe hai...???

Asad - of course mein bahot zyada kush hoon aaj...

Ayaan - Kyun Mona ne aapka naam le liya hai kya...???

Asad - Abb nahi toh baad mein lelenge... Par unhone bahot acchi baat kaha hai...

Ayaan - Kya..???

Asad - Unhone yeh kaha hai ki mujhe aapse bakwass ideas lena bandkarke kud ki dimaag ko kaam pe lagana chahiye...

Ayaan - matlab... Mona ko pata tha ki yeh mera idea hai...

Asad - Ha...

Ayaan - par iss mein kush hone wale baat kya hai bhai jaan...???

Asad - unhone yeh kaha ki mein kudka dimaag use karoon, matlab woh waapass ana chate hai... Isse badi baat kya ho sakti hai...

Ayaan - Ha bhai jaan... Exactly... Par aap karne kya wale hai...???

Asad - Mera style mein ek plan taiyaar hai... uska execution kal hoga...

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Thanks for reading... Please do like and comment...

Edited by VindhyaMounika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Look who is here!!!


Zoya - Mein ek aise insaan ke saath apna naam kaise jodu, jo meri mooh se kud ka naam nahi suna chahta tha...??? Jo insaan meri chavi se bhi door rehna chahta tha, jo uss hawa se saas lena badd kismati samajhta tha, jiss hawa mein meri saase sama hua hai.. uss insaan ko har janam mein, mein saath kaise doon...???


For the avobe para, Hats off Janni
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Hey, i jst Realised, M 1st one to COMMENT!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Glad to see u with updates after ur exams..
So cute part..

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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice update
I just loved it
I enjoyed the conversation btw ayaan n asad😊
very excited to knw asad's plan
pls update soon😊

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